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-Mazer 12160

Joined March 2012
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    -Mazer's Stories (12)

    • Luna's Romp
      Luna asks Celestia if Twilight could spend the night!

      2,183 words · 8,586 views · 545 likes · 13 dislikes
    • Going Home
      When Pinkie Pie's father grows ill, she is requested to return home. Can she overcome her past?
      19,112 words · 626 views · 39 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Chaos and Anarchy
      When Celestia vanishes, Luna and Twilight Sparkle must seek advice from an old enemy to find her.
      28,192 words · 1,201 views · 39 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Archives
      Learn the secret behind Twilight's Paranoia...
      18,942 words · 665 views · 37 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Luna's Favor
      2,842 words · 1,117 views · 54 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Oh Rarity...
      1,517 words · 254 views · 12 likes · 0 dislikes
    • A Cutie Mark Chronicle
      2,679 words · 397 views · 11 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Love is In Bloom
      11,614 words · 221 views · 6 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Controlling Twilight
      3,997 words · 303 views · 12 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Checkmate
      3,071 words · 306 views · 11 likes · 3 dislikes

    When Trixie wakes up in a cavern without the ability to tap into her magic, she must undergo a terrible test in order to escape with her life.

    Based off my favorite horror movie franchise and requested by several of my readers, this is a single chapter event that I hope people enjoy.

    I am rating this Teen for blood and some gore. I don't consider this mature as I do not go into graphic detail on the situation.

    First Published
    25th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    25th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 20 )

    #1 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    awesome more i want more :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

    #2 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I dare not read, but a Spike and Rarity trap would mess me up.

    "Twilight or Rarity? Choose!"

    At the same time I'm in another room. My game is to get through the fic without a change in heart rate.

    #3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is pretty interesting! Can't wait to see more. :twilightsmile:

    #4 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    That was definitely an incredible first chapter. I like how you did your own trap instead of rehashing the old ones.:ajsmug: Anyway, tracked, and liked. I'd jut LOVE to see what other traps you could come up with.:pinkiecrazy:

    #5 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Say, you ever heard of JLGJProductions? He makes his own Saw traps on YouTube, Maybe you can collaborate with him.:twilightsmile:

    #6 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>364517: He does? How does THAT work?:rainbowhuh:

    #7 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>364585 Claymation.

    #8 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh, WTF is this shit?!:facehoof:

    #10 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Just wondering.....why is everything Italicized?

    #11 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Karma can be painfull. :pinkiehappy:

    #12 · 60w, 22h ago · · ·
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    "It wasn’t really all that difficult, really."

    "She am sorry but that is how things work around here"

    A few mistakes that need to be dealt with, but otherwise great job! The only thing bothering me about the storytelling was how little you really went in-depth into her thoughts/feelings/conflict when about to put her horn into the grinder.

    #13 · 60w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>365450

    Ack. Thanks for that. Need fix that asap

    #14 · 60w, 21h ago · · ·
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    DIE TRIXIE DIE! :flutterrage:

    #15 · 60w, 20h ago · · ·
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    I got my jollies from Trixie feeling pain. Too bad she didn't die, that would have better. Good story though! :pinkiehappy:

    #16 · 60w, 20h ago · · ·
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    very interesting. hats off to you.

    #17 · 60w, 18h ago · · ·
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    Despite me HATING SAW IN WAYS WORDS CAN NOT DESCRIBE, this was somewhat decent.

    #18 · 46w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Very well written but a little brief. I would have enjoyed more elaboration as to what Trixie was going through mentally and emotionally instead of just physically during the trap scene. Great job and I really think you should write more of these.

    #19 · 42w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Awesome! More please:trixieshiftleft:

    #20 · 38w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I listened to the SAW theme on repeat while reading. It definitely added to the atmosphere. :moustache:

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