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Terciel1249


Not much to say. Just writing stuff for fun.

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Matthew was a normal child when the end of the world happened. Darkness erupted from the Earth, casting demons onto the people of Earth. Matthew should have died when the demons poisoned his soul with darkness, but he survived.

He fought for humanity for years alongside others of his kind.
Humanity in return, cast him out and into the void with no hope of returning home.
Now Matthew will remain in the realm of Equestria for the rest of his days.
With some luck, he might just find the happiness he has always longed for.

Some slight swearing, but kept to a minimal.

Chapters (32)
Comments ( 374 )

Interesting,please continue this story whenever your ready.

3906132 Thanks. I'll try to make the next chapter better

I am highly intrigued, good sir :moustache:. Please make more for I am anxious to see how the mane 6 reacts to his appearance and powers. So, more please! :scootangel:

3922291 Thanks. I hope the next chapter meets expectation

LET THE BADASSNESS CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:yay:

interesting can't wait to see what happens next!:pinkiehappy:

i see what you did there, lol DBZ Abridged

can't wait to read more of this

4008559 Yeah, I'm kinda fan. Those bids are hilarious

This is so cooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllll man!More please!

Ooh, so close! More please, this story is awesome!

I've noticed that you've made a few errors in word choice. Such as calling the Everfree forest the Evergreen, and replacing Mayor with Major. There's also a few cases of replacing "they're" with "their" and the like.
In other news, I can't help but use Vegeta's voice for Matthew as I'm reading. It just fits him so well for some reason.

4032198 Thanks. I'll review the chapters again as soon as I can. :twilightsmile:

Demonic Jesus pony? Yes please!
Faved and liked, I hope you write more

Me likey! Me want more! This guy is fun!

Okay, I gotta say it. Matthew is awesome! This guy is crazy wacky fun! I love it! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

4160454 Thank you. :moustache: A funny thing about Mathew is that I originally didn't write him that way, I decided to change it further down the road.

4160500 I'd say "yeah!" but then that'd be a little awkward. Glad you like it. :twilightsheepish:

4160541 ok I got better Michael is best demon pony thing

If you make him royalty, there should totally be a town named after him that's located in a bay so they can call it Michael bay haha I'm so funny

that dining hall is tiny how do they all fit in there? its like the size of a normal hallway in a house
a better size would be something like 20 ft wide and 100 ft long, and castle dining halls can get much larger than that
one of the largest would be the Westminster hall which is 68 ft wide and 240 ft long

4161785 Huh... I do apologize for the description. :facehoof: I'll do a little rewrite. Thank you.

GAH! Info dump! GEEZ! Ya think he would at least try to be like "Nah, my soul totally wasn't poisoned by demons!" Or something, and that Discord would retain his information until it was needed most.

4163339 I didn't think about that. :applecry: Sorry about the info dump.

chrysalis is gona get her ass handed to her, that's for sure.

End of the world? Darkness and Demons covering what remains? Protagonist used to be human, but became a demon to survive?

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Probably not, but you've caught my attention.

4200625
So, am I right on that? or is it just a situation similar to his?

4200849 Very similar. There's a few differences in the origins. But you're really close.

4200907
That makes me so happy. I'll really have to read this later.

4203178 Yeah, my niece was watching it the other day and I caught a few lines. :rainbowkiss:

4200508 who the heck is that and why does he look so awesome?

THE RUINOUS POWERS HAVE SPREAD THEIR CORRUPTION ACROSS THE WORLD OF EQUUS... I DECLARE EXTERMINATUS!

“So now I’m some sort of love child of a Pegasus and unicorn?” Mathew asked incredulously.
Upon uttering these words, Mathew instantly regretted it. Don’t think about it! Don’t think about it! Don’t think about it! Damnit! I’ll never get that image out of my head now!

BWAHAHAHA!!

Matthew stopped in his tracks finding himself unable to travel further into the town. Oh my God! I am in hell! It finally happened! Sprawled out in front of him was the most colorful town he had ever seen, a town full of nothing but ponies. The town sprawled in front of him looked like something out of a cartoon show for children with bright colors, clear crisp lines, a bright blue sky and many smiling faces.

That's a new one.

4380042 Is that good or bad? Depending on the situation, Exterminatus can be good. If not awesome.

4380800 All of Equus will be obliterated, nothing shall be left but galactic dust. The Ponies we all care for so dearly, shall be wiped from the face of the galaxy.

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