After the events of "A Canterlot Wedding," Queen Chrysalis is about to die, after having been flung hundreds of miles away and through an apartment roof.
Bold Words is the owner of said apartment, a struggling author who always wanted an epic adventure of his own. When Public Enemy Number One comes falling (literally) into his life, near-dead, helpless, and in dire need of assistance, will he be able to resist his adventurelust and do what any good citizen should do?
Or is he going to do something ill-advised, incredibly stupid, very dangerous, and ADVENTUROUS?
Most ponies that know him would take heavy bets on the latter. Too bad for the changeling queen.
(Thanks to Yula568, or Elia Vraay, for the cover art from her DeviantART Page.)
Chapters (10)
Hm. Well I haven't. this done before, and you did manage to make "Luna on Earth's moon" interesting.
You have my attention.
Well...this intro was certainly dark, and also quite enthralling. Can't wait to see what happens next.
This is just begging for a joke.
Well this is off to a good start, I'm excited to see more.
Looks like this story is progressing smoothly. I'm interested where you are going to take this fic; keep up the good work!
This is certainly interesting.
I'll be watching.
Oh, how Bold.
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I see what you did there.
4087127 I just realized your avatar had a reflection of Luna on its visor.
Oh hey, I forgot about this one. Good to see it getting updated.
Why does nopony read the comics anymore?!
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For this, I consider the comics non-canon (as they have stated they are.)
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1. They're canon. Exept the contradiction for the writer of Daring Do... they could'nt have known that, y'know? Just because the show is canon over the comics doesn't mean the comics arent canon.
2. They're canon, too.
3. Also they're canon.
4. If you say they arent canon im gona kill you in your sleep.
5. Oh and, did i mention they're canon?
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I refer you to this excellently-written post.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/197119/worldbuilding-alliance/thread/39778/treating-the-mlpfim-comic-as-canon-why-its-not-a-good-idea
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1. You coulda used that fancy add link button just left to add image.
2. That post = Horseapplestorm, nopony cares about the Star Wars expanded universe... and i just realise something.
Canon means:
..Yeah... whit THAT... lets say that the comic most definitely arent canon AT ALL. Damn you internet, for you over misuse of words.
Well, anyways, the comics are official and stuff, so they're the official comics and well they are so your argument is like, super invalid.
Star Wars is a exeption. THAT story is like, tottaly screwed up in 1000 ways. Not saying its bad, just the story is like.. super duper random. So anyways, the story fits in, your argument is invalid and blahblahlbalbhla you will be like too long dint read so, well, bye.
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For your information, I read every comment on every one of my stories. Canon is also meant, in Internet terms, to be "Material officially endorsed by the creators to be part of the continuity." As such, no, the comics aren't part of the show continuity-- their events don't bear on the show. They're more of a spinoff or related series, but at some future point that may change. Until events in the comics directly effect the show and creators state that, it's not canon and official to the TV Universe. As such, I'm not considering them in the course of this story.
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k bai
This story deserves much more.
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I'm sorry about the no-updates thing. I lost a chapter, and that really took me off inspiration for this story for several weeks while I updated everything else.
But I'll get right to work on a new chapter, I promise you!
4591512 you miss understood me I mean this story deserves much more likes, views and likes than it currently has.
Oh dear lord...
4349238 Official statements say the comics are canon only if you WANT them to be. I dont... At least so far as Chrysalis in the first ones goes.
4591868 if you think so, why not talk about it? Any help getting views for this story would be appreciated.
Wat
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Really?
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I'm having difficultly articulating how off your last scene felt...
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[Check's the story's description]
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[Glosses over past chapters]
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[Writes up several flames... deletes flames... re-re-reads past chapters]
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Oh... Bad, broken-down neighborhood... Now I can actually believe that the random street mugging could happen. Though, I still think that you threw-off your story's-pacing... a lot. By having your character getting held up by the muggers---instead of immediately returning to his fixing-Chrysalis-montage---the frantic-character-momentum you've built has been brought to a screeching halt. Doesn't feel right...
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4596424 It does feel a bit wrong to see this right after the work he did, but hopefully it'll turn out to be alright ;)
Well shit. I'd say there goes the neighborhood, but my guess is that it's been gone for a while now.
Then bold says "THINK FAST" throws a bottle to catch at each and starts kicking the living shit out of those people.
Oh ho ho. This is bad.
And then the newly empowered Bold turned into a badass and whupped them Batman style.
Oooooh ssssssssssshiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitt.
Damn, Bold is a junky and a killer.
Interesting, very interesting.
Remember, it's self-defense, so it's alright.
Yiff cliff hangers.
Not bad, the chapters are too short, but the quality is good.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
Busted
Wait what now? You never mentioned Discord before?
Okay, I had a feeling, but I wasn't positive. Glad we got confirmation. Now we're back to Bold needing a bit of help.
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Pony-talk for "speak of the devil".
Also, too many overdoses on changeling venom can transform a pony into a changeling.
I never knew th- WHY ARE YOU STICKING YOUR TONGUE IN MY DRINK!?!
4794580 Why did i get a dislike for asking? And am i supposed to know this from the top of my head?
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I didn't do that.
Yeah, why punish when you can correct?
I'm still not speaking to you, Zephyr.
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It's the phrase meaning, simply, "Speak of the devil," or its full iteration, "Speak of the devil and he shall appear." Just a pony alteration.
4800587 Its just not so clear... I mean why Discord is the Devil.
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It's just a saying-- it's doesn't mean that Discord is literally the devil. Don't take it literally.
4805805 No i get that... Its just that the worldplay needs to have some sense and i just didn't find it at the time.
"don't"?
Alone I think
oooo, interesting.