Bonus Chapter: Lust
Bonus Chapter: Lust
It was big.
Very...very big
Bigger than she ever dreamed it would be.
Staring at it now, seeing it up close… it was completely different from just fantasizing about it. She felt butterflies in her stomach as her nerves began to charge.
Not that she was going to back out now.
She had always wanted to try this, but her marefriend lacked the necessary equipment. A part of her felt guilty betraying her partner’s trust. She had, after all, promised her lover that she wouldn’t do anything like this.
But if she had to be honest with herself, the guilt only fueled her excitement.
Not that it mattered much though. Her thoughts kept being pushed away by just how BIG it was.
Oh it was going to feel great inside her.
She felt a tingle in her lower regions as she brought her mouth closer to it. When she was but a mere millimeter from the tip she paused, taking the time to breathe in his musky scent. She could tell from the way it was twitching that her breaths were tickling its soft flesh. Now that tingle became of torrent of pressure.
She couldn’t wait another second.
In one quick swoop she took its whole length in her mouth, taking him by surprise.
She practically melted in ecstasy.
She moaned and began sucking vigorously, taking in the orgasmic, salty taste. Gently running her tongue along the entire length, she was briefly tempted to push the whole shaft as far down her throat as she could, but decided against it. Instead, she simply groaned in pleasure and began sucking gently, softly rubbing the salty flesh all the while.
Every time it twitched she couldn’t help but shudder and moan. Picking up her pace, she brought her mouth up and massaged the tip gently before lowering back down. She repeated this a few more times, and the mass continued to twitch in her mouth.
Finally, she lost all pretense of rhythm and began bobbing up and down as fast as she could. She pushed it’s enormous length down her throat and kept it there, gagging slightly before pulling it back out and repeating. The pressure inside her increased, spurring her on. Up and down she went going faster and faster, losing herself in the ecstasy of it all. With one final twitch, he—
“AARG!” screamed Jorge.
The Spartan recoiled, pulling his appendage out of the pony and wiping it furiously on the couch they were sitting on.
“Dammit Lyra! I said you could lick it not try to eat it!” He lifted his spit-covered hand and showed it to the mint-green unicorn. “Look at this, you slobbered all over it,” he complained before trying in wipe the fluids off his fingers on his armor. “You know Bon-Bon’s probably going to kill you for this. I thought you promised her to lay off the human stuff?”
Lyra wasn’t listening. She was splayed across the couch, basking in her afterglow. “Don’t —huff—care. Best—huff—five seconds—huff—EVER!”
Jorge grimaced at the disheveled unicorn lying on the couch. The way she panted disturbed him.
The Spartan sighed and looked out the window towards Canterlot.
I miss when my life was normal.
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YOU FRIGGEN FINGER TEASE
If given time she would lick his entire body like a dog. No shame.
I looked at my unread chapters and saw this!
..only to discover it was 551 words.
lawl
Okay, its feels like when you're reading a clopfic but it doesn't have the clop language in it, you dig? And hopefully you survive your trip!
Lol hay ill save you a seat my self and to jorge id gladly switch with you lol
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Hey, it's closer to 600 than it is 500
Well, I'll cya in Hell too!
Y'know, I honestly thought that the 'object' was a pickle... or is it gherkin? I never know...
I'll save you a seat at the bar, you tease.
Le sigh.
Please keep all arms and legs inside the hand basket and enjoy the ride.
Okay.....
Also, did Lyra just get off by licking his fingers?
Best 500 words ever.
1578 likes.... i think they were a bit TOO 'gentle' with this
Though i dunno... 1 more like won't hurt anything...
Or as I would like to call it "Instant M Rating, Then Actually Not"
lol
Oh gawd my sides
August? you best be joking nigguh.
Can't *GASP* breath...
Since Jorge rarely takes off his armor, that hand probably doesn't get washed very often.
Oh well, just means more unf-ing for Lyra. That's one heck of a hand fetish...
I've got a reserved parking spot with my name engraved on it. We could carpool.
2795737 oh, can I come along my car exploded in lava... I mean who carries lava around. Stupid Devil, I lost my porsche.
THIS WAS SO FUCKING
GENIUS
This chapter was hilarious.
sees update : AWWWWWWWWW YYEEAAAHHH
sees it's 500 words : NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (closes laptop)
Well, as soon as you guys get down here, I've got a reservation for the best barbeque in town~run by Satan himself. 2795759
2795786 Why thank you, but I'm still recovering from his chili contest. Woo.. Boy can he cook!
OH! My........ Lyra has reach warp factor 5.
Sees othe word lust "dis gon a be Gud" reads that it was a hand throws iPad out window screaming "DO NOT WANT"
Listen, I don't make the rules. Now come on, get in the handbasket - we're wasting hellfire. :I
......
..... Would you mind if i d-
Hell... to the no Nightmare...
I expected something stupid to happen. I was wrong.
Something REALLY stupid happened.
Can't wait for next chapter.
2795849
Agreed.
Silly Jorge, your life was never normal. You are a genetically altered war machine whose only purpose was to fight.
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And also...
AUGUST?!
*Ahem*...
...That is all.
What the literal fuck did I just read? o_0 da fauq is Lyra doing!? Is that his!!! OMG.... Wait. IT was his hand....HAHAHAHAHA!!!! Whew! Threw me for a loop there man! Nice one!
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...She was voraciously licking his hand...
*shudder*
Except now you get too go to. . .
ROBOT HELL!!
I created a tenth circle just for you
Well, I suppose we all knew this was coming at some point or another. Jorge is a man of his word... though Lyra might want to see a psychiatrist about her thing with hands.
2795737 Do we get to ride a Warthog down the road paved with Covenant bones?
Twas 5 second? Well damn, that escalated quickly.
Amount read before I realized "it's his hand": 1/3
Reminds me of the similar "Twilight's First Time":
I know some people are complaining, but I think that if you're adding a gratuitous chapter, it's better to be humorous than sensual.
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That's what'cha what'cha what'cha get on level 5!
This invoked one of those weird boners.
Oh man you updated while you were gone?! You are awesome!
*5 minutes later*
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Ho-ly schit
:0
Nopony understands the finger fetishists. Well...fetishist, at least. Oh, Lyra...
Just wondering why you dont want critics?
I ask myself what can I do better and let them give me the feedback they think they should do.