• Member Since 23rd Dec, 2011
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SonOfTheNorthe


I'm a 17 year old metalhead with super long hair.. I like to prance around like a fairy a lot.

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Gary Stu is a totally awesome brony, who is somehow transported to Equestria. Everything turns out perfectly. Or does it? He's muthabuckin' Gary Stu. Or course it does.
(Note. I may or may not add more chapters, depending on your guy's response. For that reason, I am marking it as "On Hiatus")

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Comments ( 48 )

One view. Three dislikes. How the hell does that work? Reading this just to spite the ones who disliked it without even reading it.

I'm going to guess that the dislikes are due to the Edward picture. That picture doomed this story to fail, no matter how good it is. lol:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Wait, this is a trollfic, right? Please let this be a trollfic.

Haha I see what you're doing here. And thank you. I am getting so tired of all of these stories that are like "LOL I'M A BRONY BUT I'M SAD SO I'M GONNA KILL MYSELF/MAGICALLY GO TO PONYVILLE WITH NO REAL PLAUSIBLE EXPLANATION"

Well looking at the tags, the title, the description and the cover pic.... you've done well :rainbowlaugh:

Why did you use that picture?:rainbowhuh:
I think you just shot your self in the foot with that one. :rainbowlaugh:

That picture deserves my dislike on principle alone :flutterrage:

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i believe it was the point! a bad fic just so people can rage on it. a stress relief for people with stress.

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im sure it is. something can't be so horrid unless its planned

Oh god.:pinkiesick: it's so bad. But I know you did it on purpose,:trixieshiftleft:
Do I vote it up cause you did what you were trying to do? or do I vote it down because it's so bad? :twilightangry2:

564049 You're on a website for fanfiction written by mostly adult, mostly male fans of a television series aimed at preteen girls. Screw principles, we have ponies.
564074 I beg to differ. There was one poet who became famous for writing hilarious poems. The problem? He was trying to write deeply moving tragedies. I don't remember who it was, though.

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And yet, one of them still put that picture up:facehoof: Screw logic, we have ponies.:pinkiesad2:

564078
Where is the like button for this comment? :derpytongue2:

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Seriously? Disliking a fic because of the picture? :facehoof: The entire fic was written, it seems, as a joke. If anything the picture is an insult to vampfairy that shall not be named and worth a laugh.

Yay for fics that don't take themselves seriously!

This fic is disgusting, crude, and overall pointless.

Thumbs up and faved.

Pictures cause thumb downs at times, Like right now.

Okay, so, I'm thinking I should probably change the picture to Jacob....

564359 Yeah not sure that'd help too much :rainbowlaugh: Thanks for the story by the way. It gave me a good laugh at the end of a long day

Hey guys, I know this was supposed to be a huge joke, but I would have liked it to be a well written joke. Please tell me how I can improve it with constructive criticism.

Ha nice! Love the jookes here I've read a lott of gary...mary sue fics, and i loled at this,

:rainbowkiss:< cider..sweet cider..sweet cider, Yeah sweet cider! *cue electric piano*
And how would it not be complete without everyones favorite yellow pony getting a wingboner over our Oc the instant they see us?
:flutterrage:< Say that by me again, i buckin dare ya.

Umm,...next part
:pinkiehappy:: that thasted good though! can i have some other body fluids
:rainbowhuh:<can't tell if sexual inuind, or cupcakes.
:pinkiehappy:: Sometimes i cut myself for sweet srurp!
:rainbowderp:< ...the lader.

:trixieshiftleft:< trixie is utter disusted by how unrealistic and stupid this thing this.
:trixieshiftright:< and for that i congraulate you, you hitt the nail right on the head

what did i just read??? I really thought that was one of the most funny AND random stories i have ever read!I am probably going to break the fabric of time when i say this, but please continue making the story. And i also know that Gary Stu is actually Edward...am i right?

like i said, please continue:rainbowkiss:

Why did you use a sad excuse for a vampire as the cover art?:rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

564894 just get rid of the cover picture just go without one you will do better

This made me laugh! Mission accomplished!

...Now, why can't other fic writers actually put this much work into their grammar and such? Seriously. :ajbemused:

This story was awful. Thumbs up~

The sad part is that everybody's getting on your for your choice in pictures when it chosen for a reason.

Actually I was more put off about the first two paragraphs being so focused on scatological humor.
Interesting concept, but a bit too random for my tastes.

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I shall continue this story, if only for you. Maybe. It took me more than a month to write this. (More like an hour, but I was rarely in the mood to write.)

And no, Gary is not Edward. I just used Edward for the picture because he was the most annoying Gary Stu I could think of.

Wow...this was probably the weirdest fanfic I've ever read, but damn that shit is funny. I really lol'd at the end.
A lot of people would consider this to be disturbing, but who says that fanfics always have to be normal?

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