A young mare named Harmony has to get through a school called "The Academy"
Nice! I thought about doing a school fic, but I have too much going in terms of my fanfics right now. Keep it up, I like it!
I already ship Silver and Harmony
Sorry about the everything change.
I started writing, and it turns into a school fic.
I originally meant for Celestia to kill her parents and adopt her, but something inside
me changed. I think it was that sour milk I had this morning.
Anyway, if you have complaints PLEASE post them! It means a lot
And you might think this is lame, but these 2 track are important!
Just changed some stuff around.
- Headmaster Starswirl is now Headmaster B. Rony (Couldn't resist)
- Removed Silvers comment about cameras. (It originally took place long ago, but decided against it.)
- Removed "Leaving their lives" (Used to be darker, but I cleaned it up)
That's about it!
Hope you like!
Harry Potter- like classes?
>>366372366372 Yes please
To quote a very smart brony:
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so you liked chapter 5?
I loved writing it.
>>386394386394 It was very nice :)
>>386398386398 I'm so glad somepony comments, and they're compliments as well!
I was thinking of ideas for the story and then I realized.
I'm going to have to come up with actual college scenarios.
Nice touch to the ending! I think we should see Silver and Harmony in a class together.
>>390368390368 Ending to the chapter
>>390373390373 sorry about that.
Silver should've slugged him
I like the story so far, nice job
>>410604410604 I thought of that in every other scenario.
New chapter :D.
One thing: it was kind of confusing when you mentioned silver (since there are two silvers) and it was hard to tell who was doing what. AKA clarify names
Other than that it looks good (ponies have laptops :O?)
Ponies have laptops, yes. They also have electric lights, TVs, Cameras, and the ability to type with no fingers.