• Member Since 15th Feb, 2014
  • offline last seen Aug 15th, 2016

NeightDuskDhey


I create random sometimes weird transformation stories, or regular drama comedies!

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NOW UPDATED AS OF 23rd OF APRIL!
This story may be familiar to some ponies that's because it is a remake/sequel to a story by Kaiden, entitled "calami's shopping trip" it's story 4 in his balloon tales series.
This version though is a remake/sequel... Mostly sequel.

Dhey was searching for supplies one day, until he is told of a store with unbelievably real looking pony balloons. He goes to have a look, what follows is unimaginable!!

This version has: male protagonist , over 550 more words.
This updated version of my version of his story ( confusing) now has a bit of back story, better grammar and wording, and a little more of an idea of the entire story around this shop which may come in a sequel! Or spin off or what ever.


Please read the original here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/158562/balloon-tales

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Comment posted by NeightDuskDhey deleted May 7th, 2014

I'm kind of curious as to why all the comments are deleted. With all the different users it doesn't exactly look like spam

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