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BronyRave24 2429

Joined December 2011
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    Pinkie makes something that might just change the way ponies live FOREEEEEEEVVVVVEEEEERRR

    First Published
    24th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    24th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 17 )

    #1 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    .............

    :facehoof:

    Words do not describe.

    Also, I'm not seeing a 'Random' tag.

    #3 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I'm sorry but this was hilarious!!! I lost it after she said she bought it from Walmart and Target! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: The last part with the brony was funny!:pinkiehappy:

    #4 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Is this what it feels like to be mentally handicapped?

    #5 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>359362

    Your comment combined with your icon.

    Bucking hilarious.

    #6 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>359502

    Oh, shit, I didn't even stop to consider that.

    Swag. :moustache:

    #8 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>359513

    That picture is the embodiment of swag.

    #9 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>359515

    He does make quite the...

    Smooth criminal.

    #10 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>359519

    You, I like.

    #12 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>359521

    Ah thank you. :rainbowdetermined2:

    #13 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This was funny. Although, there are some grammatical errors in it. I relly enjoyed this.

    #14 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    *really :rainbowlaugh:

    #15 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wut. That was disturbing. The casual mention of nesquik was funny, but you took the whole fourth wall thing way too far. Oh, and learn to spell. Also, good stories don't only consist of dialogue.

    #16 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>359844 Good? what is the meaning of the word "good"?

    #17 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>360562

    Well, I'm just saying that it would be a lot more readable if you didn't use so much dialogue. Finding a balance between the dialogue and prose is hard, but it's kinda necessary for a flowing, consistent, and legible story.

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