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Teacher and student
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Haiku is here too.
On a quiet evening in her chambers, Celestia is surprised by the sudden arrival of young Twilight Sparkle's latest report card.
A story entrant to the Twilestia is Bestia group's third bimonthly prompt contest
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Me(before reading): This'll be interesting.
me: (after reading) Celestia appears to be a troll.
one word rating: cute.
I'd like to haiku, but I
just don't know how to.
This is a haiku
You could write a better one -
Go ahead and try.
3921229 That wasn't the intended reaction
Hnnng. My heart just died.
I suspect the comments now,
Will all be in haiku.
Stupid poetry, always eluding me in all its fiends even though I do love it
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Haikus are defined by the property of juxtaposition in the second and third lines...
In other words, simply matching the meter does NOT make a haiku. It's just words set to meter.
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In what you say here,
yes, that is the strictest sense
it forgoes sweetness
I treasure the irony you've presented here, truly I do
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Or was it?! *dun dun dunnnnn!*
Anyway....why do people keep staring at my profile pic? Its beautiful
This was very cute.
Also charming in a way,
How haikus were used.
What a silly thing
This story has turned into
It's cuteness is high.
Two ponies exchange--
Alicorns past, and future
--a tentative bond.
thoroughtly
This story is cool.
It's like me and my sister.
I love this story.
These awesome comments
will all be great Haikus. I
must participate.
Slight spelling error,
It's "then" not "than" in her last.
See me after class.
A word gone missing,
A sentence tumbling, too fast:
Teacher could be friend.
[that Celestia, Princess and Teacher could be (and truly, was) also Celestia, friend.]
A moment in time
from a timeless perspective:
Unexpected depth.
I won't even try...
But you have a beautiful way with words and I love your characterizations.
Have another fav.
Black words on white screen
Sun helps Book think out of box
A green thumb appears
It's late for me. But
I'm glad I read your story.
It's time I sleep too.
Wait, if Spike is in bed, how did Twilight send the last haiku?
Syllables falling
from my mind to the pages
carefully arranaged
Cute, this story is
I enjoyed it very much
Thank you for your work
warm, fuzzy feelings
Lingering satisfaction
It's adorable