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Soldiers in Equestria

When Diamond Dogs unearth the ancient and powerful Black Gem, they use it to take over the Equestrian Kingdom. Princess Celestia sends for help, from another dimension.

Chapters (2)

Chapter 1: The Black Gem · 19th Oct 2011 · 2,126 words
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Chapter 2: The Invasion · 19th Oct 2011 · 2,338 words
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Foasedf

Foasedf #1 · Oct 19th, 2011 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Invasion ·

Just read chapter 1 and I think it's pretty darn good.

Kenx41

Kenx41 #2 · Oct 19th, 2011 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Invasion ·

Ive read the first 2 chapters and i have to say this is really well done the pace is perfect the writing style is great and the plot it awsome so keep the chapters comming

bendelsohn

bendelsohn #3 · Oct 19th, 2011 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Invasion ·

I have to say, this is pretty good. Some of the things that characters say sound a bit off, but mostly you did a good job with this one.

Kenx41

Kenx41 #4 · Dec 15th, 2011 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Invasion ·

i hope you continue this story because so far this story is giving out the smell of a rotting carcass please freshen up the update list with a new chapter so this story can be alive again because i want to see this story continue