• Member Since 24th Aug, 2011
  • offline last seen Oct 25th, 2014

Lloxie


E

It's been dull in Ponyville for some time now. Harvest season had pretty much finished, and a number of the town's residents had left for the holidays, either on vacation or to visit family in far-off places. Those that stayed behind had an excess of boredom to contend with.

Then one morning, Fluttershy tells Twilight about a strange object she found in the woods. What could this thing with the glowing red numbers on it be? And what trouble could it cause? Only one way to find out!


Note: Critique encouraged! I'm a bit rusty and I know it. So if you spot something that needs to be addressed, please let me know! Thanks!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 18 )

A crossover with Sliders? Why has nobody thought of this before! I swear though, if you leave my favorite pony trapped in the Multiverse, I will hunt you down and hand deliver you to Princess Molestia. :flutterrage:

Anyways, it was a good read. the events flowed relatively smoothly, The Mane Six were in character, and their were relatively few grammatical errors that I spotted. All in all, I might have to keep reading this one, but I am totally serious about Princess Molestia.

15558
*gulp* :fluttershyouch:

This guy'll do it, man! He's freakin' crazy! I swear!

15558

Ohnoes! :pinkiegasp: *giggles* No worries, this is all in good fun and won't be getting too terribly serious. I personally detest the Dark and Tragedy tags, and tend to avoid Sadfics as well.

Thanks for the feedback! :twilightsmile:

15589

Okey Dokey Lokey.:pinkiehappy: I'll hold you to that.

*Sees SLIDERS crossover, adds to Watch List*

Good read so far. I'd like to see where this goes.

Wow, thanks for all the support, everyone! I'm pleasantly shocked this has already gotten so many followers, after only the first chapter. :twilightblush: I'm almost done with the second one, and hopefully I'll have it up tonight. Or Tomorrow night at the latest. On a related note, if anyone has any good tips for writing a character with a french accent, I'd appreciate it! I'm surprised how much trouble I've had with that so far. :rainbowderp:

so, let's see what we have here...
a very definitely different ponyville,
an abundance of moon-related decorations,
and fluttershy and pinky have swapped race in this world.
...
:rainbowkiss::heart:

So, let's see...
Posey, Surprise, Goth Rarity, Hippie Rainbow, Graplejack, and I guess Twilight's still in Canterlot?

*giggles* Grapeljack.... XD

Also, if anyone has any advice for writing french accents or anime-fangirl-isms, I'd appreciate it! Also, more suggestions for the names of the girls' alternates would be helpful as well. :twilightblush:

Oh and yes, "Twilight" has not yet arrived.:raritywink:


Awesome!^_^

Love the anime fan thing!^_^

Fluttershy's double is such a cute fan!^_^

18046 Hee, thankies! ^-^ Got any good common otaku phrases I could slip in for her? Also, any suggestions for names for the others? :pinkiesmile:

16620

For the french accent, just state that it's a french accent and throw in the line"...Oh how do you say..." and maybe throw in spurts where she's just starts yelling, screaming, and cussing in French.

402777

Oh I do plan to continue it! I just kinda got swept up with other things and haven't gotten back to it is all :twilightblush: At worst it's just kind of been on hiatus, heh.

Sorry to keep everyone waiting! And thanks again for the support :twilightsmile:

Has anymore progress been made on this story? :rainbowhuh:
I would love it to continue. :pinkiehappy:

1225516
730057

I feel terrible for letting this go for so long without actually labelling it as on hiatus. Life just keeps finding ways to distract me, heh @.@ Suffice to say I DO plan on returning to it, I just don't know when... could be tonight, could be a month from now. x.x; But thank you so much for the comments <3 I'll try to at least work a little on it tonight <:'3

Login or register to comment