Sarsaparilla- pronounced [ ˌsa:spə'rilə ]
“And drink sarsaparilla,” Pinkie Pie would always say.
But what was sarsaparilla? Pinkie Pie didn’t know even though she suggested it to all of her friends. She longed to try the mysterious drink and one day, her curiosity peaked.
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Oh Dash, you so crazy
And Pinkie, you need to not pester your marefriend so badly 
Interesting.
Heh... not bad, but could use some work. It just seems.... clunky and awkward at times. I have to ask, is English a second language for you? It kind of has that vibe, even though there are no real spelling errors to speak of. The main problems are, as I said, awkward grammar and phrasing. Cute concept, though.
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No English is not a second language for me... I believe it's due to my Asberger's Syndrome which does make me a bit worse in my english class.
Or maybe I just haven't found out what works yet.
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Ah, I see. Well, keep working at it! This story may have some issues, but it's clear you at least put some decent effort into it. (Which is more than a lot of folks can say, sadly
)
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Not a whole lot of effort though. This is just one of those stories I write to empty out of my head so I don't mess up with my actually good stories that I put a lot of effort into.
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Ah, I see. In that case I'll take a peek at your other stories and see if any sound intriguing. =3
I love that your three most recent stories have been about:
A dramatic romance complete with twists and turns and...drama...(I'm tired, okay?)
The story of a cursed unicorn and the horrifying ponies that cursed him, dooming everyone he loves.
And...Pinkie, drinking Sarsparilla.
That's not sarcastic or snide - I genuinely approve of the fact you write all kinds of different stories, and I think you're improving with each one. The characterisation in this one I like.
I've decided Dash drank all of it deliberately, to spite Pinkie for the cider incident. And I also really want to try sarsparilla now. I've never even seen any and that makes me sad.
Anyway!
Good work. Short little random stories are always fun.
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First, Orin is and Eart pony( I though I made that clear.)
Second, sarsaparilla is just root beer; you can bu it at almost any store.
Third, how would I become a better writer if I didn't do all types of stories.
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First, you did! I was thinking of you telling me what you were because last time it was unicorn and my brain is operating on minimal power right now. My mistake sorry.
Second, no it isn't. It might be the exact same thing but it's not sarsparilla unless it says that on it somewhere! I have few principles but I stand by them.
Third, I dunno? By getting really really good at just one kind of story?
lol Rainbow Dash....
You seem to have a habit of incorrectly attaching additional actions to speech. And you missed a few comas. But other than that this is quite good.
hee-hee, this made me chuckle, and it doesnt need to be said again, but it could use some work,
but, the important part is that it made me chuckle
Dat Ending
And thus was the story of how rainbow dash died of liquid intoxication/ internal rupturing.
So. I gather from this that Sarsaparilla (I say sars-a-puh-rilla) is alcoholic?
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No. Sarsparilla is just root beer which is just pop/soda.
Trivia: It's called root beer because it goes through the same process as actual beer in the begining but then yeast is not added and a few other steps happen.
Well sasprilla does you saspirilla root or extract. but It good.
Haha. Very nice storytelling!
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