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Derpy resolves to better focus on her mailmare duties after her latest performance review.

First Published
22nd Jan 2014
Last Modified
22nd Jan 2014
#2 · 46w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Cute

#3 · 46w, 6d ago · · ·

Just read the story and loved it!

Please tell me this isn't a one shot!

#4 · 46w, 6d ago · · ·

>>3855658

...It's a one shot. (Sorry!)

But thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

#5 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·

>>3856563

You bastard! You killed my day

#6 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·

you tease i love you want more

#7 · 46w, 2d ago · 4 · ·

The first 95% was amazing! Then I figured how this was going to end... Such an great setup that just died on me. I'm with Zakari on this one. The story needs an epilogue or something cause leaving it like that just kills. It's still an awesome stand alone, I'm just greedy.

#8 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·

this was awesome there's not enough human x derpy fanfictions out there

#9 · 46w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

I had no problem with where it ended, though the denouement felt a little forced.

#10 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·

Sigh, I need some closure, need me that epilogue. Was really good, but wanted some actual feelings from the human, ditzy deserves for someone to love her for who she is. The scene would be so emotiona!

#11 · 45w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

This deserves more likes. And a sequel. :twilightsmile:

#12 · 45w, 6d ago · 4 · ·

I see you like the "leave them wanting more" tactic, very clever. I like this.

#13 · 42w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!

#14 · 42w, 2h ago · 2 · ·

Guh! The...cutness....it's to.....MUCH!!

#15 · 41w, 4d ago · 3 · ·

omg omg omg

not many derpy and human fics around this is pure gold. very well written and my feels! MY FEELS!

love how you end all of your stories. you always end your stories in such a manner that seem almost like a bed time story or something. its like philosophical in a way. absolutely love your writing style.

please sequel?

#16 · 40w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

Hahahahaha....:rainbowlaugh:

This story really punched me in Appendix, my re-purposed "feels" organ. :twilightoops:

Very good read.:scootangel:

#17 · 40w, 3d ago · 7 · ·

“I know what I must do.”

Without hesitation, she takes to the air once more, positions herself a good distance away from the nearest window, and takes aim with her bubble-covered rump.

I CAME IN LIKE A WREEEEEEEEECKING BAAAAAALLL!!!!

#18 · 39w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

I'm very glad I found this story, it just made my day so much better!

#19 · 37w, 2d ago · 1 · ·

Very sweet.

#20 · 36w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

daww

#21 · 33w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

So cute!

#22 · 24w, 2d ago · 3 · 1 ·

It was the best fiction I have ever read.

I'm literally crying right now...

#23 · 22w, 1d ago · 3 · ·

this was amazing. i'd love to see another chapter of this or maybe a sequel but i feel like that might ruin what we have here! :applecry: i just don't know what would be better!

#24 · 17w, 6d ago · · ·

Absolutely adorable, just like Derpy herself!  :derpytongue2:

#25 · 9w, 2d ago · · ·

A broken lamp is one thing, how is she gonna explain the window?

"Wait, why is the window all busted up?"

"An exit! I was building you an emergency exit! Can never have too many of those, right?":derpytongue2:

#27 · 4w, 2h ago · · ·

Very nice.

Suggestion:

The little street, with its modest homes built in the traditional Ponyville style, is empty during this time of day, when most everyone is at school or work.

almost everyone

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