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Formerly The Conversion Bureau: A New Age, A New Life

In the year 2080, Humanity sits at a crossroads. Technological innovations have advanced to the point to where most mundane tasks can be accomplished by machines, as well as the nano-scale manufacture of most materials. However, the greed of a few and the lingering ecological devastation to get to said point leaves humanity on the precipice of nothing short of a society-ending cataclysm.

Seeing this, visitors from another world wish to aid Humanity along this crossroad. Unfortunately, due to circumstances beyond any's control, there is no recourse for moving any human off-world, so any disaster could potentially overwhelm any assistance Equestria can render.

Actually... there is one option those of Earth have if they wish to leave. Though is it an option that anyone would even accept existing, let alone take advantage of?

And what happens when an ancient entity sees said option as the first step in correcting a grave error she had committed so many eons ago?

ARC I: A New Beginning (Chapters 1 - 4) -- Introduces the feature characters of Part I for the most part.
ARC II: A New (Old) Magic (Chapters 5-14) -- The Conversions of the Four Conduits and their trails in re-igniting Terran Magic.
ARC III: A New Movement (Chapters 15+) -- Magic is unsealed on Earth, and the various extra-governmental groups begin to form.

General Story Notes:

1) This is a general rewrite of The Conversion Bureau: A New Age, A New Life. While the general plot outline will (hopefully) remain the same; specific interactions and characterizations will be clarified, modified, or outright reworked in order, to I feel, better facilitate my storytelling.

2) Once the original chapters (which can be downloaded from here as an EPUB or as a PDF ) are done being rewritten, Part II will be merged into this story space and that second one will be formally deleted.

3) If you are so inclined, I've also preserved all the original comments on the story as they were posted immediately before initial chapter deletion (viewable here)

4) While the general tone of the story is general flavors of adventure, there are some long phases of slice of life and world building. Because for whatever reason the Administration decided that Slice of Life and Adventure are mutually exclusive tagging-wise.

5) The Equestria (and the wider world of Equestria which I term Equus) is a heavily modified Equestria from the end of Season 2. Therefore consider it an Alternate Universe that runs mostly parallel with canon from S1 and S2; though I always reserve the right to use any bits from S3 or the ongoing S4.

6) Yes this is still a TCB story, but I feel that the grouping, my own statements, and the plot itself would kinda beat that into people's heads, so including it the title was just further redundancy.

WARNING To New Readers: Any canon character used is subject to MY Personal interpretation of that character. If you believe this is a problem in any specific scene or in general, do not be afraid to ask how or why I am using a character a certain way. I actually like the discussions in these regards.

( Original Vector art for the Elements of Harmony )

Chapters (42)
Comments ( 42 )

edited: Nevermind. Just read older post about what is gonna happen.

Not a fan of the name 'Midori Hana'. Partly because, as a near-native speaker, I am 90% sure it's meant to be read 'Midori-Bana', and 10% sure that both kanji characters have alternate readings that are meant to be used when the characters are paired. But mostly because it just feels really clumsy, and gratuitous.

Ponyville: a supposedly quiet, nondescript town that lay near the center of Equestria.

:rainbowlaugh:

Huh... Reading through this and seeing that the voice is identified as female... Would that be Gaea?

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Not to overtly spoil those who hadn't read but yes... though she didn't pick that name for herself... that's why she refers to herself as a Keeper or some other generic term like that to our principals for right now.

I also have plans for more Immortals, both incarnate and 'spirit', but that will be more for part two of the story after I finish the rewritten chapters.

4932681 I think I remember making that guess when I got to that point before the rewrite.

Is this an Evil Celestia or a Luna's a Prick fanfic?

And if I didn’t know how, I wouldn’t know where to start looking.

I think that should be "And if I did know how".

you do know that we still use the four elements. We just call them Solid,liquid,gas, energy. Instead of earth,water,air,fire.

5171231 Ehh, I consider them different in my head. It is an elemental concept of the universe but they aren't the elemental building blocks of matter.

I know the lyrics to that song. Daisy...Daisy.. :twilightblush:

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repeating again, consider re-wording
you are, you're
your mother, your
'persons'
former?
prepared
ridged
snapped
he
no apostrophe
to

:rainbowhuh:

5471037 oh dear, when you import from GDocs it takes the comments too, without any context... I want to know how I let that slip...

I still find it funny that the new magitech computer was so overpowered that the AI running on it actually became sapient due to evolving so fast.

So a zebra version of Anazi the spider god and trickster of Africa. Makes sense. And all AD&D roleplayers know Tiamat

“Good news, everyone!” Hayato called out in loud and gregarious accented English.

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That link of the fish is this here

That world is frightening. And to think that, if we don't do something, it might actually become a reality.

So unicorn is the tribe you decided to double-up in the Conduit Four, huh?

Tick-tock goes the clock... I fear time is not on their side.

You still have my attention. Glad to see you haven't abandoned story. :3

I imagine that while he was undergoing his trial, Celestia and Luna must have discussed what they would say and then practiced.

ninja gaiden = ninja sidestory?!?
math says that if 1 length = 1/2 meter then 1 length^2=1/4 m^2 this picture might help
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http://i.imgur.com/Qkognw1.png

Ok, these vouchers are valid, so just go over to the currency window to collect, and here is your map of Dural-ga-Jafid."

there is an extra space between your and map

He ran his goggles underneath a faucet in the , and thought to himself about his near-term plans

in the ...? sink? bathroom?

A power heralded by a black sky. Not sure where exactly I remember that from, but I believe it’s starting to confirm my of the exact nature of that Magic on the other side…

confirm my ...? suspicions?

Rosethorn said, voice a lot more chipper when she was now more sure that Spike would accept her as a travelling partner for his own sake and not just because Celestia arranged it.

i would say "sounding more chipper now she was certain that spike accepted her as a " or something similar

He looked at the digital clock, saying roughly 6 AM, and figured it was close enough to take to wake up with Earth’s sun.

should this be here?

“THIS! Just another plain, unremarkable human; stuck in a group home because
no one has the money to live on the big hills RIGHT IN FRONT OF THEIR FACES!” she shouted, as her frustration had risen to a palpable level.

one paragraph

Clair added, angry that they'd have to start asserting themselves more forcefully.

misspelled her name either here or the otherplaces

“That day was the day that almost sent this world is to an unpredictable spiral of chaos, Queen of Envy.

shouldn't there be a you between these words and replace is to with into

Nice to see ya post again. :D

The Society was doomed to fall the moment Equus's connection with Terra was re-established.

I typed it in google to search for a possible dural story, since I find her interessting lately, she is from Virtual fighter, but I got to know her from something else.

Oh yes my question, is this a story about Dural?

I wonder if someone in the story will find some way to get humans across the aurora without changing their race. It'd be nice to see that.

I can not stand this story. I find both sides to be evil in their own way. The preservation of humanity side is a bunch of self entitled rich men while the pony side is no better as no matter how they spin it they have been slowly leading humanity into extinction.

new Ponies to stumble while walking or stammer while talking, but they seemed to be

The sentence is cut off.

I get the message but couldn't you do the visions of the main 6 in one go? It just feels kinda repetitive.

i know this is a old chapter but i just have to say that Cosmo Canyon provided the perfect back drop music to this chapter.

would have been funnier to turn Storm into a little black piglet...

I really hope this continues.

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