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A Hoof-ful of Dust
You can't see the forest...
A Hoof-ful of Dust
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Great story, the chapters were a little short but other then that pretty good. five moustaches
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They're not really meant to be full chapters, per se, I just wanted to do something structurally different to the single scene (+ coda) stories I've been writing for the WTG. There's a bunch of recurring patterns in them that wouldn't have been as obvious if the whole thing was just a single chapter. But glad you liked it otherwise!
3975819 I added this to the sweetie belle group.
That was actually really enjoyable. I would've liked to hear those songs. Well done sir.
Ah, another executive moron. That's PRECISELY the sort of music they want to listen to!
Lose the agent, sweetiebelle. go indie.
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Oh, neat. Thanks!
This was great, though it could have been a little longer.
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My original idea for this story was much larger -- there was a much larger set of characters in the underground music scene, and a manufactured rivalry with a boy band -- but was put on the back burner for being a bit too ambitious to write for someone who knows basically nothing of what it's like to be a musician. The same basic beats -- be true to yourself, mainstream music blows -- made it into this version, and I think there's something to getting to an idea without belabouring the point.
3986949 Eh, I guess.
I have to say, I really love this story. It's the first time I read a MLP: FiM fanfiction with Sweetie Belle that has started a successful music carreer and I love her see in this setting!
It was also interesting to get this look in the Canterlot music scene.
And you have a very vivid style of writing, reading your fanfiction gives you really a vibe for the lifestyle there!
Continue writing, there is much talent!
Dang. This was good. I might just follow you....
>follows<
What you did.
It's there.
And I see it.
Can the filly explode? Can it explode twice?
Like how you worked that in there.
Mh... I'm meh about this one. The message is a good one, but the plot is entirely predictable, and doesn't really have anything that made me glad that I read it.
Beautifully done. Bravo.
It's a pretty cruel dilemma. The average band is on top for what, 2-3 years? You don't change & grow, you are doomed. But, you could fill a galaxy with fallen stars that tried to change their image & failed.