That was damn good, why are the chapters so short though? This all looks like part of a prologue

is it just old me or you are coping my story?

That was good, if really short. I agree with Your Antagonist, this all looks like part of a prologue and, if you put them all together, they would make for a decent lengthed chapter.

Yay!

*jumps up and down with excitement and anticipation*

Encore!  Encore, mate!

Got here by accident. Thanks alot. There goes 5 minutes of my day.

GREAT STORY!!!

WOO-HOO!!!

This is going to be so !

That was a fun chapter to read. One other thing... you're thirteen!? I feel so... old... and... weird...

What?  This was written by a thirteen-year-old?

Way to go, buddy... shatter the stereotype!

This is awesome!

Batmane is born!

As a fellow young teenage Fimfic writer, I's just like to say that you're a pleasant outlier of this generation's youth, a person that cares about proper grammar at such an age. Keep up the good work!

Some young teenagers can write, and can write well. I might be one of them, but I'm not sure. I like the story so far.

"No, none at all."

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You what he needs

An epic costume

Btw keep up the good work

whoot whoot cloud crashers

This story is fantastic. Update soon.

Wait why was Dash eating eggs?

boom. Headshot

Nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh nuh BATMAN!

*gravely ass voice*

It's not who you are underneath, it's what you do that defines you...

keep up the good work... for JUSTICE!

moar please

Fantastic work! Hope it gets an update soon.

We need more, this is a great story and there is no reason that it should end here

keep up the great work

AAAAHHHHHGGGGGGG!!!! You just killed Batman in the shortest chapter in history! AAAHHHHHHGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!

Batman woudn't scream I'm a pony. But you get thumbs up anyway.

longer chapters

BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT

i think that the second song goes here in this video if there shall be a epic as hell fight

Of course teenagers can write! I just turned 16 and I have a story done and two stories in progress that have great likes/dislikes ratios.

has the joker lost his mind? why kill Batman? what will he do without him? go back to ripping off mob dealers? no sir

In a race, Dash would win.

In a fight, Batman would CERTAINLY win.