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  • T Further Regrets

    Life has not been simple for Pound Cake. He and his accepted brother Narrow follow a case to Ponyville, a town of mysteries and memories. Pound will face challenges he's never known, and will have to make the ultimate decision again and again.  · Waldo the Digital_Hex
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Dear Miss Pie, we in Baltimare regret to inform you that, due to extreme weather conditions, your employers were unfortunately taken, and in conjunction with their will they would like you to become the legal guardians of their foals...

Official sequel.

Has a spin-off story.

First Published
17th Feb 2014
Last Modified
3rd Mar 2014

More please more

Jesus... this is so sad...

Beautifully done though.

Why must you give us these feels

I....I didn't ask for these Feels!!! :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

Amazingly done. Just absolutely Amazing.

Comment posted by Waldo the Digital_Hex deleted at 9:32am on the 17th of February, 2014

DANG IT! Someone else beat me to writing this... drat...

*added to read later*

*sniff*

It's so sad. :fluttershbad:

>>3958367

*commence backpedaling*

>>3958386

It's a joke, lol. No new tags are going to be added :twilightsmile:

>>3958392

*cease backpedaling*

I'm watching you... >.>

Alli can say is a tear LITERALLY fell from my face.

:ajsleepy::applecry::fluttercry::fluttershysad::raritycry::raritydespair:

Please continue.:twilightsmile:

Well damn...

Wish I could just hug all three of them.  :fluttershysad:

>>3958417 Okay to be honest, I started reading expecting it to be..well...bad...I've just come across to many that are ham handed in their execution. This was good though. It was well both. Good damn for the story, bad damn in story.

The feels man.... the feels.... :raritycry:

I like this.

>>3958452 I'm withholding full judgment until the fic is complete but thus far it is looking promising.

>>3958456

It's gonna get light. All sad is in this chapter :pinkiesmile:

>>3958466 From an orphan to you. Don't let them forget. We move on, we never fully forget. And sometimes the smallest things remind us of those we lost.

this has the making of a great story.

GAH! The feels! :raritycry:

I'm sorry, I can't read this right now. I'm tired, and when I'm tired I can feel emotions to the maximum, and if this is really as sad as said, than I'm going to breakdown in the middle of the night. I'll save it to my read later and read it in the morning. I bet its great, but reading it at this very second is a serious no-no. Seriously, the picture is making me want to cry.

~CloudCrusher Signing off for the Night~

Great story, loved this. Also...

and said their nighttime prayers.

Do they have religion in Equestria? Not to sounds rude or anything.

>>3958561

Who knows? Maybe they do, maybe they don't. Who's to say they can't pray to anything, after all. Personally, I like the idea of prayer, even though I'm not religious myself.

:applecry: My feels hurt.

There aren't many good two-shots around here.

This one is right up there.

Riz

>>3958573

I have to tell you, I honestly avoid 'sad' , 'tragedy' tags but this..this fic..it hurts my heart but in the end heals them. Thank you for giving us a happy ending

>>3958635

:twilightsmile: I really wanted to see how it would turn out. Even the picture itself begs for a happy ending

Awwww.

Feels still hurt though but awww.

>>3958657

I-I'm sorry about your feels!!! :fluttershyouch::fluttershbad:

I WASNT TRYING TO HURT THEEEMMM:raritydespair::raritycry:

Waldo... What have you done?! :fluttercry::raritydespair::raritycry: YOU'VE REDUCED ME TO TEARS A THING ONLY TWO OTHER AUTHORS ON THIS SITE CAN SAY THEY'VE DONE :applecry: so many feels... And then... Bittersweet joy at the end...

>>3958669

WHY IS EVERYBODY AROUND ME YELLING AT ME FOR MAKING THEM CRYYYYYYYY:raritydespair::raritycry::raritydespair:

gues I'll just have to anounce there is a new place for this story.

even if there is cause to check a few minor details.

:pinkiegasp:

>>3958671 my reason is mainly, in most cases stories that involve grief I can rationalize out the grief due to having experienced a large amount of it in my own life, the death of my great grandmother, the death of my grandfather on my mother's side, numerous pets. I guess the secondary reasoning is that due to Asperger's Syndrome I generally skip the stages of grief up to acceptance and just accept that things happen... And the stories that can actually make me cry and experience true grief are truly stories to be remembered.

>>3958684 I'm sharing this story on facebook and in one of my favorite feature boxes.

>>3958502 That picture repaired my feels a little :pinkiesad2:

>>3958693 if it can make me cry then yes it is.

>>3958709 that would be a good impression, for he occasion.

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