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Storm butt
I am an aspiring writer, romance enthusiast, and a horrible over emotional mess. If you're here I hope you like homosexual stallions. If you enjoy my work and want to support me I have a Ko-Fi!
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I'm not gay, but if I was, I would totally go for Caramel.
Or Mel Gibson. Eh.
I'm really glad you made a chapter like this, even though it was separate from thew rest of the story. When dealing with stories like yours, the detail you give it, including something such as this gives an extra dimension that cannot be obtained through the other "T" rated chapters.
Damn that was hot... Have a moustache.
more plowing!!
hawt hawt hawt
3873471 agreed. this type of chapter should always be included. because it makes the story 20x more beautiful!!
i think there should have been more detail about when mac re-entered because it went from slowly entering to full on rutting without any description. still hot though. 
Well, that was really sweet. I like how shy they both were---it made their shared first time very believable.
That was a pretty bold and smart move to put this clop chapter separate from the rest of the story. I'll admit, it gave me a hard on reading a virgin experience. I was definitely nervous my first time and I'll never forget it. I'm really wanted to read Big Mac just going down on Caramel like that for a while longer and make him squirm more.
This was so worth the write my friend. Keep at it!
Such a cute couple.
This has to be one of the most beautiful sex scenes/clop scenes I've read on here. Usually they just make me giggle at how silly they seem but this one touched me....you sensitively and cleverly expressed the fear and excitement of Caramel's first time. I don't think there is an author on here who's produced a more convincing sex scene than this one...it felt so natural and gentle....
Anyway...great stuff...beautifully written just like the rest of Melting Snow...and I won't deny...I was pleasantly aroused
which is new since normally I find clop really silly 
Big fan
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I think you may have ruined other clop for me, at least, clop that's part of a larger story. This was just so well written, I'm absolutely floored! You really captured that "first time" experience perfectly!
Keep up the good work, man! You're a very talented writer with a very good way with words, and I look forward to reading more from you.
"If anythin’ hurts or feels weird or ya don’t like it, Ah’ll stop"
"It’s gonna hurt until yer used ta it… Ah’m gonna try again"
I might be the only one, but I'm not very fond of all gay sex ending with anal, like it's the holy grail and it's not "real" sex unless it happens. I think I'd have preferred Caramel's and Mac's first time to focus on other things. Oral is nice, and I'm a big fan of frot which is virtually nonexistent in erotic fiction - I don't get it, really. Jumping into anal their first time feels like it was done out of some sort of obligation.
6333703 Well it was what Caramel was mostly scared of to be honest. Also when I wrote this I was really REALLY unsure how to write sex. Mostly it was for Caramel because Caramel couldn't get over not being able to satisfy Mac and his fear that he might make Mac unhappy or realize he didn't like stallions after all. It was a step of facing his fears as well as doing something he's wanted to do for a long time.
But again I didn't know how normal sex worked back then. I'm a bit more experienced and if I were to write it again I'd probably have Caramel ask for anal and Mac tease him saying it's better to get comfortable with other stuff first. I mean logically sex for partners who are both virgins (Even though Mac has slept with women in this story, just not men) should be more about getting used to each others bodies. Honestly I might have made it have more meaning because Caramel is struggling to give Mac oral or anal or anything and he feels like he's unsatisfactory if I wrote it by my writing standards today. I always liked the idea of him almost going through with anal several times and always backing it because it hurt too much until one day him and Mac just spent three hours trying to do it.
Eh, grain of salt.
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Fair enough.