Chapter 19: Story Entendre
"Now before I leave you girls have to promise me that you six will now get anymore involved into this situation." Celestia has said to Twilight and her friends
before departing back to Canterlot.
"But Princess you can't be serious! Our friend needs help, we can't just sit here and do nothing while Kriece is in danger." Twilight needed to do something, she had to. If not for Kriece then
for Equestria.
"Yeah Princess, we can't just sit around while Kriece AND Equestria is in danger!" Rainbow Dash had shouted.
"I must insist that we help Princess, I agree with Twilight and Rainbow on how we can't just sit idly by."
"Now Rarity, girls. You all have already done enough as it is. You all freed my sister from Nightmare's clutches and saved Equestria from an eternal night. I believe you all deserve some rest While my guards handle the situation."
"But we did all that with the help of Kriece! If it weren't for him we wouldn't have succeeded." Twilight never thought of disobeying her mentor but this was something she had to do, with the help of her friends.
Celestia sighed knowing her pupil she wouldn't give up not after only half the battle had been won. "I guess if I cannot persuade all of you in not helping." She lowered her head and let out a sigh. "I will have My captains help you on your mission."
"Thank you Princess."
"I think you all should get ready for tomorrow. Now I must take my leave, rest well we have a long day ahead of us." And with that Celestia left the treehouse.
"WOOO! DID YOU HEAR THAT?! The captains are going to be with us! I get to meet Vale!" Rainbow Dash was screaming with joy as she flew around the room.
"Now, now Dash stop flying around Twilight had just finished restocking her book and you're make my hair look like its been in a tornado!"
"Hehe sorry bout that Rarity. So what's the plan exactly? I say we go find Kriece, kick that ghost pony's flank and save Equestria!"
"I fo' one agree with Dash here but the thing is how we gon' find Kriece? That Nightmare coulda taken him halfway across Equestria by now."
"I think I may have a solution to that problem Applejack. Lucky me that for about a week now I've been working on a specialized tracking spell comprised of quite a few spells carefully weaved together that can attune, locate, and lead us to anything we want. So long as we have something apart of it, basically DNA or anything apart of what we want to find. " Twilight walked over to her desk to bring out several sheets of notes and pictures of runes.
"Alrighty then, I got it all mesmerized." Twilight levitated a stick of chalk and cleared up a section of the floor and begun to draw the necessary runes for the intricate spell. "While I check this out can you girls try to find something that belonged to Kriece? Maybe some hair or clothing."
"Ooo! His music box thingy! Would that work Twilight?" Pinkie Pie hopped over with ipod in mouth when suddenly a song began to play at full volume.
"Pinkie! WHAT IS THAT NOISE?!" Rarity covered her ears.
"Pinkie shut it off!"
Pinkie had been to busy head banging to the music to hear them. "THIS IS SO GOOD! I should definitely play this at my next party!"
Applejack moved over to Pinkie Pie and swiped the ipod away and it instantly turned off. "Here you go Twi'."
Twilight took the ipod and placed it next to her eyeing it intensely. "I don't know whether this device would work or not hmmm..."
"Um I found his manebrush, would that be helpful?"
"Huh oh yes! Thank you Fluttershy." Twilight levitated the manebrush and took out a few strands of hair. "Good, now all I need to do is draw the runes, place the hair and add a bit of magic."
"Let's save it for tomorrow sugarcube, we're gonna need a the rest we can get."
"I guess so. Alright girls here's the plan, we pack up all the things we need and then after that we all gather here. By then I should have finished with the drawing."
"So let me get this straight, you're a ghost that possessed a stallion? I'm not buying it." Knightmare looked at Rave, arching an eyebrow.
"I need not your approval."
"If you really are why'd you possess him and not some powerful dragon or something?"
"This body is needed, he is quite valuable to some ponies I despise. Though I wish he would be quiet."
"What do you mean be quiet?"
"I needed to move him into his mind when I "moved in" but the con is that I can see and hear everything he thinks and speaks of. It has been a very traumatic experience for me."
"Oh that's pretty interesting."
And here I thought after you telling her that she would rebel and become the hero of the story, stopping you and Astataroth, saving all of Equestria.
*AND IF SHE DID THAT I WOULD HAVE JUST VAPORIZED HER ON THE SPOT.
Exactly why it didn't happen, plot twist are always leave a bad taste though I do t think her dying is considered a plot twist in the story.
*WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT THIS TIME? STORY? ? PLOT TWIST?
Well the way I figure, I'm in a fanfic made by an idiot writer with nothing better to do.
*ENLIGHTEN ME ON HOW YOU CAME TO THAT CONCLUSION?
Well it's got all the generic things a fanfic has! Tragic backstory, obvious antagonist and protagonist, and a few plot twist here and there. I mean c'mon! It's got H.i.E written all over us. I'm surprised I haven't been shipped with countless mares or you for that matter. HEY WRITER I GOT A SERIOUS CASE OF BLUE BALLS OVER HERE!
*I DEEM YOU CLINICLY INSANE.
One by one by one as the ponies march by, they steal my sanity. So screw you and your soda machine!
Rave looked at her surroundings as they made their way down an empty street. The buildings were all empty though lights were still on. The stores were large, the door built for a dragon to enter; some had some didn't. The stores all sold regular things you would find in any other town.
"Why is the place so empty? Where is everypony?"
One guard looked back. "They are at the cathedral listening to scholars and philosophers argue. Pointless if you ask me."
"Where are we even going? My legs hurt."
"The castle." Answered one of the guards.
"But that's so far away!"
"Quit your whining and deal with it, I would like some peace and quiet, listening to two different ponies is hard enough when one happens to be crazy and the other a complainer."
"Sheesh fine..."
"Good."
"I'm hungry."
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Well DAYUM! This took freakin forever! Screw your face Florida! Making me waste $1000 on a bunch of stuff, but hey I bought myself a Burberry trench coat for a freaking unbelievable price.
Anyways I got to finish Pony Never Cry before I write Chapter 20 and when I finish Gypsy Pony & Tramps I'm going to be writing a new story squee~
Rate it like you mean it, yes, yes
Comment til your breath-less, ah, ah
Cause I got soul in my writing, yeah, yeah
I ain't going nowhere, so, so
I won't stop til the story is over or break every bone in my body, ah, ah
First and I love insanity
Hay man how ya been?
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Who doesn't!
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/)^ε^(\ thanks, always warms the black abyss where my lead heart used to be.
199642quite a few sane people
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and I'd tell em to suck on my cvi'che
200448Eu nu speek orice rommanian dar eu am un ghetou intr-un fel folosit ca translator care nu mai pot schimba inapoi in engleza
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lulz bro its Spanish, cvi'che is Peruvian food
but this is in my dialect, Ay me penou len ge te jan oh cal catao chi day
by the way I don't speak Romanian , we speak our own language called Gomanez/Romanez
201824i know it was spanish i live on key west i just felt like screwing around cause romanian is the legal term for the gypsy languege if my book is correct anyway i just couldnt resist (key west is the closes part of america to cuba only 90 miles) though i don't know spanish i can at least recognize it with an about 75% accruacy (that is an estemite...obviously) and it would have been better to say that they can suck on your whellos (i know i fucked up the spelling but it's suposed to be the spanish word for the male sex organ and if you're still confused than i realy don't know a more obvious way to say its meaning while still sounding smart...and no i have no reson to soumnd smart besides to piss off people)
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Key West?! HO shit fuck dude I was just there! LITERALLY I stayed there for three days cause I'm from California and I'm visiting Florida, beautiful town though that highway is a killer, broooooo we coulda hung out or do some crazy shit over on Duval street was it? Fucking lulz I was driving down that street and saw a couple of drag hookers and I busted out laughing when I saw a guy go up to one of them anyways I visited that southern most point thing with the giant prop thing, it was a crazy thing, never woulda thought I'd be there. Love that rains so much.
Your book is full of it itself, I'm legit! and I don't speak Spanish lul, just English and my dialect
202210i know it was made about 20 years ago but I was bored so I read it also I avoid most of the tourism points besides duval since there's a circle K on it also their called drag queens and weird thing is my dad owns the 801 bar (the drag bar you saw) but he's completely straight and it's the funniest thing when you see people's faces when they find out he's straight
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I know they're called drag queens but I like to call the hookers
A straight guy who owns a drag bar, your dad knows what the people want
I miss California
202832wannan know why he owns a gay bar? easy kids cost money but gayguys only aopt and not often so the math is
+=
+=extra money for liqouer
so to recap no children equals more booze money and i thought you already left florida?
also who best 3 ponys?
1-Zecora
2-Logan (yes OC'S count if you made them but only one)
3-Twilight
but
+ = = even more booze
number of booze = number of kids x stress level + number of pills they take for said stress
I'm still in Florida for one more day (leaving tomorrow) I just left key west.
Honestly everypony is best pony, even Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. Though if I had to choose three...
1.Rarity
2.Applejack
3.Luna
Rarity is number one because I'm like her somewhat. I love fashion, I'm a clothes type of guy. I also have ideas for clothing though I never do anything about it mostly because if I did my family would lseriously think I'm gay.
Applejack is second because I respect the hard work she does and I can relate cause I'm in the construction buisness, I work with asphalt, concrete, seal coat, cement, anything that has to do with driveways and I can tell you how hard work is (I sometimes shovel 3-10 tons of 400 degree asphalt by myself) but one thing is for sure, I enjoy it .
and Luna is third because I like the night :3