Rainbow Dash is special; not just because she can preform a Sonic Rainboom, or that she has a rainbow for a mane and tail. She can see the aura, a form of energy that is on the outside of of person, in many different colors. From the day she was born she could see them, but to this day she doesn't know why.
Twilight Sparkle decides to write a report to Princess Celestia on the peculiar subject of Rainbow Dash and auras, but has no idea how she can or why they are even there. To make sure her report is correct, she decides to talk to Rainbow and get some references. This simple action knocks over a domino, which triggers much more feelings and events than Twilight thought could happen just by talking.
(First try at importing something from Google Docs, so tell me if there are any crazy formatting errors.)
Also, some TwiDash. Don't like? Don't read.
Also also, I need a different Cover Image. If you are artistic, feel free to make something better than this.
Hmm, that story name looks familiar! statueforum.com/images/smilies/Emoticon-Think.gif
In all seriousness, this looks intriguing. Shall have to give it a read!
i liked the description.
til i read twidash
>Without something to back up your information and data, it wasn’t science- it was just a theory.
Hypothesis. Theories are ALWAYS backed up by a plethora of evidence.
>you’ve been reading much to many fanfictions lately.
Bad author, no biscuit.
So...Dash got mad at Twilight Sparkle because she doodled in a book that she liked her? And then she felt like she was obligated to know that Twilight liked her? That is fucked up on so many different levels. It feels like Dash doesn't care for Twilight's emotions at all. She's condescending and cold, like she's scolding a child for stealing a cookie. That Twilight even puts up with this...
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You don't like Twidash?
Well you sir, can kindly...
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
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I don't get it either.
I was all like
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When i read this.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
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I didn't mean it to come across like that- great minds think alike, I guess!
I honestly wasn't expecting there to be shipping in a book like this (I'm an idiot and missed the 'Romance' tag
), but that was really the only thing that ruined it for me.
It was an interesting read, good job EpicGuy
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Thank you.
Originally this was shipping-free (which, according to some people, would be better), but it was way too short and actually a little boring. So I decided to add a little, hopefully not too much to dampen the rest of the story.
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Better without shipping? LOL You did the right thing, dear author, because "some people" are wrong.
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Okay, maybe I shouldn't listen to it that often...
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O_O Always listen to Rainbow Dash, but go BEYOND her instructions! Set them on fire, then put it out and set them on fire all over again.
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I shall use your advice wisely.
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No worries, it's not like I have copyright on the name...
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Something tells me "calamity" isn't the word you're looking for in Twilight's introduction.
Might wanna double-check that.
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Oops. I'll have to fix that. Thanks!
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I'm serious here, I have no idea how this is a romance story. Dash had some wired ability that has a dark side (which is left completely unresolved). Twilight is a creeper, and compulsive liar. Words are misused and misspelled.
This story needs massive reformation, editing, and detailing to get a thumbs up from me.
that went too fast...this seems like it's supposed to be way before or way after another story...I liked it, just a bit incomplete if you ask me
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I'll put it on the top of my list.
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realize: you poured your heart out to someone so that they could help you with your problem,
then: all it seems they've been doing is doting on you instead of trying to help at all.
Especially if your problem has caused you a lot of pain.
Betrayal isn't easy to take, I can guess especially if you're the element of Loyalty.
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No shit its just the way the author wrote this that makes that iffy.
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Lobstah is right. The author MAYBE could have made this work, although I think the whole situation in and of itself is iffy, but he didn't even do it close to well enough.
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Just for the record I plan on redoing this from the ground up. Dialogue, setting, plot, everything.
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If I had anything to recommend, it would be changing that entirely. It's beyond fucked.
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Sounds exactly like my ex.
Only problem: things never turned out nicely like they did here. Heck, the ending was the only thing that seemed to break my suspension of disbelief.
Honestly, I don't think a situation like that would possibly end well unless the offended party was also secretly crushing on the other.
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Well, I guess this makes sense. Again, the ending really didn't seem possible to me.
At the very least, this helped me understand a bit better something similar that happened in my personal life. Though much harsher words than "doting on me" were exchanged. I appreciate the sentiment still.
um..sad tag, like no happy ending sad, or sad middle sad? i hate sad ending, please let me know if this is worth reading.
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The ending is happy, but the theme overall is a bit depressing. Not "depressing" as in you would cry your eyes out, just not a bright subject. You can read if you wish, but keep in mind I'll be doing major edits soon and the story might be drastically changed from what it is now.
(You can read it.
)
Thank you very much for putting this back up. I will read it today and tell you what I think of it.
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Not a problem! I look forward to your review.
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Well, I finished. This was quite the interesting story. I think that you did a very good job on writing about such a complex and rather vague topic in auras. I feel that Twilight's apology and her earning Dash's forgiveness could have been drawn out just a tad bit more. I think that you did an overall excellent job in writing this. There is room for improvement in all stories and this one does have its fair share of said room. You set out to write about a very difficult and rather unexplored topic in auras and I for one think that you did a good job. I look forward to seeing this rewritten at some point because I know that it will be AMAZING once it has been. I hope you view my criticism as fair.
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Considering most of the other criticism on this fanfic, yours is well over fair. I will keep your ideas in mind when I (finally) get around to editing it, and thanks again!
Okay, This story has a lot of problems. First and foremost, the way your mane 6 acted is like they barely know each other, then Twilight's a creep, Rainbow was over dramatic in a ridiculous way, Fluttershy felt like just a forced dialogue scene, and Pinkie was bland.
I personally know a lot about what an Aura is and how it works so it was easy to follow along, even though you explained I bet others couldn't quite get the concept, forgive me if I'm wrong. The story pace was fluctuating at a crazy rate and it was dragged out at scenes that did not need to be dragged out. 
(for example; the Fluttershy dialogue scene and when Rainbow was about to explain what was wrong)
Overall, the story was kinda boring to me and I'm sorry if you offended by what I've said. I personally have never written a FimFiction story, but I go off of what I do in school. I hope you can improve on what I've told you about, good luck mate!
TwiDash forever /)
They don't have hands so how can it be handwriting. Also, Twilight uses her horn instead of hoof so it'd be her hornwritting/magicwritting and Dash’s hoofwritting.
I'd also like an explanation of HOW Twilight could see the aura.