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AmethystFire


"We must let go of the life we have planned, so as to accept the one that is waiting for us." Joseph Campbell

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An All OC story. My life in High school as ponies, with major plot twists. The Stallion Scouts! Rocks for computers! A little humor! Crystal is trying to make her mark, but can't do it all with out her friends by her side, and her favorite teacher; without them, she is nothing. This is the story of her life in Crystal High School, and how she makes her mark in life.
Warning: Contains awkward facts in our life. Thank Ms. Snapple.
Just as a warning, almost all catergories apply to this story, even conflicting, but not too much to conflict.
Want to read the main character backstories? Click Here!

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 24 )

An all-OC story? I won't downvote it because I haven't read it, but all-OC stories never do well on here unless they are pretty much perfect. Just giving ya a heads-up because I've seen it way too much.

4183535

The story hasn't been finished, on paper, and here. But there are parts within the story that kind of revolve around the MLP show. Like some characters are just mentioned within the story, and it's like a biography, or whatever it is called, sorry it's 11pm, of my own life in high school and plus, it's not just my life alone, there are plot twists where friendships and love is tested. So there is some excitement going on within the story. If I'm sounding very ride right now in your head I don't intend for it, I just wanted to give out an FYI.

4184944 No worries. I just wanted to give you a heads up in case you get any hate, but you haven't, which is good. I've gotten hate on here simply because I wrote a story with Flash Sentry in it...

4184963

To me, that makes no sense about Flash. Bit thanks for the heads up! I won't kill any pony, hopefully. I only have 1 now, which is fine. It's better than my Twilight murder story 1 like out of 22 dislikes. I wasn't disappointed cause that was my first fan fiction that I wrote, and I wasn't into MLP as much as I am now.

Anyways appreciate the heads up, I'll definitely keep it in mind!

Strange thing was, I was thinking of making a story with an all OC cast and it was their freashman year. The stranger part was that Black Ninja sounds similar to my friend's OC Dark Ninja. You beaten me to it.

4216383 The characters are based on my friends in my own life. And Black Ninja was my friend that is absolutely crazy. Life wouldn't be 20% cooler without her. Sorry I beat you to it, that's just how she acts in real life.

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Yet again, strange the OCs I mentioned are based on my friends.

4217154 Woah! We had the same idea going. :moustache: Long distance sync :rainbowdetermined2: Did you even notice that our characters are about the same? Purple fur and blue eyes

:derpyderp1:
Did not noticed that coming. Long range Sync indeed.

4219183 :derpyderp2: Woah, it's like we are connected. :facehoof:

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Maybe we are, but the story I'll be working on is delayed since I'm working on other stuff.

4219799 Same here..:pinkiehappy: I have been doing many plot twists in the story to have an excuse to work on other stories. It's as bad as that I have one story that I am Collabing with RazorTheAwesome, another one that was for a piece of artwork that I wanted to do, and some backstories for some of the characters in this story, even the mane 6. So many ideas, yet so little time to do them. The one chapter I'm on is dated to end April 29th, so I have plenty of time to do something with this time period.:twilightsmile:

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Me, I have to do a animation before the end of march. Write a new chapter, rewrite another story, make a sequel to my other story, and an idea is stuck in my head which is about the struggles of how a little colt grew up to be one the most feared and richest loan sharks in Canterlot.

4222936 Woah! I would like to read those one time! :raritystarry:
The both of us are busy little ponies!

4223834
Busy ponies indeed. Maybe my story would be of a senior year instead of freshmen or make it a mafia story. I dunno. Many ideas, so many.

4242231 IKR! I am planning to do senior year, but I don't know how many if the characters here in this story will be in that one. I don't know if the person that is Black Ninja will move or will like hate my guts one day. And Ms. Snapple may go to live her dream, idk yet. I still have 3 more years. I know there will be new characters to the story, and there will be ones missing, but it still will be good. If you want to go on ahead and do it, you can. I still have 3 years, because this is a normal day to day story. So almost everything that happens I. This story is real.

I seemed to be the only one who say recent comments. Anyways, good chapter overall, just needs 72 more words.

4309800 what would u suggest to be in there? Just as a future reference, or could be fixed.

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Maybe descriptive words between the lines.

The following was my reaction when Mr. Ignorable invited me to read this over Skype.

[8:37:08 PM] Iggs: hey para
[8:37:09 PM] Iggs: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/171257/high-school-ponies-9th-grade
[8:41:32 PM] Columbine: Iggs
[8:41:34 PM] Columbine: what the fuck
[8:41:38 PM] Columbine: Iggs wh
[8:41:41 PM] Columbine: what is this sh
[8:41:42 PM] Columbine: what
[8:41:45 PM] Columbine: waht
[8:41:46 PM] Columbine: sdghad
[8:41:48 PM] Columbine: tewy-049J35EHAITRS
[8:41:50 PM] Columbine: wwwwwwwwwwwwwww

4391528 Ssssh, no tears. Just riffs.

[8:43:34 PM] Columbine: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/171257/high-school-ponies-9th-grade#comment/4391528
[8:44:13 PM] Thaums: FOR FUCK
[8:44:18 PM] Thaums: PARA STAUP

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