It started off as enjoying a night at a classical concert, then one trip to the bar and a few drinks later, and one pony finds himself sharing the bed of one musically talented mare. What begins as an awkward meeting turns into a sharing of music and finding of each other.
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Oh my god. I absolutely love the fic but hate the way you shortly and curtly portrayed Octavia. I imagine her being less snappy and rude. Not to say you shouldn't take her dialogue away. Maybe just soften it down a tad.
It's still getting 5 stars.
i dont see no stars only that like button so i shall HIT IT
Its ok so far... stars 4 U!!!
WE SHALL SEE
seems promising. tracking for now!!!
I Face-desked at least f thousand times this whole chapter
380110 May I inquire why?
hehe I thought it was kinda funny! And i face-desked in a way like i face-hoof because of some of it reminded me of humiliation or mistakes in real life, and it was funny.
380128 ooooh...
i thought something else, my bad
379698 First meeting... we'll see how the two work out later
This is a really interesting story so far. I'm quite the Octavia fan so this does interest me. Keep it up!
Concerto - Cacophony
That akward moment when... Anyway, I like the premise, and I enjoyed this. Time to track and thumb up.
380442 yes
mylittlefacewhen.com/f/2077/
I love this story. You are a really good writer... have a Pinkie.
awesoommm
Okay, so he's a wonderbolt, and a music guru... that guy will get all the mares
455449 "wonderfbolt"
just a joke
A-mazing im loving this.
0 thumbs down! Nice going! PS I love the story
540963 0 thumbs down.. can't explain that. Thank you!
Dr Who reference for the win! Also, great chapter.
Awesome :D
“I wouldn’t mind want a home field advantage, what.....
697568..... huh... i guess i accidentally that...
Another entertaining chapter. I look forward to the inevitable future conflict with Strings.
Cool.
697568
damn it... thats what i get for reading too fast again.
703858 this better hope starting something
pardon?
541128
there is exactly 1 troll reading your story.
703899 yeaaaaaaaah.... oh well
woohoo thats it every single one of my tracked stories have updated
Just read through this and the previous chapters. Looking forward to moar!
697234 if you read most of my works.. there's a few Doctor references in each one
I just wanted to let you know that the beginning of this has some pretty jarring tense and POV switches that you should probably look at.
745351 AH, i thought i fixed all of those.
Leading Flare out the room and down the hallway, the pegasus was left to my own devices, back to thinking in his own head.
"My?" LOL!
Keep up the great work.
754411 and this is what happens when i'm writing a first person and third person fic..
Where's the rest of it?
1006938 how about working on it right now?
1007018 Jolly good.
Suits what? I think you're missing a word there.
1838549 Elaborate, i'm not seeing it
1839460 Looks like a word is missing, or your grammar is incorrect. It's not a complete thought.
Maybe you meant "Suits, ..."
1840366 ah, right thanks
edit: should be better now
... I'm of the opinion at the moment that Vinyl is a bit of a bitch. Anyway, fun chapter.
Mares, ladies, females in general
Who gets them besides themselves
2449736 I'm surprised it took someone this long to get that reference
2449957 I'm surprised as well. I just started reading this story yesterday and after checking that no one commented on it I decided to mention it. Anyway very nice story please continue it when you can.