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"The pony chuckled, “Oh no, not at all. No, humans poof into existence here all the time. They normally don’t stay very long though. Mostly they’re all just a bunch of wimpy kids who stop after the first chapter because nobody liked their self-insert. But once we had Ellis here for almost a week.”"
That's so fucking true most of the time...
At first, I wasn't going to read this Fic. But then I thought:
Image: http://www.myfacewhen.net/uploads/719-well-why-the-fuck-not.jpgSo I read it anyway.
Image: http://www.gamesprays.com/images/icons/holy-shit-that-was-awesome-1780_preview.jpg
The heart in the statue easter egg, man I even shot it and it bleed, then I had to kill my self like we all do when we go to see it, but was a great place to hide, after I pissed my friends off online lol but really Niko with out guns, just doesn't feel right to me, I know some guys from the human world that want to kill Niko ends up in Ponyvill, Niko kills one with his fists, takes the gun and saves ponyvill.
The pony chuckled, “Oh no, not at all. No, humans poof into existence here all the time. They normally don’t stay very long though. Mostly they’re all just a bunch of wimpy kids who stop after the first chapter because nobody liked their self-insert. But once we had Ellis here for almost a week.”
*Looks at own fic that I'm writing.*
God bucking dammit!
This story is brilliant. It's well executed, Niko's reactions and dialogue is believable and I find it funny that HiE stories were referenced as a fairly regular occurrence. I wonder if Ellis is still around or if he just stayed the week. It sounded like a reference to the story Name's Ellis.
The only self-inserts I can bring myself to read are ones that are straight comedy. Any with romance, drama, or adventure are usually pretty uncomfortable, ESPECIALLY if the self-insert plays a pivotal/crucial/prominent role in the plot. Having that kind of stuff with the character on the side is alright when it's handled well. It's even more jarring for MLP fics, at least in my opinion, especially romance, and ESPECIALLY main characters (of any fiction).
So will he be able to do the cheat codes to get free weapons like in-game? You know, what was it....look left, look right, a step forward, throw a punch, and then....wait, that might be a different game...anyway, how about a free tank dropping out of the sky or instantly healing himself or something like that?
>>361952 That specific cheat code you are thinking of is from San Andreas. and the code is 0,0,L1,0,0,0,L1,L2,R1,Triangle,0,Triangle. Do not ask why i have that memorized. And no, i would prefer not to drop Rhino tanks out of the sky in the middle of Ponyville. Let's keep things at least partway on this side of farscape shall we.
Image: http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/184/961/tumblr_lnvvueuSsj1qcj56b.png?1318394475
I really have nothing to say to that.
Because in all honesty, I was never a comedic guy, so I can see why you can think that, I'm not very optimistic.
But that doesn't mean I have no sense humor.
Wait, I just realized I do have something to say.
Image: http://i368.photobucket.com/albums/oo121/2005r6rider/facepalm_implied.jpgWell got to go, ALiens vs predator game is starting.
Image: http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lltzgnHi5F1qzib3wo1_400.jpgNot as bad as one might think, a little odd, but nonetheless, not very bad.
Tracking to see where this goes.
>>362441 i thought it was like paying respects to your story (WHITCH I LOVE, and encouraged me to re-write a L4D cross fic i tried to write long ago, but failed. (my revised version has turned out very well)) 
This story is also a brilliant idea!!! Even thinking about GTA 4 makes me laugh my ass off!
well writtin, original, and funny
you have my applause, dear sir.
This is all so amazing. I was NEVER expecting this. Got this story idea in my head, spent a few days writing it. At about ten i submit it. So i wake up the next morning and my friend is like. "Dude, your story is a hit!" So i get on Fimfictiong to see that i have a whopping four hundred notifications. I only had to change my pants twice.
>>363503 And thank you one of my very first trackers
^ That dude right there, was one of my first. Thanks.
“Would you shut up!?” Niko yelled, a little louder than he had intended. “You are going to give me aneurism!” I was laughing to my hearts content at this point i'm always told that so now i lol when pinkie is told that and and and ......thats how equestria was made!!
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