I wrote a story like this, but mine was stupid.

Yours is a lot better.

I don't have time to read this now...

BUT I TOTALLY WILL LATER!!!!!

Wha.....Wait.......Nice!Also get to work on your Transformers crossover Gyvon!!!!!111!!Its Epic!

>>397298397298

Oh, I fully intend to finish that.  I just wanted to get this out before the season 6 previews completely screw me over.

Okay, it's later.

Good: I laughed out loud at his cutie mark.

Bad: I felt that someone not used to the show would have wanted a few more details.

I'm tracking this like a freaking guided missile, and it would be my pleasure to assist you with it any way that I can.  Message me if you're interested.

>>397321397321

It seems that they are going to have to....Deal with it....I suck....

>Sees this on front page

All of my whats

and then I read it.... oh man this is some good stuff between this and Sweetie Chronicles little joke today seems to be quite the day for epic crossovers.

>>397321397321

Exposition's gonna wait 'till chapter 2

No Way

No Way!

Noooooo Waaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!!!!!

No Way No Way No Way No Way-

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SOMEONE FINALLY MADE A BURN NOTICE CROSSOVER

YOU ARE BEST AUTHOR

TAKE ME NOW YOU MAGNIFICENT STALLION

Burn Notice and ponies take my Internets take them all

Please take all my inter nets, just leave me here, I might as well die knowing this has been made, my life is complete

>>397537397537 >>397808397808 >>398466398466

Wow, I wasn't expecting this big a reaction!  Gotta hurry and finish my other story so I can give this my undivided attention.

>>398806398806

DO IT, DO IT NOW!

YES!!!! YES!!!!! You have my attention! faved! Also....is Equestria about to start exploding?! Like exploding more then twice!? Also....is Equestria REALLY ready for Chuck Finley? Only time will tell

This... This is perfect. Excuse me while I go cry with joy

Seriously. Best thing to happen to ponies EVER. You have officially won the Internet, my good sir.

*le scrolling, looking through popular stories*

Okay, now where did that Bioshock story go? My favorites page won't load and...

*le sees this title*

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U WON TEH INTER NET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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A Burn Notice crossover.

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Spoiling me like this...

Sunglasses for a cutie-mark?

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Anyway, this is great. Well-written, characters are in character...

Glad to see it kept with the Burn Notice style of "Spy tips". I have, however, stopped watching the show at like, the third season, so it'd be much appreciated if you could, say, 'fill in the blanks'.

What else... Oh, right. Looking forward to the next chapter and, well, keep up the great work!

>>418284418284

Thank you for the praise.  I was actually afraid I might've gone off-Character with Michael a bit for this chapter.

And I'll try to fill in some details.  That's what next chapter is for, although I'd suggest watching seasons 4 and 5.  They're good.

I did not enjoy writing this chapter.  I had to go back and re-write the beginning several times before I got something acceptable.  At one point I was tempted to copy+paste the wikipedia summaries.

But anyways, exposition's done.  Now, on to the plot!

NEW CHAPTER MADE MY DAY

Yeah, the "Explaining->Accepting" phase known as "Chapter 2" is never the most exciting part of any crossover.

Now, however, begins the fun part...

Man...I haven't seen this show in ages but seeing a crossover of the show brings back few memories.

Brillantly done so far and can't wait to see more.

Michael's character doesn't seem too far off, but you may want to pay closer attention to the pace of the fic. If Michael is going to freak out, then you might want to elaborate it a bit.

Simply having Twilight say "calm down" and Michael going "okay" is something straight out of a Gary Stu fic.

Try not to explain everything, only give the reader enough information to understand what is going on in the story. Keep them guessing!

New chapter have more internets

This was great. Mike only needs a pair of sunglasses and a shirt and Sam only needs a pair of sunglasses and a hawaiian shirt. Can some one skilled draw a picture of this.

Jeez Sam becoming a pony's sure made u into a bit of a gossip to much time with rarity perhaps

      Rarity

-THE CLIENT-

I laughed so hard at this, wow. Genius, good sir, genius.

Considering Twilight reads crime novels in the show, I think she'd know why Applebloom and Scootaloo need to be questioned.  Other than that and a few minor errors, I have no complaints.  

>>489023489023

Yeah, I did too.

I swear, this is better than the show.

Also, did we ever learn what Sam's cutie mark is?  I suppose it's not important to the plot, but for some reason I keep imagining a pony with a SEAL trident.

>>489199489199

I honestly haven't decided on what it should be.  I was thinking a broken heart (he is a  bit of a heart-breaker).  A SEAL trident is a good choice too.

>>489227489227 A  almost split heart being impailed by SEAL trident from left to right keeping the heart from fully splitting?

>>490976490976

That...could be pretty cool.

*looks up Burn Notice*  Aha!  So it has been done!

Very nice, very in-character, and feels much like an actual episode.

One point of criticism:  Michael accepted the responsibility of rescuing Sweetie Belle too easily.  All he knows is that a bunch of strange ponies grabbed her and took off north.  He doesn't know a thing about the kidnappers or even the Equestrian authorities.  The first thing he would do is recommend that they report it.  He would only step in if he believed that police would make things worse or if Sam continued to pressure him into it, but either way, he would need more to go on.  For all he knows, it's just a childish prank.

But I still enjoyed your story

>>719823719823

It's Michael.  He's always had a soft-spot for kids.  It comes from when his father abused him and Nate as a child.

At least one Villain-of-the-Week has taken advantage of this.

Hey, I clicked on your profile by accident, but when I saw this, I decided to watch you. Now I'm reading it and marveling at how good it is; hell good doesn't cut it! Just this first chapter alone is awesome!

I've not seen Seasons 4 or 5 yet, but I know the premise of them. Also, when I saw this in your list of written stories, my initial reaction was "MUST READ"... and so I did.

Very well done. I'm a little sad it's on hold right now, because it's entertaining so far. As is Mike's mark being sunglasses. What's Sam's mark? I don't think you mentioned it.

Hey Gyvon, when are you planning to pick this story back up? I love Burn Notice, and you're take/cross-over is brilliant. Mike and Sam both feel very in-character, and I love the bits with Mike's monologues and Rarity as The Client.

MY GOD

holy kentucky crapnuggets!!!

i was seeing if anyone had ponified burn notice since i never really saw anything of the such

so i decided id google "burn notice pony" see saw an average pmv then i notice something fanfiction

i thought

"oh its prolly not really pony related fanfic"

when i look at the website its in

and here i am

i was gonna draw something on the comp but thats now out the window and landed on mars right next to an unsuspecting curiosity

ps: i just finished watching that last season when she turns herself in on netflix just a couple days ago i was all like

anyhow lucky me that i hadnt decided to look up this before i finished it cuz it woulda possibly spoiled it for me

very nice good ser

cant wait to read more chapters of this

its really to bad Fiona isnt in on this though wonder if shed still be that trigger happy haha [and yes pretty sure she would haha]

ps: loved the whole Rarity being the client thing nice touch haha

I'm sorry But this story is Epic

I'm surprised someone actually decided to do a Burn Notice/MLP cross. I'm even more surprised that everything has been almost completely in character. Can't wait to see what's next.

Oh, this is Good. This is GOOD.

TWAT IS THIS??!? BURN NOTICE CROSSOVER??! EGerHYKUKXTG 54sr g325E13KYIL;VYI;9 Z a  grjyklt7x

I read it. Let me say, this is awesome. I sincerely hope you write more of this, and that you won't ever STOP!

You really should continue this series, for i must say it is just absolutely FABULOUS

MOAR

Jesus Facepalm Acheved!

Damn!

Shits going down from the Douche Overlord!