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If a pony's life is just a drop in a bucket, how much of a difference can they actually make?

A My Little Pony adaption of Sakevisual's debut visual novel "Ripples."

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

Eee!
I KNEW THAT PHRASE WAS .. I MEAN, I KNEW I KNEW IT!

AHA.
Great story, by the way! Reflects the VN very well, even if it's extremely similar. The visual novel is brief, heartwarming and sweet - identical to this one. :pinkiehappy:

This is a wonderful story, this is one of the stories I have been looking for in a long time. I hope you go a long way, and I hope this story lasts a while. Though I don't want to believe it, it seems the main plot will only be able to go so far. Add something big. Make it last!

369048
Ever had that feeling that there's something wrong, but you just can't put your finger on what?
I do... and now I know...
I forgot to set this as "complete" :facehoof: Sorry...
-Glassed

Well done!

You truely seemed to capture your characters veiws and personality perfectly. I really felt like I understood his reasons and motives.

Not only that but you somehow portrayed Pinkie Pie in a absolutely captivating way that I have never seen before. And I must say that I like it! :pinkiehappy:

I hope that you can continue such exellence in your future projects. Have a 'stache. :moustache:

~Signed, InfiniteBrony

369166 I shall receive your 'stache, and I shall twirl it in my chair while saying, "Si senorita, si~"
-Glassed

Weirdest thing ever happened... I have my iPod playing music in the background through my library of like... 70 pony songs. As I come to the point where Pinkie is talking about singing "Smile", it also comes on from the playlist as well...

:duck:WHAT KIND OF BLACK MAGIC ARE YOU EMPLOYING HERE!!:trixieshiftright:

369194 It's part of my powers of "This shit makes no sense". Subsection 3b :rainbowlaugh:
-Glassed

369203 Sounds legit... carry on

When I first saw this in the Googledoc ( Eeyup people, I saw this in advance) I was awestruck just how well you captured the novel in pony form.

Good to know you used the name Shoot Off (I honestly thought you wouldn't use it :twilightoops:) but glad I was able to help (You left the skype before I got to say anything else on the matter :trixieshiftleft:)

But when shall we get another chapter of "A Tale of Magic" if I may ask? (Look, I need to practise my British way of talking :twilightsheepish:)

369341 You can expect it within the week old boy... :moustache:
Translation: OMFG help me, I have tests coming up and an assignment, which makes me somewhat unable to write my chapter! :derpyderp2:
-Glassed

why does this story make me feel warm?

369888 It's just a side-effect. if it's still there in 2 days, go see a doctor. It might be contagious :trixieshiftright:
-Glassed

369900 Oh my sounds serious :twilightoops:

That was really nice. I liked it. :twilightsmile:

369109

Darn it! Well... Write more stories like this please. These types of stories tend to be the most inspirational :pinkiehappy:

Gak

I really enjoyed that Pinkie Pie was totally in character. It made this seem like it could be an episode I see one Saturday:twilightsmile:

Azu

I haven't read the VN Ripples, but I absolutely loved this. :yay:

At first the Protagonist made me frown at his comments about the kittens. I have a bit of a soft spot for cats. :pinkiesad2:

I wasn't sure what to think of the Protangonist at first. his Personality and outlook are the opposite of mine. I'm very much like pinkie, i love to make people smile and laugh and try to find something positive for funny in most things in life. :pinkiesmile: so his very pesamistic attitude didn't sit well with me at first, but i loved how pinkies infectious optimism and happiness broke through to him, it made me smile and feel a lot better there at the end. :twilightsmile:

i love a story a story that can stir my emotions. be it positively or negatively, and even better if both. Great job. :raritywink:

All my thumbs and favorites are belong to you. :moustache:

I've always liked these kinds of stories

Keep writing my friend

Also, do you have a link to somewhere I can buy the original book?

as if I'm not reading enough.:twilightblush:

613052 As a matter of fact, this story is free to read on their website.
But I found it through the Chrome webstore... Surprisingly enough :derpytongue2:
-Glassed

Thank you very much

I'm off to read!

369194
...You have about 40 songs more than you're supposed to.
Black magic indeed.

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