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Well....that was....original
I… I cannot even. I simply am unable to even.
My brain was not ready
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Neither was mine.
i dont even know any more
I love the pose Twilight has when they say, "OMigosh!Who dyes your tail?!"
In this case? "YOUR BUTT IS BANISHED."
Oh Jesus have mercy...
the empire should watch out: That are the first signs.
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You prayers have been heard. We are sending an orbital strike to your location ASAP. But We had to send Michael out for pizza first, so it may be a little while. Especially if Michael gets anchovies. Then we won't be able to get Gabriel to stop eating for about two weeks. Just bear with us.
~God.
P.S. We approve of this story. Have a like.
4039861 the N.O.P.E. is ready to fire sir, just give us the command
......
This is fuck.
WELCOME TO FUCK!
To quote a comment by someone somewhere else on this website:
This is a pretty creative story.
Welp.... I dont know how to properly comment on this fic. I just dont know
I don't know what I expected.
Princesses shouldn't eat tacos.
Twilight was the butt of that joke, the story was a gas, and it was all well in the end. Now I am off to take a shower, and cry myself to sleep...
Well, I give up.
Okay, I know I'm tired when I read this description and laugh.
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NO words describe this
images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111011031057/mlp/images/e/e1/Confused_Applejack_is_confused_S01E04.png I have no idea how to respond...
Hahaha
wait what did I just read
Well... uhh... most stories I comment on... It's usually some sort of review... so... I'm gonna do my best...
...
... It was....uh.... funny? 
No seriously. I found this story pretty funny, and I defenately had a good laugh. Your writing style does have a little to be desired, and I'm not sure that the Titanic, Hindenburg, Challenger, New Orleans and 9/11 references were really necessary. I personally thought that they were pointless, and the only reason that they were there, was for the sake of them being there. As was
But I wasn't expecting the best writing when I saw the title, to be honest. That being said, it kept me laughing all the way through, even though toilet humour isn't really my thing.
I'd rate it
/10
That's all I can come up with for this story... it's too silly for me to do an in-depth review.
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Man, now I want a baby tatzlwurm for a pet. That sounds awesome.
...Yes, that's what I get from this story, why do you ask?
I can't imagine what
looked like, I just can't!
Wat is this I don't even
This seems apropriate:
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...Fuck.
Think I'm gonna move out.
Of the universe.
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Brilliant. This story tells us the meaning of life.
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Hereis one WAT... it is my gift to you.
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I THINK I PEED!
I laughed so hard.
I've heard some great fart (jokes) in my time, but this one takes the taco. Kinda glad you stopped at the fifth iceberg joke.
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...I think you broke my brain
thanks from showing me that no matter my age im still a kid at heart lol
tis butt a scratch
did ya see what I did there?
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Twilight... how could you?
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Thank you for taking the time out to post a review. Props for making the effort even on a story such as this.
I disagree with you on the iceberg analogy adding noting, (if I didn't, I'd have whacked it with the editing stick.) I personally thought the idea of a pyromaniac iceberg going after a blimp was rather silly. The analogy does get more crass and insensitive as it progresses, but that just adds impact to Celestia's outrage.
Oh, speaking of whacking things with the editing stick, here's something that I may of may not have removed from this story:
Baby seals.
This story has a really good plot.
Fart! (To quote Climbing Ivy)
That was hilarious.
4048745 I know it's nonsensical...but I've got to put my serious hat on for just a minute. How are Celestia and Luna going to account for the grotesque public humiliation of their respective friend/pupil (as well as a public figure), and how is Celestia in particular going to write off galactic genocide? All for the sake of a lopsided punishment that could've been avoided simply by teleporting all of Twilight to another room with an industrial air filter and no firelight?
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Public mutilation? Eh, Twilight got better so there was no real harm done.
Galactic genocide? Given the scale difference presented in this story I doubt Celestia even knew that anything was there in the first place. That's a bigger pony than we're used to seeing.
Sure, she could have handled the situation differently, but she was putting on a show for the sake of the foreign dignitaries gathered there.
4051371 Well, she did blow away the Milky Way with, er, the power of friendship. Regardless, well-executed revenge against both elder princesses is more than called for.
(e: also, humiliation, not mutilation - in front of guards, castle staff and (albeit relieved) foreign dignitaries; word can't not spread)
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Sorry, I read that wrong. Twilight was going to be pretty embarrassed regardless just for creating a scene in front of the foreign dignitaries. She kind of brought that on herself.
Celestia's, er, unusual punishment would, if anything, distract from that. Since not too many ponies were involved, they could cover the whole thing up as a magical mishap if they really wanted to.
...do you have a picture of how Twilight looked like when her butt was banished?
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Something a bit like this [source] except taller, skinnier and without the tail.
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4051864 Thanks! I had some problems imaginating it.