Derpy resolves to better focus on her mailmare duties after her latest performance review.
Just some random guy. [Retired]
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Cute
Just read the story and loved it!
Please tell me this isn't a one shot!
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...It's a one shot. (Sorry!)
But thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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You bastard! You killed my day
you tease i love you want more
The first 95% was amazing! Then I figured how this was going to end... Such an great setup that just died on me. I'm with Zakari on this one. The story needs an epilogue or something cause leaving it like that just kills. It's still an awesome stand alone, I'm just greedy.
this was awesome there's not enough human x derpy fanfictions out there
I had no problem with where it ended, though the denouement felt a little forced.
Sigh, I need some closure, need me that epilogue. Was really good, but wanted some actual feelings from the human, ditzy deserves for someone to love her for who she is. The scene would be so emotiona!
This deserves more likes. And a sequel.
I see you like the "leave them wanting more" tactic, very clever. I like this.
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!
Guh! The...cutness....it's to.....MUCH!!
omg omg omg
not many derpy and human fics around this is pure gold. very well written and my feels! MY FEELS!
love how you end all of your stories. you always end your stories in such a manner that seem almost like a bed time story or something. its like philosophical in a way. absolutely love your writing style.
please sequel?
Hahahahaha....
This story really punched me in Appendix, my re-purposed "feels" organ.
Very good read.
I CAME IN LIKE A WREEEEEEEEECKING BAAAAAALLL!!!!
I'm very glad I found this story, it just made my day so much better!
Very sweet.
daww
So cute!
It was the best fiction I have ever read.
I'm literally crying right now...
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this was amazing. i'd love to see another chapter of this or maybe a sequel but i feel like that might ruin what we have here! i just don't know what would be better!
Absolutely adorable, just like Derpy herself!
A broken lamp is one thing, how is she gonna explain the window?
"Wait, why is the window all busted up?"
"An exit! I was building you an emergency exit! Can never have too many of those, right?"
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i love it man
Very nice.
Suggestion:
almost everyone
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Isn't 'most every_____' a typical poetic device?
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http://www.dailywritingtips.com/most-vs-almost/
Always makes my hnnggger go hnngg.
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5788612 CUTENESS! Soowwy, fow me howwibre engrissh!
5273196 AGREEEEEED
Aw jeez, falling into dawwwabetic coma... soo cuuuute!
Before reading the story, I couldn't for the life of me figure out how that picture could possibly relate to the story! XD Now I see. Well done! :3
This was... so...
*clutches chest*
HNNNNGGGGGGGG!!!
*collapses dead*
Why are you just so good? Are there any horse words you have written that aren't just gold?
And now I've read every one of your stories. Damn I wish you hadn't retired, your works are all beautiful.
Okay... I need to make a portal to Equestria. Derpy needs a human who will love her unconditionally. I would happily be that Human.
Fuck, that was cute. <.<
Where was this thick slice of lovely when i was looking for Derpy stuff? Why wasn't it at the top? A travesty!
Nice read.
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I NEVER HIT SO HAAAAAAAARD IN MAAAAAAIIIL!!!!
Oh, I HATE those!
My favourite Anon x Derpy fic, it was funny cute and left me wanting more.
Omg that was the most adorable story I've read yet. Derpy is so precious
That was a great derpy x anon fanfic I hope there be a sequel