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Ugh. Another illiterate emo 12 year old going LOL I'LL WRITE A CUPCAKES SEQUEL WHERE MY SUPER EDGY OC FUCKS PINKIE LOL IT'S GONNA BE SO COOL
Just... Don't
>>3917511 it IS good, you just don't know what good lit. is
Is it a knockoff of a popular story?
Yes.
Is it good?
No.
>>3917543
>>3917559
Bullshit. I spent time on it and it good!
>>3917565 Uhuh...
Bad troll is bad.
>>3917565 You "spent time" on a ripoff sequel to a popular fanfiction, presumably to either gain likes from its popularity, or because you can't write an original story.
>>3917589 i can too write orginially! and doesnt everybody write to get popular anyways!?
>>3917586 i'm actually not a troll. i just write what i wanna write
Dear Celestia this fic was worse than my first before editing
>>3917596
>>3917601 nuhuh i truth
>>3917596
>>3917606 that better be an agreeing laugh
>>3917596 Okay, well I can respect that. But, people should know by now it's not a good idea at all to make rip-offs of stories like Cupcakes.
You misspelled "Cupcakes 2 #890432"
>>3917596 You write to get popular from your own ideas. Not high-tailing off of another fic's popularity.
>>3917610 at least U dont act like a toal cunt abuot it!
>>3917611 what do you maen?\
>>3917613 yeah but i kind of had my own spin on it. therefore it was my own idea
>>3917617 Nooo, you really didn't.
This isn't generic enough
WHAT THE FLYING FUCK!? TASSADAR HAVE MERCY!
OH-OH GOD, let me catch my breath!
This was a pretty bad trollfic, though.
It didn't make me laugh too hard, giggle a bit.
But meh 3/10 for trollfics try some stuff by Abigsexywalrus.
So, was THIS the greatest story ever? A story so great that you had to advertise it in the comments section of one of my stories??
>>3917511
>>3917559
>>3917577
>>3917589
>>3917598
>>3917611
It's a troll fic, you speds...
Wait...PROBLEM CAPE?? You used a thinly veiled disguise of MY OC in this shitfic???
And I'm gonna take a wild guess, that Stiffie Shader is Starlight Shadow...
>>3917642 You don't fucking say, m80?
>>3917649
YES. YES, I MOST CERTAINLY DO.
M8.
>>3917636
They did what?! Sheesh...
I'm-I'm sorry...but this is just awful.
The first chapter is a profile of an alicorn OC.
This is a Cupcakes sequel.
Inspired by Linkin Park .
I don't know why I'm here.
Sweet Jesus run away!!! *flees*
I honestly don't even want to read this
>>3917664
FUCK YOU; GIANT BOLD ITALICIZED UNDERLINED CAPS IS THE WAY TO GO. I'M LIKE MR. TORGUE. EXCEPT I'M COOL.
>>3917636 Wow, you weren't lying. Wat a biatch.
(2 a-thor)(As I'm sure you'd only understand it that way)
Stop writing. Completely.
Even trollfics. (However shitty this one may be)
You don't say that kind of shit to a person who tried infinite times more than you on their story.
You do not even try to JOKE about that!
You don't joke about comparing this pile of excrement to something with real time and effort and skill put into it.
Stop what you're doing and learn common decency if you're going to do this.
You can do whatever in your comment section.
But don't go on people's profile pages and insult them, you low life.
>>3917800
If you haven't noticed, this guy is a dick to just about everyone
ENOUGH OF THIS SHIT - LET'S GET BACK TO GIANT BOLD ITALICIZED UNDERLINED CAPS TEXT!
>>3917869
YOU ARE A FOOLISH PERSON.
I JUST WANTED TO GET THAT OUT THERE.
SO YEAH.
FOOLISH.
THAT'S YOU.
Let's review! It's like a Let's Play but with reviewing terrible fics instead and I don't get paid at all for it!
By the amount of comments you have saying this is best thing ever, you better damn well mea-
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The fuck is this? The FUCK is this? A bio page?! Really?! Damn man, this isn't Fanfiction.net! You never, neeeeeeeeeeeever, nevernevernevernevernever NEVER have a bio page of any description in any story! Chapter, synopsis, afterword, whatever! You build the damn character throughout the story! Its story-building 101!
I scoffed at the "Cupcakes 2" bit because I was in a good mood, but this... this, monstrosity, has just ruined that mood. Good day!
You ripped off other people OC's, made one of my favorite dark stories look like shit, and claim this to be your own idea? You deserved to get banned all the way to hell. Not only did this hurt my eyes at the sheer stupidity of the spelling errors but you made a chapter exclusively for your own OC. This was the worst shit I have ever seen. Go read something good and then read it again to make sure you got it in your brain. Also, you claim this isn't a trollfic? Obviously it is to any normal person. If you wrote this because you thought it was a good idea, then please I must excuse myself and never come back to dark stories again.
This fic really didn't deserve to be approved...
Dont let the haters get on you!! This was good
>>3918082
That's what I was thinking! How does this shit even get approved? So many errors, I wanted to throw my computer across the room.
>>3918099
Yeah. I just don't understand. Like... just... did the one looking at this story in the approval process get lazy or something?
(No offense to any of the actual prereaders who approve stories)
>>3918111
Maybe they lay off a little due to the fact it was his first story. However, my first story actually did well, this was just downright the worst story I have ever read. He just did so much wrong it hurt my sanity.
>>3918123
I suppose you're right. Still, I wonder if this fic was even read beforehand...
>>3918008 Well, technically, our OC's were in the free-use OC collection, so they couldn't be "stolen". But still, this travesty is despicable.
Starlight Shadow (Stiffie Shader)
Patient Care (Problem Cape)