FIRST

ALSO YAY ITS OUT

Here we go!

GentlemanCreeper has a new story?

I love your other stories and I can't wait to see how this one turns out!

I can already tell this one's gonna be good. Just the thought of the personality difference between this character and Fluttershy is enough to make me giddy with anticipation!

HRRRRGGGGG ALL OF MY YES

FLUTTERSHY

YAY

TRACKING

NUFF SAID

And so it begins...

i look forward to this.

Why am I sensing a feeling of animosity radiating from you Creeper? Almost like this is like a like a giant middle finger to some annoying fans. I'm sorry if we got on your bad side.That main character...wow if anyone needs some clover and or some Ambien, it's that guy. I still look forward to more.

Peace Out  

Looking forward to more

Already love it. Keep up the amazing work!

Been waiting for this story to start for a loooooooong time. I trust you won't disappoint with this one.

Friendship accepted!

I'm excited :D

Pretty good! I like how you made foreshadowing of this in Freudian Slip !

Wait a minute....... “Hey, hey! How’s my favorite bestseller?”

OH MY GOD IT'S BARRY!

I see a lot of Alan Wake references in here. (Even though it's pure coincidence)

Can't wait till next chapter!

You my good sir have again gotten me hooked in a romance fic good job

>>351266351266

Indeed .... also

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A bit of unessesary cussing imo, but I'll track.

Things are about to get interesting.

>>351209351209

Heh, I'm going to have fun with this, just you watch.

>>351342351342

wat? This is far from a giant middle finger... Hell, if I was mad at anyone, I would make it apparent, not voice it through a story. The main character in this is more abrasive right now but SPOILER ALERT was actually more kind and plucky before he got roped into the more dry, business side of the writing bizz. You'll see what I mean later... And what makes you think I'm mad at anyone? I love all you guys!

>>352114352114

It'll serve a purpose later, trust me. It's far from pointless, as you'll see in chapters to come.

>>352299352299

He's a writer that writes a lot of romance stories and is constantly being hounded by his supporter and fans. Maybe I assumed too much and looked for subliminal undertones when there weren't any. Sometimes people will throw bit and pieces of themselves into characters. To assume is to make an 'ass' out 'u' and 'me.' oops.

As long you ain't pissed.  

>>3522935229

I can't ever see a valid reason ever to have one of those disgusting words.

There really is no justification and it takes away innocence that could've been a good characteristic of the story. Lotsa authors fall into this trap, using words only meant for mature audiences when they could also tailor it for everypony. This is the reason I still like disney cartoons, as does others, such as parents and their impressionable, fragile youth.

Please don't interpert this as hating on the story. I really do see potential in the story, and wasted potential in any way, shape or form is a terrible waste of talent, which, my good sir, you quite frankly have a lot of.

Or you could just ponify the cusses. Just my two bits.

Fluttershy... with the grumpy uninspired writer archtype. This... is going to be FUN.

Damn...This is a GREAT START!

>>352323352323

Seriously dude, don't worry about it. You guys are awesome, I could never be mad at my fans. But you are right, you might find some undertones of my personality or bits and pieces of myself in a character every now and again. But not in this case.

>>352330352330

Well, I've noticed as my stories have progressed, they've become more mature. But I'll explain to you why I used angry words exactly... The "You" in this story is rather stressed, angry, and getting more abrasive as he is getting pulled into the more lifeless business side of his passion. Of course he's angry and when you've got someone like Trump Card calling him at all hours of the day, he was bound to lose his temper. Once again, sorry if I offended, but this is how I feel he'd act given the situation. But just watch, you'll see his character develop a lot.

Can't wait to see where this goes Mr. Creeper!

I understand your motive, but I still don't think it's really nessesary, given cleaner alternatives.

Besides, the seriousness of the situation could be undermined if you used phunny phrases.

Funny + Seriousness + Good Story Development + Good Character Development + ????= profit.

Just a suggestion, though.

>>353896353896

"The whole point of swearing is that it ain't appropriate!"

- Kaywinnit Lee Frye.

They're supposed to be harsh, rude and angry - "Oh gosh golly darn" doesn't put across the same emotional message as "Oh, for f*ck's sake!" because the former would make the character look like he was dancing around and trying not to offend Trump Card. In my opinion, dancing around the cursing would have made the character look weak, and happy to bend over for his awful agent. Honestly, I don't think Trump Card given his apparent behaviour so far would have given our hero what he wants if he'd skimped out.

>>352045352045

me gusta

>>352045352045

me gusta

>>354126354126

Agreed!!

>>354126354126

Why not use words that only sound like swearing?

Us bronies have invented some.

ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss....................sorry I HAD TO DO THAT

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iwaslikeomganewstroryfromcreeper,soireaditandiwassoexcidedformoreyounow

...sry i let pinky pie write the comment....she still hasn't found the space bar...nevermind she tell''s me she just doen't use it

any way's good story man write some more

>>355717355717 btw she is bigger than anything in the choose bar....sry had to say it

SHITS ABOUT TO GET REAL

Oh joyous!!!!   Its finally out!!!!!!

It's funny, but my ponysona is a writer (like I hope to be) and mai waifu is Fluttershy . . . . . ME GUSTA! Seriously though, you've got a really good hook going in!

O.O

I... I CAN HAS NEW STORY?! YUSHYUSHYUSHYUSHYUSHYUSHYUSHYUSH!!!!!

Oh yay! A new story! I wonder how this will turn out. *see's hiatus update*

FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Oh my sweet baby Luna thank you

....didnt see that one coming at all!

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Ah, been waiting for this one to update for a while now

During this story, I shall call myself Alan Wake and my best friend/editor/other thingies Barry!

Yes! Finally! Great job as always!

SHY WRITES HOTHOTHOT!

It's always the shy ones.

And wow. So many references.

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh

DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN

Well done.

-insert Butterscotch Sundae reference joke here-

I have waited so long for this...and now....

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MOAR

What's with it and having everyone portray Fluttershy as an erotica writer as of late? That being said, it is quite funny. Looking forward to more GentlemanCreeper!

Fics within a fic insert Obligatory Inception joke (Here)

I  was expecting Smokey to pop in while the writer was flirting with Twilight, but then I remembered this obviously takes place a little bit before that fic. Health nut, but most health nuts and hippies do toke up. Also it kinda makes sense that Fluttershy would write stuff like that...it's always the quite ones.

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Peace Out.      

Hah! I see what you did there. And there.

Biggest fan. Epic..... Hehe.... Biggest.

Glancing down, your eyes become as wide as dinner plates as you read the title.t

Just pointing this out for you, but I'm pretty sure you know what the error in that sentence is.

I'm glad this story is finally updated though! It was an awesome chapter.

Oh my gosh a new chapter.

...And still, the quality remains top-notch. Wow.

Great job here, Gentleman.

It's always the shy ones, huh?

XD SO much win throughout the ENTIRE chapter! xD Can't wait for the next chapter! 8D

very well writain worth the wait

Oh hey, a ref to your other fic "Healing Dash", I believe. I feel good now for recognizing that.

“I’ve r-read all your work and own several first edition, including Hearts and Hopes.”

Should be "several first editions."

Hue

>Healing Blitz

I see what you did there.

I wonder if it's just a rule 63 version of Healing Dash?

Well, i just about had an immediate fangasm at the Stephen King reference.  I get the feeling this is going to be very interesting

One little complaint are the scenes with the cigarettes. There's not really a mention of any sort of taste or smell to the smoke or the feeling of nicotine hitting the body.

I'm not a smoker so I wouldn't know exactly what it is, but I've just not seen it done in any fic I've read where there are tobacco products used.

I'm happy to see a new chapter and I look forward to reading more in the near future.

Suddenly, EVERYTHING.

"Follow the white rabbit, Neo" yay! The matrix!

omg ... i can see wat u did there... two best writer and both of them favourite one another of their works..

>>584253584253

Well, I could have done that, but it feels weird describing, for around a sentence to two, the feeling of the smoke hitting your body. I might do it later on, but I see what you mean.

>>585291585291 in a telegram, they say "Stop" to signify a period. the stop does not actually get translated onto the final message.

Hmmm. Seems just a teeny bit rougher than your normal style of writing, Creeper? (Style-wise rather than content, I mean.)

>>587883587883

Rougher? How so?

I see what you did there. Very nice start. I look forward to where it's possible going. Also, maybe get some hints on how to be a better writer myself. lol

A little typo: there's an extra 'you' in the sentence about girlfriends holding you tight when sledding.

Oh god . . . so many references. It's wonderful.

"Shifting your thoughts towards to your current story," either the 'towards' or the 'to' need to be taken out. other than that i look forward to more.

Ah, been waiting on this one for awhile now. (though i don't know why i'm reading the main character's line with a Scottish accent, probably just cause it's 3am) Noicely done

Tolkein.

Yes.

Oooh my.

This is good. I look forward to more.

Fluttershy writing THAT, eh?

INTERESTING...

In short, I LIKE IT!

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY

PLEASE, MOAR

...I'm sorry I ever doubted you

>>608407608407

agreed

Alan Wake ponified

FINALLY

Role Reversal? Oh well... Another great chapter. Fight what I presume is writer's block and get more good stuff out of your head and onto the site.

I fell in love with that picture ...daww :3...oh, and your story ofc ^^

Finally+D'aww!=WIN!  

Glad that this got updated. It is a really good story.

Oh god, 'Shy's novel is an autobiography, isn't it?

Yay good chapter, made me D'aww alot!

>>10059471005947

I suspect so.

>>10059471005947 Eeeeeeeeeyup... At least, that was my first guess when she said it...

Wait, no, we KNOW that! Remember? This is tied into the other fics! Unless I mized this up with another series, Big Mac and Shy kinda... YEAH...

(PLEASE correct me if my memory is wrong. I've read so many fics I can't keep them straight! x_x )

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So good! Well worth the wait, you never disappoint, man!

Loving this story bro. This story takes a unique look at the MLP world, as It was written by a writer, about a pony, who just happens to be a writer. Excelent work, and I look forward to the next chapter. Do us all a favour though: Don't rush the next chapter. This story shines of a great amount of time and effort, and I would hate to see my favourite FIM romance go to waste because of "viewer's impatience".

>>10059471005947

Holy cow now that I loom back on it you are probably right, though I had this idea in the form of a fleeting though as I read the story.

Overall rating: 90 percent awesomeness meter+ 20 percent cooler "premium add-on"= 110 percent pure EPIC

-DragonBornIdentity

New chapter for By a Fireplace?  

It felt solid and well worth the wait.

   ~R.mane

COOL STORY BRO !

I love these updates! i really cannot wait to read this everytime.

Amazing work, good sir. Can't wait for the next one!

Hey, you updated without telling me! :P

Glad to see this chapter finished and posted, man, you did great! :3 Eagerly awaiting the next one!

>>10059471005947 Goddess help the soul who did it because I'm going to shove my hoof so far up their ass that they'll be able to lick it clean.

So much writception!

Definitely worth the wait.

Also, calling it now: Fluttershy's novel is about herself.