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Excellent chapter! ONWARD!!!!
Amazing.Continue.I thoroughly liked this.Good Day.
>didn't read
>click chapter 2
>strg+f "trixie"
>hit: last word
I think it's a bit over obvious
>will still read it, though
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Are you 100% sure?
Shit....just got real....up in this bitch....Good day.
Well my brain exploded just now.Then exploded again.
"Can you do that?Can you explode twice?"
Yes Spike.I just did.
This story has been added to my favorites and liked! This is an awesome fiction my friend!
FIRST!!!
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Thanks! (:
Holy Sweet Sum'bitch in a basket!!!
Mind=blown
i thouroughly enjoyed this story, if there were to be one small flaw, it would be that you could have eased into the surprise twists a little better, they did seem a tad sudden and without any foreshadowing
but other than that, great imagery, incredible writing, you rock!
Revised Edition is up! Thanks everypony for the comments and feedback. You guys have helped me so much I can't thank you enough!
To be fair, the whole thing felt so much like "Memento" that I pretty much expected the narrarator was both unreliable and more than likely the killer.