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Spitfire and Soarin attend the royal wedding of Princess Cadence and Shining armor, but are forced to fly for their lives when Queen Chrysalis and her changelings attack the city. As Canterlot suffers around them, two athletes used to being at the top of their game are faced with certain defeat, and must choose to fight or flee.

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The flip-flopping in tense and perspective made this piece a bit confusing, but it was a pretty solid effort. I enjoy the Soarin x Spitfire pairing fics.

Thanks for the input!
Now that I have some distance from writing it, I can see the tense and pacing problems. I'll have to take some more time and hit this with a rewrite hammer.

Update: I did that thing with the hammer.