The Courtship Fall

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Love changes relationships, though not to the point where they are no longer recognisable. Twilight loves to go flying with her marefriend, but sometimes... sometimes her marefriend can still be her teacher.

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ApparitionsShadow

ApparitionsShadow #1 · Mar 7th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Misago

Misago #2 · Mar 7th, 2014 · · ·

Hope you enjoyed it.

Yes. Yes we did. Very much so, in fact. A very beautiful Twilestia story.
Loved Unbound Train, loved this one.

Flutterpony

Flutterpony #3 · Mar 7th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Fantastic! Fun and romantic and pure adorable!

TheLastBrunnenG

TheLastBrunnenG #4 · Mar 7th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Adorable!

Why don't you submit this to the Bi-Monthly Twilestia Contest? Just post a link in the thread, and tag Knight of Cerebus so he knows you're posting. Deadline is today, lower limit is just 1000 words, so you're right there.

Karrakaz

Karrakaz #5 · Mar 7th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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Huh... I might even do that...

Thanks for the idea, glad you enjoyed it. (With so many good writers actually having made an effort, I doubt it's gonna go anywhere though xD)

Bookish Delight

Bookish Delight #6 · Mar 7th, 2014 · · ·

I did enjoy it. Always fun when Celestia uses her ~~age~~ experience to put a new spin on life.

Coronet the lesser

Coronet the lesser #7 · Mar 8th, 2014 · · ·

Wow there is quite a few Twilestia's floating around at the moment. No that I'm complaining.

I actually really liked this. It was a nice little piece. Great work, as per usual with you!

Knight of Cerebus

Knight of Cerebus #8 · Mar 8th, 2014 · · ·

4047998 Everything has now been arranged. Good luck

HoofBitingActionOverload

HoofBitingActionOverload #9 · Mar 8th, 2014 · 1 · 2 ·

Cute, but not much else. I'm sure it wasn't meant to be anything more. There's only so much you can accomplish in a thousand words, I guess.

Melody Brush

Melody Brush #10 · Mar 8th, 2014 · · ·

I enjoyed it, though I feel more can be done with it. Yet it's still going in my favs.

Blue_Paladin42

Blue_Paladin42 #11 · Mar 8th, 2014 · · ·

Hee hee. Good ol' fluffy Twilestia.

tsunsu

tsunsu #12 · Mar 9th, 2014 · 3 · 1 ·

the cortship fall bit was very suprising. such a grate cuple. Good job!!

spike the mustache

spike the mustache #13 · Mar 10th, 2014 · · ·

Was so good I dont even think words can explain it so ill put a face instead

Eclipse LunarSol

Eclipse LunarSol #14 · Mar 15th, 2014 · · ·

Nice story.

ArguingPizza

ArguingPizza #15 · Mar 29th, 2014 · 1 · ·

This was great, and I like the concept of the courtship fall

vullture

vullture #16 · Jun 3rd, 2014 · 1 · ·

Nice Twilestia yet again. I like the idea of a courtship fall. Its always nice to be able to add headcanons whenever possible.

Shumiry

Shumiry #17 · Jun 15th, 2014 · 1 · ·

I too also as well like this idea... I might have to thief it. Of course, the way you depicted Twilight and Celestia was adorable. You gave me the giggles and that's almost always a good sign in a romance fic. I'd also like to point out that your writing, from a mechanical standpoint, is fantastic. The flow, your word choices, the descriptions, they're all great, and make the story much more enjoyable to read.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

PonyFan4927

PonyFan4927 #18 · Dec 9th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Now that's what I call "taking the plunge"!

AcademicPony

AcademicPony #19 · Feb 22nd, 2016 · 7 · ·

“A courtship fall?”
Celestia nodded. “Before Equestria was one nation, it was how Pegasi married.”

Now I'm picturing That One Guard who is also a history buff seeing the fall, double-taking, remembering how old Celestia is, and thinking, "did they just...?".