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yellowstripedflutterbat


Hello! Just your average, somewhat shy English mare who ships things, occasionally writes things and very occasionally finishes things. Fluttershy and Rarity are best ponies <3

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Cute. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by yellowstripedflutterbat deleted Feb 19th, 2014

I haven't read a light and nice story like this for a while. Thank you.

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:pinkiehappy: no, thank YOU, sir! the pleasure is all mine, I'm very happy you liked it ^.^

Very nice,very nice bravo!

*Clap clap*

:twilightsmile:

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*bows* why thank you very much, you're too kind! :twilightblush:

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Well thank you too for writing this awesome story! +1 from me =)

Aww, that's really sweet! :pinkiehappy:

This was very sweet. I thought you had Pinkie's tone of voice and character down quite well, and I liked how you addressed the rather large differences between Pinkie and Fluttershy. One possible point of improvement would be in fleshing out locations a bit better, as in the scenes with Rainbow and Rarity, there wasn't really any mention of where the characters were or what they were doing besides talking.

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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it ^^ yeah, descriptions have always been a weak point of mine - I tend to focus on keeping everyone in character and forget about the settings ^^;; but it's definitely something I'll work on and keep an eye out for in future! thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it :pinkiehappy:

This was fantastic!
It was fluffy bunnies to the power of marshmallows (scientifically speaking of course) :pinkiehappy:

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woop, that's just what I was aiming for! :yay: thanks so much, I'm really glad you liked it :pinkiehappy:

When I read "Au Naturel" I saw that you've also written this story and have been really hyped about it since; this ship is actually my favorite one ever and I have faith in your writing skills so I assumed it could only be good. I've not been disappointed.

The beginning is a bit weird to me; I get what's happening but I don't think it necessarily belongs into the story. However, the story itself is a great take on the characters plus it's just so really cute; exactly how I like it. yay :yay:

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Aww, thank you so much! PinkieShy is my favourite ship ever too~ :yay::heart::pinkiehappy: I know what you mean about the beginning - looking at it now it does feel a bit like a different fic, and tbh I'd probably change it if I were to rewrite this fic. I'm really happy you enjoyed the rest though! :yay:

Wow...this was simply one heck of a damned good story. I thought that you did a good job with the pacing and your representation of both Pinkie and Flutters was on Par. To me this didn't feel like a story alone, it felt like I was watching an episode in my head, like it was canon! Thank you for writing this wonderful flutterpie fic.

Have a like, a follow and a favourite my friend! I can't wait to read more from you!

-Frost:pinkiesmile:

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Thank you so much!! a fic feeling like canon is about the highest compliment there is for me~ :raritystarry: I'm really happy you enjoyed it and it was my pleasure, thank you very much for the like/fave/follow, friend! :pinkiehappy:

Adorable fluff for a vastly underrated ship! I absolutely loved it!

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Thank you so much! I know right, it is totally an underrated ship! :pinkiegasp: I'm super happy you enjoyed it~ :yay:

Damn. If I had known this story was going to be this cute I wouldn't have wasted it on my currently sleep-deprived brain.

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Hee, thank you! :pinkiehappy: I'm happy you enjoyed it, sleep deprived and all :raritywink:

Wholesome, beautifully sweet story! Pinkie and shy are so perfect for each other awww

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thank you so much!! So happy you enjoyed, aren't they just?? :yay::heart::pinkiehappy:

fluff is truly a legendary genre c:

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