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Indigo 149

Joined January 2012
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    Indigo's Stories (1)

    • Into the Mouth of Hell
      War breaks out and Rainbow Dash is pressured to sign up, but this war is not what it seems...

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    At the dawn of war, she knows from the start

    It is her duty to do her part;

    a Rainbow mare, although odd it seems

    to do what she must, and abandon her dreams.

    But warlords ramble and media corrupts

    Perhaps the truth is farthest from us;

    and even if an Empire reaches its goals

    what will become of its heart and soul?

    First Published
    14th May 2012
    Last Modified
    5th Nov 2012

    Comments ( 20 )

    #1 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #2 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Me gusta

    #3 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    oh screw it i hope twilight rebels:twilightsmile:

    (why do i hate celestia yet like twilight that makes no sense)

    #4 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    really good so far i hope to see more updates on the story soon :twilightsmile:

    >>588291 i like luna better than celestia :applejackunsure:

    #5 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>588077

    No, it's...er...far more complicated.

    For the record, all of you are predicting incorrectly, so...yeah xD

    #6 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Thanks for the good feedback anyways, I thought I might have, er, seriously screwed up.

    >>587947

    Oh, and this song is fairly badass.

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>591656

    Such is the way of metal, is it not?

    #8 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>591975

    Indeed. *Sips liquid steel*

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 53w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wow, this is really good! I really like how badass Dash is, but I like how you keep her connection to morals and her element of loyalty too. A lot of war fics make ponies into crazy killing machines with no conscience after the first little bit, so this is refreshing. Wonderful writing, I hope you keep it up:pinkiehappy:

    #10 · Chapter 3 · 49w, 6d ago · · ·
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    whens the next chapter coming out?

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>724963

    When I got time, which shall hopefully be soon because summer's about to start.

    Thankfully, I've finally my plan for the piece sorted out, and now it shall fly...

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 48w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>792805 great i cant wait for it :twilightsmile:

    #13 · Chapter 4 · 42w, 13h ago · · ·
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    i have a strong guess thinking that the griffin language is actually German...am i correct?

    #14 · Chapter 6 · 42w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>1028314

    It is.

    For the record, the reasoning for this is not to demonise the griffins, the griffins simply have a Germanic culture, like how Equestria has a pseudo-Anglo-American one.

    Also helps that I find it more understandable than most languages.

    #15 · Chapter 6 · 42w, 10h ago · · ·
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    >>1028566 cool...im planning on learning german and found a few words i remembered is all so i was curious :pinkiehappy:

    #16 · Chapter 6 · 13w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ...this fic deserves much more likes...

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 4w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Nice Story. Well written. To put in into one word and one smilie: Awesome :rainbowkiss:!

    #18 · Chapter 2 · 4w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Right in the feels! Very nice chapter :pinkiesad2:!

    #19 · Chapter 3 · 4w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I just LOVE this story :pinkiehappy:!

    #20 · Chapter 4 · 4w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Awesome Chapter. It's good to see that dash isn't just a cold killer as onyx thought:pinkiesmile:.

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