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Centuries after most of her friends have all passed away, Twilight decides to make one last trip into the past. No interacting, no greeting deceased friends, no reunion with her beloved marefriend. Just one quick glance at a life long lost.
However, for better or worse, she'll end up getting much, much more than that.
This story has a prequel entitled The Last Train Home.
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I personally didn't find anything wrong with it, this story is great! I haven't seen a sad immortal Twilight fic where she goes back in time before. Definitely worthy of a favourite!
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Ah, thank you! I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the favourite!
It was very good... You've got a like and a watch from me ;)
Good story amigo. If you would be so kind, please enter this piece into the RariTwi Creation Contest: Round Two.
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Ahh, thanks!! I'm really glad people are liking it!
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Thank you!! And will do! I wasn't sure if I should submit it there because I'm still a new writer here whoops
3931302 Actually, I love new writers in the contest. And it helps that your story is pretty good. Keep it up.
altho i don't always enjoy sad moments of any kinda
; i have to say that this was a pretty interestin fic so far n' i can't wait for moar to read 
this story is plain awesome n' even tho it's sad at times
; but, if u keep to ur hopefully fore-shadowin bit on future 
's return to her own timeline then she might be just fine in t long run 
Awwe its over already? IT JUST STARTED!!!!
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oh my god nO, it's not over!! I forgot to put the "To Be Continued" at the end hahaha whoops
I guess I made the end of chapter a little *too* dramatic
But no, rest assured, there's still more to come. :D
I just wanted to say that this story is absolutely amazing. This is the first story I've read on this site to draw me in so quickly and give me so many feelings!
4016900 Ah!! Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it!!
There hasn't been an update soon because I've been out of the country this week, so I've only had time to write in little intervals. And, unfortunately, my writing style isn't linear so I've written a lot but of different sections of the story whoops
I'm hoping to at least post an update by the beginning of next week.
Thanks again for your comment!! c:
And thus, we have this stories first problem. I can only upvote it once. Damned fine chapter amiga, keep it up.
that was simply adorkable
; luved how 
n' future 
's 2nd first date is goin so far 
. Also glad that 
's lettin 
ask stuff on future events after her passin 
; altho it mak me wonder what 
will/will not say durin that 
but, it'll hav to wait til u're ready to deliver t next chappie 
A bit of a kinky lesbo chapter dot ya think?
LOOOOOOVVVVEEEE IITTTT!!
4185384 I was going to embarrassedly justify that scene, but then I realized I HAVE NO REGRETS.
4186881 lelz
Dem feels man, dem feels...
I'm gonna die of feels now. Got half way through and have been sniffling since.
Aw man at first i was uber sad for these two since one was unfortunely gettin ready to die while t other would be blissfully un-ware til i'm guessin was a few days after t bittersweet event passed but, i did lik that rares got a unexpected visit again from future twi tho. Which after some catchin up n' stayin near each other til a certian mare's end; Twi went back "home" to her timeline to put together her own endin soon n' to finally get a chance to be with those she first befriended n' to extent forever luved again
. So, in short (too late 
) thx for t lovely sweet n' sour ride 
This was a beautifully written piece of fiction. I am not one for shipping, but this story was so well done that I looked past that and enjoyed reading this. Have a like and a fave good sir/ma'am.
4336704 Ah, thank you! It means a lot, particularly that you liked it enough to look past the shipping. Thank you so much for your comment, as well as the favourite and like!
This was an amazing story. The pulling of the readers heart stings was masterfully done. This was beautiful and though I cried through most if it, it has become a favorite of mine. Thank you for posting this wonderful story. I look forward to more RareLight stories (or just stories in general really) from you.
Beautiful story, mate. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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It means a lot to me that you liked it so much (and sorry for the crying :P ). At the moment, I'm still toying with what proceeds next. I'd like to write a new story, but no idea so far has really inspired me like the idea for this one did. Hopefully, though, inspiration will strike soon! Thank you again for your comment and your support. It is greatly appreciated. 
Thank you so much!!
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Ah, thank YOU for reading and faving it! It's the readers that help me continue with my writing! :D
This was amazing, AND THE FELLS BRUH
Wow. Just wow. Excellent story, very well-written. So many feels. Cried through half of it. Gonna have a hard time keeping this out of my headcanon from now on.
Well done!
This story made me cry.
A lot.
In the best ways.
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Ehehe I'm glad you liked it! XD Thank you for the favorite and sorry for making you... happy cry?
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Ahhh, thank you!! It means a lot! I'm really glad you liked it, and sorry for the late reply whooops
And now, this one's turn.... After some sleep.
This one was beautiful in conception and execution, and hit me hard emotionally. It's quickly becoming a favorite pairing of mine, and I certainly hope that S5 will treat us to more interaction between Princess Twilight and Rarity.
Head?
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Whoops! Thank you for pointing that out!
Be a what?
Should be "advance", I think.
I've chosen the worst week to read this. It's finals week for me, and I've been lured in with your AU Rarilight fic.
I guess I'm a glutton for punishment. Sad fics aren't usually my deal, but I read this entire thing in one go. Excellent work.
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Ahhhh thank you, I'm really glad you liked it!!
And THANK YOU for the grammar/spelling corrections!!! I haven't been able to get a proper beta-reader, so I really appreciate the help. I'm not at my house at the moment, so I'll have to correct them in a few days when I have my computer back, but really thank you!
This would have been an amazing place to end it. I could feel the little, underused strings in my heart twinging.
Well, fuck.
I grace you with your 69th like, good sir
good job. I cried a lot. And I don't usually cry to horse romance.
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Ehehehe
4525986 Ah, thank you!! I'm glad you liked it!!
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I love you for making that blog post recommending this story.
I already planned to read it sometime but I am glad I read it today
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And thank you for writing this :)
4526170 You're whalecum, bby.
Thank this guy, though.Beat me to it.
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just edited the post.
Pressed add to soon
I havent....I can't....
Just....*Breaks out crying*
4526170 Ah, I'm glad you liked it!! :D
Fucking, fuck. That hit me a lot harder than I thought it would.
I don't know whether I should shake your hand or punch in the face. Or both.
I was fully prepared to face the inevitable sad ending that awaited me once I began reading, expecting the fallout to result in mere melancholy—but no. I was wrong. I just finished the last chapter and I'm stuck sitting here at six in the bloody morning, staring at my monitor, gaping as I ponder what the fuck just happened.
All I can say, is spectacular job.
This story better get more recognition, because you deserve some fame for this.
Now if you'll excuse me, I've got to drown my sorrows in a tub of chocolate ice-cream.
*Edit: Peppy warned me about the fucking stairs.
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Wow, I really appreciate your comment!! I'm really glad you liked it so much and sorry for making you cry eheheh You should have seen /me / when I was writing the last part of CH.6 because it was like 7 in the morning and Iw as crying as I typed, lord.
It really means a lot that you think it should be more popular hahaha! I have to admit that, even despite the popularity my other fic has achieved, IE will always be my baby, particularly after how much work and stress went into it.
I can't say I'm surprised it's pretty unknown since I myself am a really new writer and, well, rarilight isn't the ship everyone jumps to read... Still, if I was confident enough in my writing skills, I would have tried submitting it to EqD but I don't think I stand a chance there whooooops
Thank you so much for your comment, though!!! It's made my day
The only thing I disagree with is the millionth year. I can believe ten thousand, but one million is too much.
Also, I am favoriting this. I'd probably be crying if I wasn't at work.