Twilight arrives in Ponyville to deliver a message from the Princess Celectia. However things do not go quite as planed. A dark version of the first episode in which the qualities of all of the characters have been skewed to a different aspect but not completely changed. Not yet completed, this is my first attempt at a fiction, comments and feedback greatly appreciated.
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(couldnt find one of twilight)
those bitches better let her and spike go or ima jump in that fic with my shotgun and an m16 and shoot them
Somepony recommended this story to me. I'll give it a read later
, but from the bit I did see, this looks intresting.
so she acpeted death and died oh poor old spike :'( i do like this maybe you could you go another story but inside this universe
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