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Nightmare Moon; fabled mistress of darkness and fallen protector of dreams. A legend and nothing more, right?

The ponies of Equestria couldn't be more wrong, especially when Nightmare returns during the Summer Sun celebration and proclaims eternal night, with no Celestia in sight. All of the ponies of the land shall kneel and praise their Queen as she brings forth her beautiful night and they shall praise her magnif-wait. Where are there wardrobes? Why can she clearly see their cutie marks?

Is there a draft in here? Celestia's got some splaining to do.
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Sorta a funny one-shot. Happy April fool's!

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Interesting!:twilightsmile:

rescudule

monty python and the holy grail, huh? Ah laugh at your joke, you silly english kiiiiiinigit!:scootangel:

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Do a word search for it on your story.

4178896
Alright, thanks! Just did it and I really did forget a few things. One time I forget, man...

4179213

Don't blame yourself for not having two pairs of eyes to catch mistakes.

4180991
Hmmm...not sure how to take that...lol?

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This was an absolutely brilliant read. :pinkiehappy:

4436874
Why thank you. Hope I can refine my comedy a bit better for future pieces. Constructive criticism is always welcome by me.

Ponies don't like democracy? TIME TO DELIVER SOME FREEDOM RIGHT TO THEIR COMMIE FRONT DOOR!

"Well, conjure up a seat because this is, not necessarily long, but complicated story."

Can you break up this wall of text paragraph into smaller bits?
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:trixieshiftright:

This makes me wonder about humanity turning a nudist culture.











Except maybe for the cold places, nudity in alaska doesn't seem viable.

"Twilight Sparkle. While I appreciate you and your friend’s actions to stop eternal night and save my sister, I must disagree with your actions and behavior as such. We shall talk more on this later, but please get ready to grab Miss Smartypants because kindergartners can have those at school." Celestia walked away, leaving Twilight to roll into a ball and mutter incoherent things, as her friends tried to comfort her. When Celestia reached Luna, she replaced her disappointed face for one of barely controlled laughter.

And this is why i hate Celestia so fucking much.

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They don't like that either they believe in the monarchy, Go go KIng Arthur

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