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Tchernobog

Joined October 2011
1,438 followers

Complete AppleDash fanatic!

Stories (6)

  • Mood Wings
    The body language of wings.

    9,499 words · 27,779 views · 2,748 likes · 40 dislikes
  • Felt Heart
    Rarity discovers an old tradition involving the exchange of felt dolls as a sign of affection. This sparks a brilliant plan to play matchmaker with her friends, and between herself and Twilight. But brilliant plans never go as expected, do they?
    34,594 words · 14,323 views · 1,294 likes · 24 dislikes
  • Those Blue Wings
    A bad cold causes a teleportation spell mixup, with uncomfortable consequences for two ponies
    66,260 words · 30,324 views · 2,082 likes · 49 dislikes
  • Just A Couple of Ponies
    Applejack, Twilight, and Rainbow Dash really enjoy each other's company. So much so that some ponies are beginning to wonder about them. Twilight and Applejack are a couple after all, so why does Dash seem to tag along everywhere?
    39,900 words · 8,890 views · 1,231 likes · 48 dislikes
  • In The Forest
    8,690 words · 1,400 views · 167 likes · 18 dislikes
  • At The Drop of A Hat
    23,906 words · 891 views · 144 likes · 15 dislikes

Blog Posts (137)

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A short trip to Canterlot with Rainbow Dash and Applejack is the perfect opportunity for Twilight to test out her new long-distance Teleportation spell. But a nasty cold dashes the hopes of a quick trip, and makes the spell disappear in smoke: instead of arriving in Canterlot, the three find themselves in the nearby Everfree Forest, and discover that their location is not the only thing that went wrong.

While Rainbow has exchanged her wings and tail for a straw blond tail, Applejack has acquired a rainbow tail as well as a pair of strong, blue wings.

While Twilight attempts to find a spell to return the body parts to their rightful owners, the others must attempt to deal with this situation... and with their changing feelings.

First Published
26th Oct 2011
Last Modified
9th Nov 2012

Comments ( 973 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

The rewrite is an improvement, looking forward to a next installment!

#2 · Chapter 1 · 129w, 3d ago · · ·

>>18980

Thank you! It was initially going to be chapter two but I combined it with chapter 1.. which ended up being enough of a word count for Equestria Daily. I just got word it passed through proofreaders, so it should be up there in a few days! :pinkiehappy:

#3 · Chapter 1 · 129w, 1d ago · · ·

>>1898

Congratulations! I've got a  story myself that needs rewriting before it can be up on Equestria Daily... *looks glumly at it*

Eh, it needs a rewrite anyways.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 129w, 13h ago · · ·

Now this I like a lot its funny, and I can see this being an episode too! great work!  I just wish this was a twilight and Dash shipping.   please Keep it up!!!

:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

#5 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 5d ago · · ·

FIRST! hehe I just came from the google.docs chat :raritywink:

I'll repeat my statement from there:

Great chapter. Pinkie lampshading the shipping names was pure gold :pinkiehappy:

#6 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 5d ago · · ·

This is a good idea :scootangel:

#7 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 5d ago · · ·

you if Twilight would have told Princess Celestia. what had happened I think she would want to help and not wait and have Twilight do it, I mean these are the elements were talking about.


:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:

#8 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 5d ago · · ·

>>26838

That's the thing. Physically, they're fine. The clinic visit doesn't show anything wrong, apart from stuff being on the wrong pony. If needed, they can still easily use the elements :)

#9 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 5d ago · · ·

Oh boy, this is good stuff.

#10 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 5d ago · · ·

>>26838

Agreed. If nothing else, it would be useful practice in case something like this happened in a more... severe case. Say, mix-ups of internal organs, or incompatible biologies. What if It had been Rainbow Dash and Spike instead of Applejack? Or Gilda? Or even a Diamond Dog?

If I was one of these girls, I'd want a full team of medical magicians, healers, and scientists on hand to study this stuff.

#11 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 4d ago · · ·

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

#12 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 3d ago · · ·

I would have enjoyed more if both of RD and AJ switches bodies... Not that I dont like this story.

#13 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 3d ago · · ·

>>28232

I'd say that's been over-done. I've seen (admittedly not read) a few fics of the kind. This, I'd like to hope, is different enough to draw attention  :derpytongue2:

#14 · Chapter 2 · 127w, 2d ago · · ·

>>28234 i think you really need to mix it up and take away the strength that :ajsleepy: had and give it to :rainbowhuh:

that way they are BOTH effected heavly by the incedent, also you kinda already alluded to it in this chapter

:trollestia:

#15 · Chapter 2 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR

#16 · Chapter 2 · 126w, 21h ago · 1 · ·

>>35040

Don't worry, chapter 3 is being worked on ;) I just want it to be right :pinkiehappy:

>>29262

Chapter 3 should have some of that, you'll see :scootangel::rainbowkiss:

#17 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

a bath you say? :ajsmug: :rainbowwild:

#18 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

Plz say its water proof! :twilightsmile:

#19 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

Poooooooor Dashie... Oh colt... Nothing right can happen to poor Dashie, can it? Anyhoof... w00t! First comment! 8D (One thinks) Anyhoof, keep up the great work! Looking forward to chapter 4!

~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria

p.s. Thanks for taking your time with the actual shipping.

#20 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

>>38986 *Sighs* Trevor is such a braggart... Sorry! Still looking forward to moar excellence in the next chapter though!

#21 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

Awesome chapter

#22 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

>>38986

Haha, I was slightly worried you might not really like this after that one commend on ED (though I can't argue with it. It is rather trollestia-ish... I just don't see  Celestia jumping in and fixing everything. More of a mother figure 'guiding' twilight.)

As for shipping, it'll get there :) A personal issue I see with many, many ship fics is the pacing of the shipping itself, rather than the story pacing. Sometimes, it just feels entirely too fast/abrupt. I think something slower is a more accurate portrayal, and I hope I can express this right :)

#23 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

can i have more.....? i will give you my internets

#24 · Chapter 2 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

Trollestia strikes again

Has the magic to help Twilight's friends? lol nope make her do it just for the lulz

#25 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

LOL Rainbow is right if some one dyed my Wings I would be angry too! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

you did a fantastic Twilight too, and the joke about letting her read and study was great, I can see her getting mad over it. Keep it up!

#26 · Chapter 2 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·
#27 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

>>39066

Thanks :) It's definitely the most important thing for me. I've seen too many fics break characterization in varying degrees. I don't want that! :scootangel:

#28 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

>>38982

Yes, yes indeed. :scootangel::pinkiehappy::moustache:

(i <3 your choice of icons. SO PERFECT.)

#29 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · 1 · 1 ·

There are so many stylistic and grammatical errors in this fic. If you'd like, I could compile a list for you.

#30 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

Ah! You have done a fine job mate. Even if they are a bunch of prancin' show ponies!! Gragh!

Get out of here you stupid sniper!

I apologize for that, he sneaks on my computer when I'm not looking. I actually come with a message from the herd.

The herd is pleased, you have our attention! You may live...for now. :pinkiecrazy: So long as you do not rush the shipping. :pinkiesmile:

And now, I sign off!

Godspeed you magnificent bastard-BlazingShadowBrony

#31 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

started reading this on EQD but i like FimFiction much better and glad i found it on here. Love your Story. Keep it upp :D:pinkiehappy:

#32 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

A bath? I can see where this is going...:pinkiehappy:

#33 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

I'm not one to really enjoy ship fics, but this one has me interested. At the very least, it seems like you've nailed all the personalities.

#34 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 3d ago · · ·

>>38982

Indeed... It Begins:ajsmug:

#35 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 2d ago · · ·

Oh boy, I can just picture in my mind what will happen during that bath... although since I have a rather dirty mind, it will probably not be similar to what will really happen...

Great story so far, keep it up!!! :pinkiehappy:

#36 · Chapter 3 · 125w, 2d ago · · ·

>>39438

:scootangel:

I have my...plans for it ;)

#37 · Chapter 3 · 124w, 6d ago · · ·

Rainbow is giving AJ a bath? Bow-chicka-wow-wow :rainbowwild:

#38 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · 3 · ·

“Nice bath, huh?”

“......Shut up.”

LMAO that was great! and AJ got her first wing wood too, all and all very funny work.

#39 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

“Nice bath, huh?”

“......Shut up.”

Lol, oh Big Mac, you tease. I love where this is going.

#40 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

granny smith just laughed... she just laughed... wow... Awesome story bro!

#41 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

:yay:yay

#42 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

Rofl at the ending loool

Keep up the awesome work

#43 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

Very good read! MOAR!!!

#44 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

Big Mac the troll?! Never saw that coming... XD EPIC

~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria

#45 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

fantastic

#46 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

Been very much enjoying the pacing in this story - it doesn't jump straight into shipping, it slowly develops it.

#47 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

>>48381

:twilightblush:

Glad you like it! It's definitely my biggest aim in this story, to do proper pacing. I see far too many fics just jumping straight in, and it breaks the entire flow :/

#48 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

>>48381 >>48391

I absolutely agree with the previous comment. This has some of the best pacing of any shipfic I've read. Can't wait for more, and this is coming from someone who isn't really an AppleDash fan (I'm usually more of a DashiePie fan:derpytongue2: )

#49 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

>>48391

Indeed, my interest in a story usually immediatly drops significantly when in the first few paragraphs it basically says "pony A has secretly loved pony B for years blah blah blah". This pacing is much more interesting, its a shame that it seems so rare. Hell I'm not even sure I've seen this level of pacing in any other fic before.

>>48432

Same goes for me - PinkieDash/Rainbow Pie (whatever) is my favourite shipping. Unfortunately I rarely seem to be able to find stories for it, and then often struggle to find good ones when I do. AppleDash comes in second or third best for me though, but even if it didn't, this fic is good enough that I doubt it would matter :pinkiehappy:

#50 · Chapter 4 · 124w, 1d ago · · ·

Excellent job thus far with the pacing and humor. Much of my dislike for ship fics stems from the fact that many of them tend to fall into the "THEY ARE IN LOVE" trap. There's no real build-up or plausible explanation as to why the characters are romantically involved, they just... are.

Luckily you haven't fallen into that habit, and for that, you are to be commended. Good work. :twilightsmile:

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