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Lilith Evanson


Rainbows and cupcakes and lesbian ponies. Shippers and cloppers and all of the bronies. Applejack licking all up Rainbow's wings. These are a few of my favorite things!

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All Applejack wanted was to complete her chores so she could help Rarity and the girls with the Ponyville Days Festival. Maybe even get a little bit of advertisement for Sweet Apple Acres. Unfortunately, anything that involves Rarity will most likely include drama. Applejack soon finds herself hiding from a stalker, traveling writer with an obsessed crush on her and a jealous friend with a stereotypical view of her country life. At the same time, she has to try and keep her relationship with a certain rainbow haired pegasus a secret.

She should have stayed in the chicken coop.

Cover art: Confrontation by RainbowDerp98

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 54 )

Yes! I love this idea already. The cover art is awesome, showing Rainbow getting pretty frustrated with the stallion who wont leave her girl alone. Haha awesome!

Squee! Oh my celestia I need to read this asap.

Oh my god.. this is amazing! i 'm freaking excited whats gonna happen next! and this.. THIS

Dolly Mareton

made me giggle back there! HAH! :rainbowlaugh: anyways, i hope to see more fabulous chapters soon! :twilightsmile:

Commenting before actually reading.. will edit later! But I just want to offer a correction: "she should have stayed in the chicken coop."

edit: This looks fun. I can only imagine what Dash will do... :rainbowlaugh:

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Thank you! I hope to amuse you with all the drama that shall take place!

Pissing AJ, RD and Rarity... I can say Trenderhoof is Too Dumb to Live.
Seriously, Rarity has a bad taste in stallions.

yet ANOTHER fanfic where Dash and AJ's relationship is a fucking secret kept from their friends.:facehoof: Why is it that its appledash that is the secret relationship you would think Equestria would celebrate homosexuality so they wouldn't have to keep the fucking thing a secret from the ponies they care about the most! gah why do i even bother anymore? maybe there's a part of me that still likes this ship even though i find it very predictable and cliched since this plot is used a lot for appledash.

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Thank you! Next chapter should be up either this week or the beginning of next.

(I'm so glad you thought the Dolly joke was funny. I was so afraid I had made a bad joke. :twiightsmile: )

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Ah! Thank you for the correction, good sir. :pinkiesmile: Editing this at 1 in the morning with a headache was probably not my wisest idea. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it!

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Agreed. Trenderhoof is not a fan favorite. Applejack is going to have a lot on her hooves.

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I'm sorry if the plot seems a bit cliche but I can definitely say AJ and RD are not keeping their relationship a secret out of fear.

Please, don't give up on this ship! :twilightsmile: New stories come out all the time. Someone is bound to surprise you.

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Hmm good point there. Oh its not out of fear? Well in that case I guess we will find out why then since i am now curious since its not the normal fear of rejection thing.

4028731 The way I understood it, Applejack is not even dating Rainbow yet. She's just on the "somehow I can't keep her off my mind" phase.

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I considered it dating because I thought the story had them as an established couple. I didn't have the getting together vibe from it so my mistake.:twilightsheepish:

very good start so far. Still cant wait to see Rainbows reaction to all this if we do

Damn. And Rainbow hasn't even made an appearance yet...

...this is gonna eat harshly into my writing time. :fluttershbad:

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:rainbowkiss:

I want to spoil you so bad, but I shan't!

(It's a doozy.)

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I wouldn't mind spoiling you, either, but it might ruin your initiative to read my stuff further.

Don't want that, do we?

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Still, I don't think the fandom hates him or anything. Believe it or not, I'm pretty sure that a stallion falling in love with one of the mane 6 does not count as a good reason to hate a character. :derpytongue2:

Whatever annoyed you about tenderhoof should just be addressed and solved, not used as a point to bully him. :ajsmug:

Also kinda hoping tenderhoof will finally confront his flaws and maybe end up with rarity lol. :duck:

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Oh, I don't hate him. I admit, he was somewhat of a flat character in the episode but that's only because there wasn't enough time to round him up. I actually find him interesting and would have liked to see more of his character change from the lessons learned.

I also don't have anything against any stallion or mare that likes one of the mane six.

I just wanted a reason to get Applejack mad. Poor Trenderhoof was at the wrong place at the wrong time. I'm also trying not to bully him. I'm just exaggerating his crush for Applejack.

Get a Stallion off Your Back

It occurs to me that this expression probably means something very different to ponies. To a human, having another human on your back means you're carrying them. They're being a burden you wish to be released from. To a mare...having a stallion on your back...:heart:

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Give up on the ship! Come to the Rarijack side. We have pies that taste good and LOOK good.

I can see unresolved sexual tension between Applejack and Rarity which could result in a one night stand/friends with benefits relationship. But the fact remains is that Rarity and Applejack are too different for a real relationship.

:rainbowdetermined2::heart::ajsmug:

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Oh, I agree. So long as you swap "Rarity" for "Rainbow Dash", and "too different" for "too similar".

It was so good I blogged about it :trollestia:
I do love a good AppleDash, and though the characters haven't interacted yet you're off to a really strong start. I loved Applejack's inner monologues about Trenderhoof and it seems that you're going to follow a different path than the actual episode, which is a change from all the Rarijack that just picks up afterwards.
So, strong start, great premise, Applejack was great, and I cannot wait until you update next.
Have a mustache: :moustache:

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Wow! Thank you so much for this! I...I really don't deserve that type of recognition but your review was just so sweet. Thank you, again for the blog and the review! I really appreciate it.

I won't let you down! :twilightsmile:

Awesome!!

Oh my god, this story is already off to a great start. Love the cover art btw :derpytongue2: , but anyways i'm super honored that you decided to use my art for such a great story. Definitely gonna be following the updates for this story :rainbowkiss:

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First off, you are amazing. Seriously. I've seen your work and just...:rainbowkiss: :heart: :raritystarry:

Also, I am ashamed of myself as I should have asked your permission to use your work and for that I apologize profusely. I had this story in my head for a while and then I saw your image and everything clicked into place. So, thank you for making something really wonderful!

Also, thank you so much for your kind review! Chapter 2 should be out by the end of this week, maybe the weekend but I'm almost done. I hope you enjoy my story! :twilightsmile:

4096829 Don't feel ashamed, it's perfectly fine!:twilightsmile: That's why I generally have written on my vectors that anyone can use them, as long as credit is given (and you did just that).

Anxious for updates :yay:

Awww, Sweetie Bell and Scootaloo in this are just the cutest lil' things! Also, love this story so far!

Man, trender hoof is a racist, insensitive asshole.
"I respect the work ethnic of EARTH ponies.":ajbemused:
Jerk.

Just so you know, Trenderhoof has his own tag.

I have a lot of good things to say about these first two chapters, but I think they can be summed up in one word: MOAR!

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:twilightsmile: Thank you! I'm working on it, don you worry!

"She showed us the hiding spot where you and Applejack always canoodle!" Sweetie jumped in.
Rainbow lurched up and stared at the two fillies in shock. She didn't breath but a small choking noise escaped from her mouth.
"Rainbow Dash?" Scootaloo waved a hoof in front of her face. "I think we broke her."
"Is she going to throw up?"
Rainbow smacked herself in the face again. Maybe she should go check in with Applejack first.
"Why do your wings stiffen up like that when you kiss her?"

I think we broke her. :rainbowderp:

BEST. ENDING. EVER.

When will be the next chapter?
P.S. Love your story !

Geez, another awesome story from you!

Good gravy, girl! :applejackconfused:

xD lookin' forward to the next chapter! :D

Love this chapter, the CMC win this one, so did Flitter, for a moment i thought Dash was gonna be oblivious at what's going on, but you surprisme at the end! nice one!

Next one please!

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