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The Escaped Phyco Hero 824208

Joined December 2011
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    The Escaped Phyco Hero's Stories (8)

    • Mute

      7,144 words · 705 views · 37 likes · 3 dislikes
    • The Phone Call
      Jake Mcmanus and his friend Alex meet the Mane 6
      1,424 words · 1,016 views · 18 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Is Love Truely Blind?
      Octavia's new coltfriend becomes blind
      1,980 words · 262 views · 6 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Greatest Christmas Ever
      I Ezio the Pegasus personally dedicate this story to anyone who has family members in the army
      2,727 words · 290 views · 7 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Love of Darkness
      15,813 words · 595 views · 6 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Escape
      1,298 words · 253 views · 3 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Terro's life
      1,220 words · 235 views · 1 likes · 2 dislikes
    • This isn't Equestria Doc…
      1,189 words · 150 views · 1 likes · 3 dislikes

    My name's Paint Brush. I live in a small town called Ponyville with my marefriend Octavia and her roommate, Vynal Scratch. I'm a born artist. Able to replicate great paintings in matter of hours as it took the original creators days or weeks. I was in the middle of a commission for a good friend of mine, a stallion by the name of Fancy Pants, until a spray paint bottle clogged up on me. I had zero idea the following events would happen because of BLUE SPRAYPAINT!

    First Published
    27th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    27th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 11 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 36m ago · · ·
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    I honestly promise to read this. I just want to wait for chapters...

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 34m ago · · ·
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    Tracked, will read later.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 19m ago · · ·
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    If I may critique just a wee bit (perhaps on the finicky side of things though, I may warn you... :twilightsheepish:),  one of the things I noticed was that I missed the (Scratch) written to show the view had changed to Scratch's. Perhaps bolding or underlining that part of the text could make it slightly easier to read?  The other is the way Vinyl Scratch is spelled... :twilightsheepish: Other than that, the story is off to an excellent start, and I will be tracking and reading any updates! :twilightsmile:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Creepy thumbnail sharing is creepy.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·
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    One dislike for this story? Well, sometimes people turn their computers upside down to like it again. You write well, I must say, verily! (Just read it, by the way, didn't regret it)

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>377751

    Thanks for the complement

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This looks pretty fuckin good so far. :derpytongue2:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Oh i get it, he becomes blind

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 1d ago · · ·
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    at first I was like :rainbowhuh: then i was like :rainbowderp:

    btw its twas awesome chapter

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>456803

    Thank you

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 16w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Description:

    Vynal Scratch

    -Vinyl Scratch

    Gonna steer away now... Good luck though

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