If I had a special talent, I'd like to think it's my imagination.
After Princess Celestia of all ponies botches a newly discovered spell, Twilight Sparkle and her friends find themselves turned into planets.
Much to our heroin's relief, they are still capable of interaction, But much to Twilight's grief, they can violate the rules she feels they must obey.
Can they find a way to fix their situation?
PS: This story is not meant to be taken seriously, for the most part.
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HAHAHA! I really like this. Wonder if I can give Twilight some pointers on being a cosmic body, like the neutrino telepathy web.
I demand you write more <_<
This is not optional.
do it
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Huh.
BRILLIANT!
EDIT: Also, that indenting is killing my reading flow. Do you preview it before you post? Those sentences break off awkwardly at the end and finish on the start of the next line. What, do ya triple-tab? that's a huge indent, so be careful of your sentence layout on the fic.
~Dash The Stampede
Holy balls, this is hilarious! I feel the need to put this in here though:
4282842 Whoa dude, watch that embiggening, will you?
Despite being silly, I'd love to read more this. 10/10
Excellent job.
Dash the Stampede. Glad you like the premise. The originality is what I look for, above all else. Though I also aim for world building and characterization, I write mostly to inspire. Call me ambitious, but I hope to create a sub-genre with my works.
Also, I would appreciate it, if you could tell me how I can keep my sentences in perfectly aligned order, as that's one of the minor reasons why I hesitate to submit stories. I can do better with sentence structure, but whenever I have my sentences perfectly aligned, they always wind up shifted either left or right. I don't know how to fix indents. Please, help me!
This story is only meant to give me that necessary writing advise. Then I can start on the big ideas.
PS: How do I make sure not to get any down votes? I'm scared that I might get them without even knowing why.
Ponies as planets...this is officially the most original premise I've read on this website. Rest assured...
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