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Reality is a fickle thing, sometimes it just ignores the world of fiction while other times it comes down like a hammer on a nail. Let us go back to the Strange World of bipeds and of technology to see what Twilight and Spike did not see; how the world would react to their actions. How the world reacts to such actions that would remove the veil of safety and precedents... and how the government tries to cover it up.
This will include spoilers to Equestria Girls, in case the description didn't make it clear.
Rated Teen for general descriptions and references that may upset some.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 35 )

I'm pretty surprised that Celestia accepts that someone just looks inside the lockers without even asking for the concerned students' permission (but I don't know how much privacy is respected in this kind of situation). Otherwise, it seems like an interesting story!

3920417 Thanks! And here in the states there's mandatory locker-searches ever since all those school-shootings and the war on drugs... it was really disconcerting when I was in High School

MrBen from Babble with Bronies here.

Took a look over and read it through. Liking it thus far. :3 Like to see where this will end up.

Keep writing! I'm enjoying your story! :twilightsmile:

Okay, if you're trying to make terrible poetry, you are succeeding. Possibly too well.

Also, interesting choice with how far back you had Sunset enter the human world. Though, thinking about it, it's kind of obvious. Twilight's been Celestia's student since her adolescence, which means that Sunset vanished years ago. Still, heck of an age distortion the mirror pulled on her...

In any case, I'm enjoying this quite a lot. Especially the Traditional Administrative Canterlot Voice. (Flash butchering the very concept of lyrical verse? Not so much.) Looking forward to more. Especially Pinkie's interview. :pinkiehappy:

3937340 Thanks! And thanks for the fav! Don't worry, there's only one or two more verses on Flash's paper... :trollestia:
Pinkie's Interview was actually quite difficult to write for next chapter... too silly and it's OOC, too serious and it may as well just be someone else... :pinkiesad2:

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Like Pinkamena? This may not be her first run-in with the MIB... :pinkiecrazy:

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Yes, but she's not in this story. Or at least, I didn't plan for her to be. :pinkiecrazy:

Nicely done with pinkies locker. I can actually imagine all that in there. I bet the scientists at hq would just love to study her.

so what's going to happen to this Twilight ?

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Oh don't worry, someone will look into it... :moustache:
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Let's just say she's in for an unexpected journey. :trollestia:

3949322 im just scared for her that's all and I wonder if she will have a Chance to meet the human mane 5

Mister Discord... no, he was arrested... again.

"If the town charter has no regulations for particle accelerators, then that obviously means I'm allowed to build one wherever I want!"

In any case, it seems there's something deeper at work here. I look forward to further details.

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Oh wow this is hilarious.:rainbowlaugh: I cant wait to read more about Twilight. Please continue :yay:

Oh ho. Things are getting complicated. Definitely looking forward to more.

Though I have to say, napalm as carpet cleaner seems rather counterintuitive. After all, when you're done, the carpet is nothing but ash stains!

Given how often Flash is passing out, I'm actually getting kind of concerned about him. I realize his world has been rocked, but still...

In any case, the situation is getting quite interesting. Eagerly looking forward to the next round of interviews, and whatever else the suits have planned.

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A sharp blow to the head often has repercussions including (but not limited to): blurred vision, passing out, memory loss, dizziness, a lack of balance, mood shifts, and difficulties sleeping. Or, in other words: a concussion.

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Which only makes me more concerned given the serial loss of consciousness. He may not wake up from one of those... :twilightoops:

"Moved here." The interrogator interrupted. "It's "moved here" not "moved to here". Moved to here is gram-"

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Nice job so far! Looking forward to the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

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Then came Pinkie Pie's locker.

Anyone else half expect him to find a portal into the Warp? :rainbowkiss:

Nice work so far, well done. :twilightsmile:

So... this story's dead?

Author's Note:
Oooooh, a cliffhanger! How clever and not at all lazy!

I call bull that was :yay:y timing of a long wait for the next update

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No, actually. I plan on working on it again soon.

"But it's a saturday, nobody'll let me in to put... what's in here anyways?"

Capitalize days of the week. Short chapter... Will the next one be long?

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Hopefully, I had a bit of a brain-fart what with that chapter being half-written before coming back to it. I should be able to make another one soon.

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Hey, I'm just glad this story's been updated.

Good to see you're still updating this. Things are definitely taking an intriguing turn. Seeing just what Flash has to see should be quite enlightening.

Doesn't this mean he technically commited bestiality?

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The most funniest thing is that the feds forgot to consficate Flash's bass and Twilight's cellphone. XD.

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