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Duragan


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My name is Shining Armour. I am captain of the Equestrian Royal guard. Devoted husband to Princess Cadance, sibling to Twilight Sparkle and an honourable stallion always willing to serve my kingdom. Now I'm about to have my life ended by an ant. It may sound far fetched, but it doesn't when you're barely a fraction of an inch anymore like I am now. This is my story...

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I hope you'll finish this ASAP

Any progress soon?

Please continue !
I want a giantess Princess Cadance ♥

4461966 Yeah, its about time it was updated. ^^;

>>Duragan

How many time ? :derpyderp1:

Im starting to think he wont continue this...I hope he continue it:pinkiehappy:

I don't know how, but I remeber I read this exact thing few months back. Did you do this chapater earlier ?

4471691 I made some alterations to it, though it shouldn't be too noticible. It was really a tidy up more than anything else. :)

I hope there's more of this future gold written

Poor Cadance is sad that she hasn't seen her Shining Armor in this story for month now :( Please, make her happy.

I found some things you may want to edit.

Getting back into a routine of trying to work out and loose some weight was a lot harder than I had come to remember.

That should be "lose"

So imagine me at the moment, about eighty or so pounds heavier than before, a stomach full of sugary junk food and attempting to break back into loosing weight in only a few days before Twiley arrive and you have to ask yourself a question: Would I be able to slim down enough in time?

That should be "losing".

I looked like I stuffed a large whit balloon under my shirt.

That should be "white".

So far a good chapter. I like how you gave him a reason to have the spell casted. And nice work on the images. I know you didn't do them yourself, but I hope you end up doing more for the upcoming chapters. They really help (note the term) "illustrated" the story

Would be better without images: they distract from the story, and definitely not helping.

Please continue this fic. I'd hate to see this much potential die off


Unfotunately, the story is dead :'(

FINISH THIS STORY!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!

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Maybe someone will pick it up? I have few ideas... Planning on making it long. But I dont think I can do it alone. Wanna do a collab with me to make this fic long and nice?

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