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Alexstrazsa

Joined July 2011
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Alexstrazsa is an EQD pre-reader, FiMFiction moderator, and a bunch of other things, but those aren't important!

Stories (13)

  • The Rise of Iron Mare
    Twilight Sparkle is Iron Mare.

    31,332 words · 8,780 views · 1,093 likes · 26 dislikes
  • Fluttershy's Tail
    Fluttershy's tail always drags along the ground. She finds some strange and interesting things caught in there...
    4,438 words · 4,234 views · 502 likes · 12 dislikes
  • The 63rd Rune
    Twilight and friends get turned into... stallions!?
    35,998 words · 18,824 views · 799 likes · 27 dislikes
  • Ponies and Cage
    Only one man can return the Elements of Harmony to Equestria...
    1,413 words · 987 views · 68 likes · 1 dislikes
  • The Talk
    1,093 words · 1,581 views · 182 likes · 9 dislikes
  • The Princess and the Pupil
    4,068 words · 14,106 views · 936 likes · 79 dislikes
  • A New Spell
    1,488 words · 1,018 views · 88 likes · 4 dislikes
  • A Sound in the Forest
    3,585 words · 1,572 views · 87 likes · 4 dislikes
  • The Beasts of Tartarus
    3,507 words · 407 views · 62 likes · 5 dislikes
  • The Misfile
    3,095 words · 951 views · 87 likes · 10 dislikes

Blog Posts (140)


Twilight begins to have strange dreams, filled with shadowy figures and a mysterious key. Fearing that they're connected somehow and trying to send her a message, she starts research on her troubled slumber. Her fears are only confirmed, however, when mysterious creatures begin to attack Ponyville.

First Published
20th Mar 2012
Last Modified
20th Mar 2012

Comments ( 102 )

#1 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

Interesting...

Tracking.

#2 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

Kingdom Hearts crossover? Let's track this :trixieshiftleft:

#3 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

I have been waiting for a GOOD Kingdom Hearts Crossover,  while I have seen some good artwork especially depicting the keyblade concepts for each of the mane 6 and the Royal Alicorn Sisters.  I wonder Twilight will be world hopping or sticking to Equestria?  I am definitely tracking this!

,

Ivo
#4 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

Uhhh, sounds interesting!

I usually don´t like crossovers, but...hey, it´s Kindom Hearts!

Tracking!

#5 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

Im not that big of a fan when it comes to crossovers.... But ill read it only cause its kingdom hearts

Ill read this when i can.

#6 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

I wonder who will be the "Riku" Guess I'll have to wait!

#7 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

abourt time this happens. tracking with all my might!:pinkiehappy:

#8 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

Hmm...I'm interested to see where this will go.  The Kingdom Hearts games are like crossovers within themselves, so that would make this a crossover within a crossover...

I need to go deeper...:rainbowhuh:

#9 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

I've been having a strange interest in a MLP/Kingdom Hearts crossover :pinkiehappy: I think Rainbow and Pinkie could make a hilarious duo as Donald and Goofy! Of course you don't have to follow my suggestion :raritywink:

#10 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

there's no way I'm not tracking this.  maybe I'll even dig up Kingdom Hearts again to play...it's been a while.

" I wonder who will be the "Riku" Guess I'll have to wait! "

yeah, silly question, there's already a match for that...attitude, hair and All...Trixie.

think about it...the hair/Mane is the exact same color, too

I'm more interested in who her kairi is gonna be, and who ends up in Donald and Goofy's shoes (so to speak with Donald)

#11 · 126w, 3d ago · · ·

A kingdom hearts Crossover?

*Mental images of Mane 6 vs Sephiroth*

#13 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

Tracking this. Although the opening scene is a little too reminiscent of the game intro. Not a good sign.

I shall return with comments once I actually read through the thing.

#14 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

Kingdom Hearts and Ponies

I believe my life is complete now

#15 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

I loved the gameplay of Kingdom Hearts, but the God awful Disney story line was sooooo boring. The game's story doesn't pick up until you get to the final world.

As far as this goes, I feel it resembles the game a bit too closely so it doesn't quite strike my interest.

#16 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

>>345332

I'm the same way. Except I still haven't even played Kingdom Hearts yet (I've always been to cheap to buy it, then couldn't find it)

But I picked it up this week :)

#17 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

About time Twilight got a keyblade. Honestly, out of all the KH crossovers I've read, this is the only one the freakin' Element Of Magic got a keyblade! Can you believe that!?:facehoof:

#18 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

The sad thing is...I was thinking about an MLP Kingdom Hearts crossover...with the same name.

:raritydespair::rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::applecry: Well shit.

Meh, who cares, I can't write fighting scenes for shit, so let's just hope this story is damned amazing.

#19 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

This sounds interesting. Keep up the good work.

#20 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

Magic can harm Heartless on it's own, case in point near the end of KH 1 Sora lost the Keyblade and could no longer use it his magic however was able to kill Heartless.

#21 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

I'm most certainly not the only one who had imagined Kingdom Hearts and MLP together. I am, however, afraid of butchering the story so badly that it would be moot.

#22 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

This is very well written but the pacing consistently through me off. it felt like a much larger idea necessitating gradual introduction was kind of squished into a smaller amount of words. I understand the interest to get to the universe crossover being the driving force behind the story, but plunging into it this rapidly left me feeling a little disjointed. That said, now that you've established the premise, a more gradual approach in later chapters might be idea. Either way, interested to see where the story goes - very nice to be able to read something and not have to grit my teeth even once for grammatical or spelling errors! Good use of description as well, very easy to get immersed in the presented scenery.

#23 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

Alot of potential here, tracking:pinkiehappy:

#24 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

I had this weird thought for A Kingdom Hearts crossover fic, like Sora landing in Equestria as a blank flank Earth-pony after helping free Nightmare Moon from the Darkness he gets his cutie mark, a Heart with a Keyhole, which is the keyhole for Equestria.

He would only be able to do magic in wisdom form, get aerial maneuverability in master form, while Final form gave him near Alicorn levels of both abilities.

Too damn bad I can't write worth a damn.

#25 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

Lol maybe one day ponies will be in the games!

#26 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

>>345647

This is the first one I've read where anypony except Rainbow gets a keyblade.

Why do I think Rainbow's going to be the new Riku and Fluttershy's going to be the new Kairi?

#27 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

>>345603

it's not as hard as you think till you get higher up...at least 1 and 2.

#28 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

Quite nice, although the pace is rather quick. Still, it has been liked and tracked. Keep up za work!

#29 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

Not one for most crossover but this was good. Not only because I am familiar with KH so it is easy to get an idea of how the action is happening but the writing was fantastic. If there are spelling errors, i didn't notice them. And because of that I could stay immersed and not have to waste time figuring out what you meant by a sentence or something to that effect.

Interested to see where this leads. gonna track. :moustache:

#30 · 126w, 2d ago · · ·

Oho... THIS looks interesting, though she's already at an advantage since she didn't have to chose something to give up! xD

Though, I DO have to question... Why can't she just levitate it? I'm sure you're thought about it, and have your reasons, but I'm hoping you'll be willing to share! ^^

Tracked this SO hard! Wouldn't have found it if it wasn't for your blog! I don't get it. I'm watching you, but I never got an e-mail or a notification! So... Thanks for making the blog, because I may have never found out about this! XD

Alexstrazsa
Moderator
#31 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

>>349383

You make a good point. Why doesn't she just levitate it? Honestly, I think that would be too easy. She should have to physically touch the Keyblade in order to wield it properly and channel magic through it as a bonus. Heck, only in Final Form was Sora able to use it without actually touching it.

>>346768

I don't know if there's going to be equivalents like that, but maybe. I'm still planning things out.

>>346506

Yeah, I've noticed this chapter is typically shorter than what I usually write, so that's more than likely why it feels a little rushed. In the future I'll be sure to flesh out ideas and have them flow better.

>>346379

This is... 'Keyblade Enhanced' magic.

>>345647

It seemed like the logical choice to me!

>>345332

Eh... I wouldn't expect too many parallels. I'd like a more original story, so if I start throwing in characters to match Riku and Kairi it might start feeling too close to the game. With this crossover, I'm mainly going for 'elements' of the game, such as the Keyblade, Heartless, Keyholes, Forms, and the idea of 'friendship' being a very deciding factor. Some parts from the game will definitely not be present, but in the end that shouldn't affect the quality of the story.

#32 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

>>349926

Still magic on it's own can kill Heartless.

Also little fact on Final Form: In Final From Sora utilizes the full Power of Light that he and Roxas wield within their bodies and hearts,Thus giving Sora the ability to wiled two Keyblade without touching them with his power over Light.

#33 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

>>349926

at least that's cleared up.  some of us like to speculate :P

Alexstrazsa
Moderator
#34 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

>>350024

Well... not in this fic. Sorry! Also, interesting fact about Final Form there. I'll have to play through the games again.

#35 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

>>350046

I replay the games when I'm bord of waiting for the next one. I need to get a PSP and a 3DS so I can play BBS and Dream Drop Distance(once it comes out of corse).

#36 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

Also are you planning on including Nobodies? Unversed?

Utilizing the Drive Form system with the mane 6 also seems like an interesting option.

All in all, tracked, and looking forward to updates.

#37 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

>>349926 Well... Yes, I will concede that, BUT! I would like to bring up the point (JUST for the sake of argument, because I LOVE to argue! XD) Sora never had any magic until he got the Keyblade! The Keyblade is what GAVE him magic to begin with, while Twilight has hers innately, and is BOOSTED through the Keyblade! So... inyourface! XD

(Heck, you could even use that as a plot-device in the future! xD Levitating it would increase her Attack speed, while gripping it would increase her Magic, ect. Just something that you could POTENTIALLY mess with. Otherwise, I GUESS I'll except your reason, even if it seems a tad flimsy. xD *Trollface* )

~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria

p.s. I don't REALLY expect anything I say to actually change anything you've decided. I just love to argue, especially with something so flexible like that! XD Thanks for taking the time to argue back/explain why you made the choice you did. Appreciate understanding your logic! :moustache:

#38 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

>>350091

Just have to say something (insert proper emoticon here) as final form grants full power of the keyblade to wield them without actually touching them, and hover on the ground of course. Then master form must give only half of keyblades power, because sora can levitate only other keyblade in front of him:rainbowhuh:

Just some weird logic of mine:twilightsheepish:

#39 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

Tracking :) Anything combining Kingdom Hearts with MLP is worth looking at.

#40 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

Twilight seems a bit too powerful... but then again something may happen to strip her of her natural unicorn magic, like the end of the world.

Another thing catches my eye, Sora had help from a different world, so who is going to help Twilight?

#41 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

I smell a story with potential...

Tracking for further evaluation.

#42 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

in the game sora most likely chous the sword so danald and goofy made up fore the fact that sora is not so good at magic and has not the best defance.So Twi need somepony to make up fore her weaknesses, just sayen...:eeyup:

p.s. i know i have bad spelling so don't point it out:facehoof:

#43 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

If this is a crossover with Kingdom Hearts, does that finally mean interactions with the infamous Disney Character ? :pinkiehappy:

Oh please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like tis one. :twilightsmile:

#44 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

Is Twi going to be the only one to wield a keyblade?

As in the later games, it turn out that... uh... Sora wasn't the only one able to wield keyblades.

I really hope the others get to be able to wield a keyblade each in turn!

Fury of the Tempest is tracking this story.

#45 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

kingdoom heart's crossover.....traking this

#46 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

At first I was like:ajbemused:

Then I was like :derpyderp2:

Now I'm like:scootangel:

#47 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

I will point out that Master Form also had a levitating Keyblade.  Sora held one keyblade, and levitated the other.

#48 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

>>350318

Final Form allows Sora to utilize the full power of his keyblade witch is light.

Also Hi again castform5 have you tried making sea salt Ice Cream yet?

#49 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

Haven't seen a real good KH crossover yet.

This one looks promising, but not positive yet.

Consider me tracked

Cynewulf
Story Approver
#50 · 126w, 1d ago · · ·

Ooooh! I haven't seen one of these yet on here! Those games are some of my favorites and I love them dearly. I liked the story. :3

And I like YOUR story so far! As far as the pacing mentioned by others... I'm not sure I see that.Rushed insofar as the whole OMGihaveakeybladenow thing goes, yeah, that all sort of happens in a rush. But I'm not sure if that's all that bad, or how much good stretching that out would do. Hm... I dunno though.

Besides that, I'm excited to see what you do with this, and what you borrow and don't borrow from the games. :)

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