A series of one-shots using my OC Peppermill
Since I have no predicted end-date it's best to assume any and all current MLP:FiM characters will show up in some form or another.
NEW (as of Feb. 27, 2013) Now with more young colts and other mis-adventures. Expect this series to focus on this from this point on.
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I love Peppermill, and I can't wait to see more from you. You are a very good writer.
Very good. Also I had a horrible thought what if saltpeter breaks out of the asylum for revenge. Again
371471 Let's hope he'd be smart enough not to, cause Peppermill will kick his ass.
Very well done as always!
oh lord... Daisy why did I have to go and kill you!
(fanfic reference... eh)
That aside I love to see Peppermill adjusting to life in Ponyville! Great story as always like the above commenter said!
...... Wow. He got owned by a a chicken. and it wasnt even Scootaloo.
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Fighting with a chicken. Not something I think a pony would do.
Peppermill is best pony.
423495 Have you met any roosters? They are mean little suckers.
424575 Yes, I know they're mean, but Peppermill was fighting back.
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I would too! We had a rooster once. He would watch you. When you were looking, he would peck at the ground. When you looked away, he would charge you. If you looked back, he'd stop and peck at the ground again. He'd only attack from behind--cowardly rooster.
I'm cheering for Peppermill on this one.
Clove oil....
I get that reference!
Great chapter as always.
Peppermill has so much swag
A placebo...I KNEW IT!
Also, you left the italics on for the second half of the chapter...
Aww he thinks twi is cute and fin? Will. You stop writing these oh please keep writing.
....... there dead. Also, imah need to see Diamond's reaction.
This is my new favorite backstory.
Peppermill/Silver Spoon...hmm
Sounds interesting, especially since you've made a rather well-rounded character out of Silver Spoon. 
Your biggest issue is one I've seen quite a bit. You have a tendency to use the word of when you mean to use a contraction that ends with 've. For example, using would of when you mean would've, which is a contraction of would have. Like I said, I see this mistake fairly often with a lot of people. Make sure you check things over.
Oh sweet celestia they both like him. Boy is gonna get himself into world of hurt. AB for the win.
I see now what the author meant by swag.
I was not disappointed.
The prophecy of swag has come to pass, and the people did rejoice!
BRILLIANT!!! This is excellent work!
My only major criticism is that you keep using of when you are clearly thinking of a contraction ending with 've. Examples include...
Not of...this should be not have
Might of...this should be might've or might have
This is a common mistake I see a lot of writers make.
Oh, and Apple Bloom exploding twice...nice touch.
Mother of celestia next few chapters going to be interesting.
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