You think you know this story. You don't. One night at Berry Punch's bar, two jilted ponies strike up a conversation over some hard cider. The rest is drunken history.
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... and said, "Ow."
4055222
heh.
4055235 read the name of the chapter and then my comment.
4055248
...i would think it was obvious...
4055256 anyways, good story I liked it.
Well, this was a fun little ride^^ Cant really decide who was the best character in this^^ Berry, Bon Bon, Lyra... they were all pretty good^^
Great job^^
For a guy with a (admittedly awesome) gimmick name you write a damn good little story. Followed, faved and upvoted.
Hm, I do like well-written fics that make Lyra something a little more unique than the typical fandom interpretation.
So I like this one.
Nicely done! Cute story
You're a big fanboi of SS&E, aren't you?
Nice story, btw. Bon Bon will never learn.
Well that was cute :)
4057075
what gave it away.
This was pretty good.
Am I correct in assuming Einhander helped with this project?
4057593
Hmmm, je ne sais quoi.
I loved it, this is now my favorite lyraXBonBon fic I have read so far.
One complain though:
I'm not sure why Bon Bon's father would be against her dating a musician if he was a musician himself.
Anyway, I liked Berry's personality a lot,
Good story,
~Leonzilla
4059552
ha! go figure, yeah?
should be fixed in but a moment.
4060099
the father simply said she never learned.
Bon Bon was simply applying that to that particular lesson.
4060292 hmm. Okay I'll buy it; but the way it was said it looked like the two sentences were related even if that wasn't your intention originally.
~Leonzilla
Pretty cool, though one thing tripped me up...
She can't play the Lyre? *blinks* Lol.
Anywho, woot!
Loved it!
that right there was a stupidly enjoyable read. upvote fav and welcome to the now 6 fics i make it a point to reread every month.
This was sweet, but I don't see it ending well. Bonds forged in booze don't always last long out of it.
Still, as the saying went, there is no tomorrow. With the story ended, the lovers' fate could be anything, and so is everything and nothing. Unless someone continues this, they are forever suspended in a perfect, apple-scented moment of love and intoxication.
In any case, thank you for a most enjoyable story.
4060292 why not, "I never learn," rather than "I never learned."
That's a good one. A play on her name and a little twist for the end.
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i, personally, have been considering on making this into something more...
it does have that potential, yeah?
4076569 THIS, good sir, has earned yet ANOTHER like and fave.
This was nice, and really funny. I've always been a sucker for Lyrabon. If you were to - hypothetically, of course - turn this into a longer story, I'd definitely stick around for the ride.
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I enjoyed this a lot.
Why were they angry at each other to begin with?
How could a bar run out of liquor, which is a shelf-stable commodity?
How can Lyra drain an entire mug of carbonated cider that quickly? It's actually pretty impressive.
When will we see the username "kiltsandcollapses" appear?
4107658
we quite enjoyed that addition.
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and i'm glad you enjoyed it. thank you!
4164666
meh. wasn't the focus, really.
Have you guys realized what an absolute coup it is to have a story with 208 upvotes and all of one downvote? That's deeply weird.
And awesome.
Daaawww! Thanks for an awesome, sweet little story =)
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wow... dude, thank you.
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No problem! It's a good story. I like that it's not a typical LyraBon/TaviScratch story, especially with how Lyra and Bon Bon aren't just one-dimensional characters. (Seriously, if I see another "Lyra is obsessed with hands/humans" fic, I'll puke.
Anywho, it's a nice, simple one-shot. It tells the story and then it ends before it can overstay its welcome. Can't really complain about that.
And adorably fun. Bravo.
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it was certainly a blast to write, that's for sure!
why is there only 1 fic from you
Nicely done story here. The proper level of drunkenness came across perfectly, and you did a great job capturing the two characters, as well as the beleaguered barkeep. Perfect for a quick, fun read!
5077195
certainly what we went for, chief
thanks!
Mildly irritating (but I guess near-inevitable) "human" reference aside, I really liked this. Nice interplay between the principals, goes along at a cracking pace and actually has an OctaScratch background that doesn't make me want to tear my eyes out. Also, fun.
5670757
human reference? mind explaining?
5681724 Purely personal prejudice on my part! This bit:
I'm not terribly fond of this particular bit of Lyra fanon, that's all. No comment intended on the quality of the writing, just that I didn't particularly like that line.
Man, I totally forgot the lyricist pun at the end.
Well, that happened.
awesome, hilarious and heart warm can't wait to see more from you
I always admire Lyra's optimism. It fills me with determination
. I do have this slight urge for Tavi and Lyra, but VInyl is still most preffered 
. And I expected the candymaker to pass out. She's been there for two hours or so I presume. I guess passing out in the streets was one way to do it 
Can't remember where I learned this line "Makes so much sense it rhymes!"
. And finally, there's just a lot of punatics here 
. But the last oe was really neat. Might want to update your story to comedy. 
PS: Usually more talkative, but I'm using a different laptop atm. Kinda makes me unease ;P
I approve :V