Pinkie Pie is not having a good time anymore. The ponies who make her life joyful have put Pinkie Pie in a very bad emotional state, now they need to try to get her out of it.
Pinkie Pie is not having a good time anymore. The ponies who make her life joyful have put Pinkie Pie in a very bad emotional state, now they need to try to get her out of it.
Why aren't there any spaces after punctuation? I find this unusual. (Not the story)
Sorry, I can fix that.
It's a very nice story overall. The only concern I have is the punctuation... But the story itself is great!
3861424 Thank you. I will get around to fixing the errors....eventually.
Must have Moar! sequel plz
Thank you for the idea, I tossed it around for a while, but decided my time was better spent with other projects.
3892886 bbut awwwwww