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Regidar


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Part one of the Yearbook

Fluttershy never thought of herself as an adventurer, but when opportunity arises, she sets out to the frozen north— the land of Arctica. This journey must be undertaken without her friends, but that doesn't mean they can't help her along a little on the way.

Still, Fluttershy has no idea what strange things lurk in the north...

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I wanted to create something beautiful
so
here it begins

3839825

Oh God. Here we go. Regidar's being deep and meaningful again!

3839903 >that link
or you could not


3839896 I don't think that's necessarily tacked on with being beautiful

3839825

I wanted to create something beautiful

That will be a first :trollestia:

3839907 I fixed that shit like Bob the Mothafuckin' Builder.

I gain a little more respect for you every time you get deep and sentimental on us.:ajsmug:

Lets see you stick with it.

You've yet to finish Hospice.

~Skeeter The Lurker

That's what you will find Fluttershy. That's what.

3839972 writing 10k chapters takes time :trixieshiftleft:

3840000

Ah. the parasprite's excuse...

Still, at least tell me you've a good bit done for this one.

~Skeeter The Lurker

An adventure fic from Regidar?
Ermhagerd.

I likes it. I have no idea where this is going but I'll stick with it.

Casting gaze sideways - Missed a word.
yielded the sales, - 'sails' perhaps.
the cold planes of Arctica. - 'plains'
blinding white planes lay to her southwest - and again.
and gazing at them in stunned beauty. - 'stunned awe' would be better.
wings were covered in a small frost, - 'light frost' would fit better.
and saw on the plane before her a small wooden cabin - 'plain'

I am intrigued as to where you can take this... Carry on.

3840430 fixed
thanks nigga

Today is the last day of my voyage on the Dawn Treader.

... nice reference, there.

Fluttershy had set off to begin her voyage on the Dawn Treader.

Yes, I got it. :derpytongue2:

Rarity, being the element of generosity that she was, had gone all out when she had heard that Fluttershy was heading off to the frozen plains of the arctic. The parka, which the pegasus now held in her hooves, was a pristine snow white for camouflage, and was coated with the softest, most insulating wool-silk hybrid Rarity could weave. Pockets and zippers lined the outside, but they were skillfully woven and sewn into the warm coat so that one could hardly tell they were even there. There were even pockets for her wings to slide into! Matching stockings and snowshoes lay at the bottom of the trunk, just waiting for Fluttershy to put them on.

This is great description. I can actually imagine Fluttershy wearing this, and it's adorable. This needs to be fanart (by someone who can actually art, unlike me).


This is just what stuck out to me the most.
Unfortunately, I'm not really captured by the chapter. There's good description and exposition, and it flows pretty well, but not much happens.

Sorry.:unsuresweetie:

3840576 well, I feared that'd happen, but it's a setup for a greater adventure to come.
thank you for the praise anyway, though

Well my birthday is on January, so maybe I should read this...

I was supposed to be making cover art, but I started reading this instead. No regrets yet.
I've kinda felt like reading a good adventure story lately, and this looks to be right up my proverbial alley. So far, so good. I'll be keeping an eye on this, for sure.

3840820 enjoy, the next parts will both be out before January is over

3839825

I liked it, if that matters. The reindeer being all mysterious as hell was a nice touch. Is she actually foretold?

You done good. Why are there no gently smiling Flutterfaces? :pinkiesmile:

This actually reminds me of Austraeoh in set up and tone. This is most assuredly a good thing.
I expect great things from this. Keep 'em coming.

Sounds like a promising start. I like the amount of detail you put into this one. Your writing is improving, young Regidar.

This story continues to intrigue me. Elements are being set up, it seems. The description in this is great, too; not too much to be distracting, but enough to make the scene perfectly clear. The imagery is, well, beautiful. I can really visualize the whole snowy landscape the was its described. Damn, this story paints a good picture.
As a side note, the soundtrack that accompanies this story is some wonderful stuff.

Ok.

I'm impressed. You put out another chapter.

And, it's still a damn good tale so far.

Lets see you go a third chapter.

~Skeeter The Lurker

This was amazing.

If you don't continue this, I am going to slit your throat and drink the blood as fine wine.

... Damn. Now I need to go have some fine wine.

You stupid bitch, you.

Alright, man

Great chapter, but the super-intense part where she lit the fire seemed way out lf pace with the story. The plot is supposed to be a wide bell curve, but the graph shot up like a crossbow and may or may not have stabbed me right in the schrotum.

Again, good chapter. I would review some more, but I need to go find some bandages and strong painkillers.

A story in which the only tag is adventure.

That's my story.:pinkiehappy:

And I finally get around to answering this shit.

3851765 The idea of these series is going to mostly be revolving around a thick, layered ambience of imagery and (you guessed it) nature. It's something I love to evoke in my writing, so I try to do so as much as possible.


3851931 Told you so. Expect a new chapter VERY soon.


3888728 your scrotum is the least important part of your body anyway
not to all men
just your body specifically

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...He says two months later...

I kid. I have faith.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Now you have my attention...

Thus ends part one of the Yearbook. I really hope that more parts do indeed come along, because that was just so enjoyable to read. I loved the imagery, along with the setting. The character is perfect for it, too. She knows when to just be quiet and enjoy the beauty of the world for what it is. Reading this just gave me the fuzzies, for lack of a better term. I just feel good. I hope you do another in the same vein, not just because the style is so pleasant, but also because that ending just screams for expansion. Regardless of whether this gets a sequel (whether direct or spiritual), I loved this. Nice work.

Wait, that's it?
B-but, Regi-sama, I need more! :fluttercry: Who is the Other? Why was Flutters sent to the North Pole to relax? I NEED ANSWERS! :raritydespair:

This was beautiful, breath-taking, and almost intense at the end there. Who is The Other? What is the purpose for Fluttershy's visit? Wow, Regi, this is honestly one of your greats, it's just so.... nice. Can't wait to see more! :pinkiehappy:

Hello, this fic is touching at a Fluttershy I never knew existed. I have to say that I absolutely love it! :twilightsmile: :heart:

Of course, I occasionally find a mistake or two that annoys me while I read. Although the annoyance is only slight, I still feel the need to point them out. :trixieshiftleft:
Here they are!

As they little group continued, they passed ravines, large ice boulders, small little groves of arctic pine trees, and huddled groups of penguins.

this one was a few simple typos, nothing major.

Sure, deer all over the lands of Eqqus were known for being cryptic, superstitious, and shamanistic, but something in the tones of these reindeer when they talked about “The Other”...

The ending is a fragment, so I'd suggest adding something like "made her feel uneasy" at the end. (If this is foreshadowing, then I see the purpose of the abrupt ending but it's still a sentence fragment)

Okay, now with all my dubious corrections done I can actually talk about the story.
It was a good read, and I am liking the concept so far! An adventurous side of Fluttershy adds a certain charm to her :twilightsmile:

5692428 I'm glad you like the story! The fragment was intentional, but I'll go and fix the other typo.

The penguinreached its tiny flippers up and hugged her cheek.

Forgot a space there.

6058518 fixed, thank you

“A narwhale?”

Is this intentional or merely a misspelling of 'narwhal'?

Is this based off something...?

6100355 No, why do you ask?

6100364

I noticed the youtube video and the fact that the cover art has a human outline. You also declared this a project which got me thinking:

a) you have some of the plot planned out

b) based it off something you like and therefore have framework

c) you have everything planned out

d) oh crap I put this in the wrong book shelf 'cause I was reading this when I was sleep deprived.

6100381 well, it is based on Sleeping At Last's Yearbook EP's, which are 12 EP's of three songs, one for each month

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