Pinkie makes something that might just change the way ponies live FOREEEEEEEVVVVVEEEEERRR
Words do not describe.
Also, I'm not seeing a 'Random' tag.
I'm sorry but this was hilarious!!! I lost it after she said she bought it from Walmart and Target! The last part with the brony was funny!
Is this what it feels like to be mentally handicapped?
Your comment combined with your icon.
Oh, shit, I didn't even stop to consider that.
Quite so good sir.
That picture is the embodiment of swag.
He does make quite the...
You, I like.
Ah thank you.
This was funny. Although, there are some grammatical errors in it. I relly enjoyed this.
Wut. That was disturbing. The casual mention of nesquik was funny, but you took the whole fourth wall thing way too far. Oh, and learn to spell. Also, good stories don't only consist of dialogue.
>>359844359844 Good? what is the meaning of the word "good"?
Well, I'm just saying that it would be a lot more readable if you didn't use so much dialogue. Finding a balance between the dialogue and prose is hard, but it's kinda necessary for a flowing, consistent, and legible story.