OH SHITS SON.

Also, FIRST LOL WOOT

I'm excited to see where this leads.

Oh yeah, only Rainbow Dash is good enough to destroy the Apple Family. Edit: If all in Ponyville will deny me my silence, then all in Ponyville shall die.

Hehe I really enjoyed it :D kinda ironic that yesterday I typed rocket to insanity into my iPod and there were 2 stories, now there are 3. Please continue.

Hmm, a few literary mistakes, but other than that, I really enjoyed this first chapter. It even matches the style of the original Rocket to Insanity nicely! Looking forward to a new chapter!

>>375550375550

Im not excited to see where this goes.

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Im getting out of here

Cheers

~iraqlobstah

when i saw "rocket to insanity" i thought someone FINALLY uploaded the original one...

turns out to be just another sequel/remake....

>>375769375769 RUN... RUN WHILE YOU STILL CAN

That was really good! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

>>375952375952 sorry to dissapoint

>>375700375700 Well any critiques are really appretiated. This was my first ever attempt at writing a story for the internet to see.

375603 Did you come up with that?

What the hay?! Tracked!

Oh just make her confess already

OH GOD ALMIGHTY!

This is going to end bad one way or another.....

Oh my goddesses, oh Applejack, why you?

No, not Scoots.... she never did anything to deserve that.

>>378257378257 No but she was an easy target.

>>378267378267 and now Dashie will feel Big Macintosh's wrath... that is unless she is stronger than Mac.

>>378275378275 And also depends on who is fighting BM

Yay... revenge.

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This story is the first one in a long while that just pulled me in and didn't let go

>>379440379440 I'm glad you liked it. It's my first ever fan fic.

More chapters tomorow.

>>379455379455 YAAAY!

OH SHIT

IT JUST GOT REAL

BLOOD AND THUNDER, LOK'TAR OGAR, FOR THE APPLE FAMILY!

What the hell is Celestia doing? She's supposed to be looking for Pinkie's killer and she ain't even around when people are screaming their asses off.   Such a troll.

Sooo many chapters in one day yayyyyy :D

Overall it was very good, but there were numorous spelling, and grammerical flaws. Also it doesn't reflect on the known phsych very realisticaly, but realy who wants to dwell on some minor flaws, when it is so AWESOME! The story is gripping and exciting. I loved it.

>>381314381314 Thanks you for your feedback. And thanks for your honest opinion. This was my first ever fanfic that I've made and I wasn't sure what kind of reaction I was going to get. I was never really much of a good gramma or spelling master, even now when I'm a collage.

I can only learn from my mistakes if I know about them.

Again, thanks for feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

HOLY SHIT! Your so evil, i love it

Their deaths are the furthest things from being sad,  thoughts of revenge and how the murderer didn't want to do it prevent sadness.

I have to ask this, but WHY WHY DASHIE??

Yes, good, they will turn her back to the light side, only so she can say goodbye and be banished to the sun.

>>385458385458 Maybe things arn't as simple as they look

Ahm sho shad wight naw

To be continued.

These are the three words i dread most when getting involved in a story.

But overall a very good story.

eeeyup

ever notice in other fics its RD that dies? now its her who's killing ponys...

>>383785383785 because she was murdered in all the other fics!

>>385830385830 ohoho, clever author you!

oh Celestia, whats she up to now.

is this the first Rocket to insanity i wanna read ALL the stories

>>457368457368 this is a sequel to the origonal Rocket to insanity :)

>>459358459358 were can i find it

>>462286462286 Google docs. Just type "Rocket To Insanity" you should get it.

no...not scootaloo

yay! scootaloo is still alive!    Be careful Big Mac.  

Try listening to some music from Amnesia while reading this...creepy stuff man.  

Pippy? What's a Pippy?

oh man...

if i were rainbow (not saying she should do this, im just saying if it were me.) id kill my self, but confess first

if i were rainbow (not saying she should do this, im just saying if it were me.) id kill my self, but confess first.

poor rainbow

R.I.P. applejack    

......

oh no...     vs

holy shit rainbow is chuky!

i just tried to cheer my self up from this by saying "sunshine sunshine ladybugs awake, clap your hooves together and do a little shake."....it didnt work

Why does rainbow have voices in her head? Is their something i should read before this?

>>534410534410 This is a sequel to the origonal rocket to insanity story.

I will never be able to listen to fluttershy's singing the same ever again

Being crazy doesn't mean you're insane, but being insane means you're crazy...

>>585398585398 What? ....

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Vats dat sandvitch? Kill them all? Good idea!

>>585398585398

Come again?

>>585508585508 For me there are 3 levels of insanity, crazy being the first stage, insane being second, Bat shit insane is the third stage

stalked.

Caught that my little dashie reference in the letter.

Have I ever mentioned that this is the story that led me to this site?

I.. Am... Very very scared to read this especially before night for dash will get me uhhhhhh fuck I'm just getting out of here                           oh shit fuck fuck ahhhhhhhhh!

And here I am scared to click the next chapter button

I will never look at Rainbow Dash the same way again

I rather have cupcakes happen than have scoots die

HORRAY! scootaloos alive!! the crusaders LIVE! Be careful big mac

.vs. dis gonna be good...

1. I read this story in ONE day!

                     2. I need to find out what happens NEXT!!

the remaining elements....

....

Scootaloo?!

No...Pleasseeaahh no.

I'm at ease now. But, eh..I don't know if he'll live..

He lived after all...For now

OH SHIT DIS GON BE GOOODDD

Aw shit son best chapter yet...

Sorry to Big Mac fans, but that was good.

>>412671412671 You have a valid point there, it isn't fair.

It's like the bitches actually WANT to murder her!

>>865067865067 i suppose what comes around goes around yes?

"Disappear! Disappear into oblivion!"

Really, Dash is acting like Dark Tsubasa!

Great! Now the demons spread to Big Mac. I'm sorry, but at this point, they're both villains and psychopaths.

Rainbow Dash defeated Big Mac

WITH ONE OF HER EYES GOUGED OUT!!!!!!

>>865067865067

What are you all talking about? She is only killed in Cupcakes, no where else! Where else is she murdered in? In fact, it was all balanced out after Rainbow Factory if you ask me!

>>385830385830 they could blast her with the Elememts of Harmony. It worked on Luna!

WHAT! WHAT! WHAAAAAAAAAT!

To be continued? TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!?

HOW DARE YOU

Please, please write the sequel! FAST!!!

Dawn of a dying Pegasus. Fuck yeah.

I read this while listening to the song "Dreams of Cruelty" from the TF2 Meet the Pyro video.  I might never sleep again.  

Celestia! use your magic to go back in time! you can stop this!

>>620673620673

I think i might in the first stage.