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Brony_Fife

Joined February 2012
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A simple writer with complicated taste.

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#1 · Chapter 2 · 16w, 16h ago · · ·

this is gonna be good!:heart:

#2 · Chapter 2 · 16w, 15h ago · · ·

Glad to see the sequel.

#3 · Chapter 2 · 16w, 15h ago · · ·

:pinkiehappy:

#4 · Chapter 2 · 16w, 14h ago · 1 · ·

I am SOOO pumped to read this! :heart::pinkiehappy:

#5 · Chapter 2 · 16w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

Dracula might as well put neon signs all over the windows: ‘KIDNAPPED PRINCESSES: TWO FOR ONE DEAL.

*Rainbow walks into castle*

Rainbow: "Alright, Dracula, where's the princess!?"

*Dracula grins sinisterly*

Dracula: "Sorry, little pony, but your princess is in another castle."

#6 · Chapter 2 · 16w, 13h ago · · ·

I eagerly await more chapters, good author sir/madam. :twilightsmile:

#8 · Chapter 2 · 16w, 8h ago · · ·

>>4521871

Certainly took my sweet time in putting it out. :twilightblush:

>>4522580

I'm very much a sir.

>>4524001

Wrongo. It's a Wharg.

#9 · Chapter 2 · 16w, 4h ago · · ·

>>4524056 if it's based off portrait of ruin..... brauner is the big cheese right now (please I hope Alucard helps and joins rainbow

#10 · Chapter 2 · 15w, 6d ago · · ·

>>4524056 WOOPS, my bad:twilightblush:. Well, don't blame me either, those doggies only showed up in only two games in the original timeline, and they've never been a real threat to make them memorable, unlike their more common bipedal cousins, who are EVERYWHERE, THEY EVEN COME IN JAGUAR, TIGER AND BAT FLAVORS :ajbemused:

#11 · Chapter 2 · 15w, 6d ago · · ·

>>4522470 wrong game franchise :pinkiecrazy:. Sorry, couldn't resist :rainbowlaugh:

#12 · Chapter 2 · 15w, 5d ago · · ·

YOU TOO SHALL BE MY PUPPET
Well I hope they remember to put boxes in front of the iron maidens. :pinkiecrazy::rainbowwild:

#13 · Chapter 3 · 13w, 4d ago · · ·

I enjoy the shipping between RD and Shatterstorm and the tense atmosphere that's surrounding ther Royal Guards' base.

#14 · Chapter 3 · 13w, 4d ago · · ·

After

“...Does that[]/i answer your question?” asks Roaring Yawn.
the entire chapter is in italics

#15 · Chapter 3 · 13w, 4d ago · · ·

>>4603912

Eep! Fixed.

#16 · Chapter 3 · 13w, 4d ago · · ·

Octavia became a werewolf? :rainbowderp: Interesting indeed.

I hope Shining Armor isn't a lost cause. :applejackunsure: Also, something tells me Princess Cadence isn't quite so peachy keen either, judging by how Roaring Yawn's team dodged the question of how she was doing. Then again, I imagine she could just be really distraught over what's happened to Shining, so I'll wait and see.

I've got goosebumps waiting for the next part. :pinkiehappy:

#17 · Chapter 4 · 12w, 18h ago · · ·

When it will overtke you to slake its bloodlust?

Great chapter as always, regardless. Looking forward to more. :twilightsmile:

#18 · Chapter 4 · 12w, 18h ago · · ·

Son of a bitch :twilightangry2:

Wonderful as always, cant wait for the next chapter!

#19 · Chapter 4 · 11w, 18h ago · · ·

Hope there's a chance for Dashie to not accept his offer:fluttercry:

#20 · Chapter 5 · 10w, 6d ago · · ·

Great chapter. I cant wait for the finale of the arc.

#21 · Chapter 5 · 10w, 6d ago · · ·

he’d have fit nicely into a sandwich.

REmake reference ftw!

I'll just make a prediction and say that every single chapter from here on out will be awesome, so I don't have to keep giving the same compliment for every single one.

Great story dude! :pinkiehappy:

#22 · Chapter 3 · 10w, 1d ago · · ·

I'm getting some serious Vlad the Impaler vibes from the royal guard.

#23 · Chapter 2 · 7w, 6d ago · · ·

>>4522419 I am eager to start too, it's been in my 'read later' since it came out. I can't wait!:pinkiehappy:

#24 · Chapter 6 · 6w, 6d ago · · ·

Great chapter.

#25 · Chapter 6 · 6w, 6d ago · · ·

I hope Octavia will be alright after all of that abuse she's gone through as a wolf. :applejackunsure:

#26 · Chapter 7 · 5w, 6d ago · · ·

I like the way that the arc concluded.  I got to say that seeing RD and Shatterstorm have a moment is cute.

#27 · Chapter 7 · 5w, 6d ago · · ·

Vinyl, I… I need you.

She sinks further.

Vinyl… I-I’m cold…

Cold. Yes. Cold.

The indentation is irregular here.

The cockeyed position of its head resets with a hard crunch Rose Blade cn hear even from way up.

The 'a' is missing.

Also, there's a few instances where you slip into past tense sprinkled throughout this chapter.

Rainbow Dash is pony Jill Valentine. :rainbowdetermined2: I'm loving how she and Shatterstorm have gradually warmed up to each other over the course of this saga. They really have come a long way since quarreling like eight-year-old siblings.

One last thing: any chance you can provide a bestiary for all the Castlevania enemies you showcase in the story? I've played a lot of the games, but still, it's tough to recognize some of Dracula's minions in written form.

#28 · Chapter 7 · 5w, 6d ago · · ·

>>4875973

Well, my old editor disappeared off the face of the planet, so these mistakes have been much more frequent than they used to be.

One last thing: any chance you can provide a bestiary for all the Castlevania enemies you showcase in the story? I've played a lot of the games, but still, it's tough to recognize some of Dracula's minions in written form.

I was thinking of doing something like that for my blog, complete with art. Who knows when I'll be able to do it, though; been busy with a lot of things.

#29 · Chapter 7 · 5w, 6d ago · · ·

>>4877399 I'd be more than happy to take on the role of editor/proofreader for you. :pinkiehappy:

#30 · Chapter 4 · 5w, 6d ago · · ·

>>4656337

"Slake" is correct. It means "quench" or "satisfy".

#31 · Chapter 7 · 5w, 3d ago · · ·

Kinda nice to have a chapter that doesnt end with a cliffhanger for once, not that cliffhangers are bad but, you know its kinda nice to have a breather.

Great chapter and nice end to the arc.

#32 · Chapter 6 · 4w, 6d ago · · ·

I've envisioned Dashie as a warrior for a while now, it just struck one day and it seems so fitting for her. Glad to see someone else shares my vision.

#33 · Chapter 7 · 4w, 6d ago · · ·

I gotta say that I am quite impressed. This is the level of authorship, storytelling and characterization that I desire to devour with my eyes! I don't really care for the dark horror adventure stories and Dracula is a turn-off but...

...this is a story that should be printed on golden pages bound in silver and the text would be jade. I truly do appreciate all of your hard work that has gone into this fic.

11/10 stars and nothing less!

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