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Deja Vu
(noun)
a feeling of having already experienced the present situation

Lightning Twister finds himself in a very familiar situation when he finds an abandoned colt and filly one night in ally in Ponyville.

Coverart done by: The Irish Pony

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 56 )

Sorry I don't have the coverart done yet:fluttercry: I just can't get the right position without making a total mess! I may have to do a simple cute pic with the foals like a portrait if that's okay?:twilightsheepish:

so cute.
flutters just might get grandfoals.

Heartbreaking for the colt and filly to sleep in only a cardboard box and with just a light blanket as warmth. :fluttercry: However, Lightning being so gentle and kind to them during this whole ordeal was truly awesome! :rainbowkiss: I'm looking forward to how Scootaloo's reaction will be. :scootangel: Very good story so far my friend.

i love it :pinkiehappy: and lol the story title

3987924 Thank you very much :twilightsmile:

3987760 Thank you very much my friend, hopefully things will start looking up for our two new faces. :twilightsmile:


3987631 She just might :raritywink:


3987484 Thank You my friend hopefully there will be plenty more daws to come. :twilightsmile:

3990755 Your welcome so much :pinkiehappy:

3990755 oh yippie another 3987760. The two of you are gonna kill me if Fred2266 and midnightshadow1 don't first

Alright! Another story! Now I have something to look forward to! Great job so far.:pinkiehappy::heart:

you can write one hell story as always i will be looking forward to more.

Wait. There's going to be more?

YES!

4000951 Yep there is going to be more. :twilightsmile:

3999024 Thank you my friend. I'm glad your enjoying the story so far. I hope you enjoy whats ahead :twilightsmile:

3994884 Thank you very much my friend. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I hope you will enjoy the future chapters as well. :twilightsmile:

For the past few days Scootaloo had not been feeling very well

cough*Preggers* cough!
:duck:

i love it :pinkiehappy: and i am sure that Lightning and Scootaloo will be able to think of something to do with those two kids

Lightning Twister saw his house in the distance and began to slow down so he could land safely and softly.

:rainbowhuh: Did I just- DID I READ LIGHTNING AS ORANGE?!!! :facehoof: I'M NOT DYSLEXIC!!!

This Is one of my most favorite mini-series ever.:heart::heart::scootangel: keep up the good work my fine Stallion.

i like it and your welcome

It sounds like a certain orphanage needs to be thoroughly investigated. :twilightangry2:

Pretty good story

This is so dang beautiful!!! :heart::heart::heart: All of my feels!!!

I KNEW IT! I knew Scoots was pregnant! :scootangel:

I just don't know how you do it i-i just don't know how your stories are just fucking fantastic there so good your stories should be physical copies thats how good they are!!!

:rainbowkiss: Baby baby baby! It's going to be a boy, and he'll be named Mike! :scootangel:

i bet flutters is a proud mother right now.

did you forget to put this story to complete since it is finished now

Glad I gave you the idea. This ending is pretty heart warming too. :twilightsmile:

Awww...:fluttercry::pinkiesad2: Pretty heartwarming. Dem Feels. Great way to end a pretty good story. May Thunderwave live a good happy life.:twilightsmile::yay: Awesome job.:yay:

Although this story was short and is the epilogue of Lighting Twister, we all loved your work. :pinkiesad2::fluttercry::ajsmug::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::scootangel::applecry::unsuresweetie::raritydespair:

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This image is the only way I sum up my attitude towards this story. Good job.

good ending :pinkiehappy: but i wish it didn't have to end :fluttercry:

i hope for a story telling there family adventure

There has to be something form their past for the little colt to be so protective of his sister, even against kind ponies like Lightning Twister and Scootaloo. Especially something bad must have happened to the sister more than the brother.:fluttershysad: However, a sweet and beautiful thing for the colt to do for his sister by singing her a lullaby.:twilightsmile:

You are a basterd!!!
You made me cry...... agen....

"Even though he was a grown stallion he still shrunk under the eyes that made a dragon cry and a cockatrice run away."
Best quote EVER! :heart::pinkiehappy:
-cantstoplaughingatthatquote-

This was an incredibly adorable series ~ Keep up the great work! :heart:

Do Pokemon moves count as pony names, too?

I CALLED IT. I KNEW IT FROM THE MOMENT SCOOTALOO SAID SEE WASN'T FELLING GOOD FOR A COUPLE WEEKS.

the fact that you brought back lightning's father was a bit of a turn off. and also I find that you use the SHOCKED expression a bit too much. but other than that I'd give this a 9/10 so far.:scootangel:

:twilightsmile: What a happy family.

Pregnant Scoots! All aboard the YEStrain!

4098346 Or we evacuate the good ponies and in the middle of the night we smash the rest with my giant crystal alicorn of rainbow friendship!

KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!! HELL YEAH! SCOOTS IS PREGGERS!!!!!!! Also Melody seems adorable! And YUSSSSS THEY GOT ADOPTED (although that much was obvious from the start :raritywink:)

The feels! And you have my attention!

Deja vu
I've just been in this place before
Higher on the street
And I know it's my time to go
Calling you, and the search is a mystery
Standing on my feet
It's so hard when I try to be me, woah
Deja vu
I've just been in this time before
Higher on the beat
And I know it's a place to go
Calling you and the search is a mystery
Standing on my feet
It's so hard when I try to be me, yeah

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